Comments For Verdant
MissM69 (Signed) on Jun 07, 2008 11:22 pm (Chapter 7)

served him right for laughing shame on you Justin >:(

great update yet again can't wait for the next :) 



Author's Response: haha true, he deserved it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


jacs12031984 (Signed) on Jun 07, 2008 11:06 pm (Chapter 7)
love it update soon

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!


jacs12031984 (Signed) on Jun 07, 2008 11:06 pm (Chapter 7)
love it update soon

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it :)


DaniD (Signed) on Jun 07, 2008 10:24 pm (Chapter 7)

Yipee! SO happy to see an update..It would be tragic if you didn't finish this story.

 What the heck is wrong with sweet little Brady! :( I fee so sad for Chloe..He's her one good thing in her life. He needs a good male role model in his life. I would say, "Hey! Justin could fit the bill."...but really..not so much. The boy needs to clean up his act a bit.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I was nervous about the story at first but I've been getting so many amazing reviews I couldn't stop writing! Thanks again, I'm glad you like it!


MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 07, 2008 10:20 pm (Chapter 7)
Hmph. He got what he deserved for laughing. Please update soon.

Author's Response: lol true story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


sarah1988 (Signed) on Jun 02, 2008 04:32 pm (Chapter 6)
awww this is a nice story...

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :)


Gigi (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 06:40 pm (Chapter 5)
I hope nobody got a pic of them.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 01:42 pm (Chapter 6)
awww....how cute!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)


misslonelyhearts (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 08:40 am (Chapter 6)
im really excited to see where their relationship goes! update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! 


alimera (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 08:17 am (Chapter 6)
Sh'es got a dress...and she's got a booty date with him too! I wish he'd stop meeting her at the club and actually care for her and Brady outside that place--sorry, got ahead of myself. Please update again soon!

Author's Response: lol We'll see where it goes :) Thanks for reading!


Vessy (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 04:08 am (Chapter 6)
amazing, I love this story so much! can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it :)


MochaB (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 03:13 am (Chapter 6)
haha. this story is so interesting. i really, really like it. i can't wait to find out more about Chloe and Justin, especially his split personalities. hope you update soon. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I'll try to update soon :)


DaniD (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 02:04 am (Chapter 6)

She seems so confused with Justin. I don't blame her either. They meet while she's stripping...and he pays her to "preform" for him..and even once to have sex with him. He even seems insulting at first...Then....

He takes her and her son for Pizza..asks her to an award ceremony..offers his MOTHER to babysit..takes her to buy a VERY expensisve dress. (I assume)

Now he wants to see her back at the strip club?! I assume he wants to perv on her again. LOL 

Question..What is Justin doing? What is he looking for from her? It's the interaction with her son that has me confused. It's crossing a line. WOW..long review for me..but this story is so great it deserves it.
Can't wait for more :D



Author's Response: Wow... Thanks so much for the review!  Justin seems to be confusing everyone. I hope I can answer your questions soon! :) Thanks again!


d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 12:34 am (Chapter 6)
Hmmm, I'm not sure how to take any of this or the attraction Justin has towards Chloe. To me it's a little off that he'd be so attached to her like that from just going to that club. Then again, he's got issues so I wouldn't be surprised if they fell for each other. Well, that was a great update and Brady really is a cutie. Update soon.

Author's Response: Yes, Justin does have some issues so who knows. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)


jacs12031984 (Signed) on Jun 01, 2008 12:01 am (Chapter 6)
love it update soon

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!




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