Comments For Verdant
DaniD (Signed) on May 19, 2008 11:19 pm (Chapter 4)
Wow..This story is addictive..and it's only 4 chapters in! Your OC character is in quite the moral delima..and I'd say she's losing ground each chapter. Can't blame or judge her. She's a single Mom trying to make ends meat..and come on! It's Justin Freakin' Timberlake! LOL
Seems like Justn is obsessed with "Chloe". I can't wait to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really glad you're liking it. I was really worried about this story haha. Thanks for reading!
Seems like Justn is obsessed with "Chloe". I can't wait to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really glad you're liking it. I was really worried about this story haha. Thanks for reading!
d_simplicity (Signed) on May 07, 2008 02:34 pm (Chapter 3)
Well, I read all three chaps so far and Damn! LOL this is different and edgy but I like it a lot and though Justin is a major asshole, I think he's becoming attached to Chloe. Maybe infatuated or obsessed? That could be dangerous esp if he starts trying to get at her outside the club. Hmmm...I'm wondering why he's even doing this with her...why he comes in and only asks for her. Oh and Brady is the cutest thing! hehe. Can't wait for more. Update soon.
Author's Response: Hmm... obsessed with Chloe? Interesting... haha Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it :)
Author's Response: Hmm... obsessed with Chloe? Interesting... haha Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it :)
xKiKix (Signed) on May 07, 2008 01:34 pm (Chapter 3)
yay chloe... she's standing her ground... but i cant wait for more... lol.... good chapter!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess she is to some extent lol Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess she is to some extent lol Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Vessy (Signed) on May 07, 2008 05:42 am (Chapter 3)
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
SJane (Signed) on May 07, 2008 03:44 am (Chapter 3)
lol about time that girl had some control
Author's Response: Yeah I think Chloe has more control over the situation than she knows. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah I think Chloe has more control over the situation than she knows. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
LuLu (Signed) on May 06, 2008 11:22 pm (Chapter 3)
I think someone is getting a little attached. Chloe better be careful he might start making more appearances in her life outside of the club. Like showing up at her house. I don't think it would be too hard for him to get personal information on her - ie. an address.
Brady is too adorable. I glad Chloe has a son who's so loving and gives her happiness.
I'm seriously getting hooked on this story. More soon please!
Author's Response: It does seem like Justin is getting a little attached... we'll have to see how that turns out :) And Chloe is really lucky to have Brady... thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Brady is too adorable. I glad Chloe has a son who's so loving and gives her happiness.
I'm seriously getting hooked on this story. More soon please!
Author's Response: It does seem like Justin is getting a little attached... we'll have to see how that turns out :) And Chloe is really lucky to have Brady... thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
justinaham (Signed) on May 06, 2008 10:47 pm (Chapter 3)
I would let him fuck me for free tbqh
Author's Response: haha very true... thanks!
Author's Response: haha very true... thanks!
jacs12031984 (Signed) on May 06, 2008 09:45 pm (Chapter 3)
OMG I am loving it!!! Update soon please
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it :)
MissM69 (Signed) on May 06, 2008 09:12 pm (Chapter 3)
Author's Response: haha yes, it's about time :) Thanks for the review!
oh yeah girl is time to take charge and show him who's really in control :D
Author's Response: haha yes, it's about time :) Thanks for the review!
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 06, 2008 09:06 pm (Chapter 3)
lol...chloe got some balls(in her mouth) but she finally told him no!
Author's Response: hahaha She sure does ;) Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: hahaha She sure does ;) Thanks for the review!
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Apr 29, 2008 04:06 pm (Chapter 2)
oh my god love it update soon please
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
milf15 (Signed) on Apr 29, 2008 09:49 am (Chapter 2)
I can see him keep coming back for more to mess with Chloe. Great story! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
SJane (Signed) on Apr 29, 2008 04:05 am (Chapter 2)
wow poor girl. great update girl, it's different to anything written nowadays
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it :)
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it :)
xKiKix (Signed) on Apr 29, 2008 12:15 am (Chapter 2)
ooooohhh... hopefully chloe will get to have more HOT encounters with justin again... lol... that was hot keep updating soon...
Author's Response: haha thanks!
Author's Response: haha thanks!
