Comments For Water, Water Everywhere
MissTasha (Signed) on May 31, 2008 08:36 pm (Age Aint Nothing but a Number)
No sex? *is sad* I'm kind of mad that he hurt her feeling even though I know he has know idea what he did wrong. LOL. Please update soon.
rev0586 (Signed) on May 31, 2008 08:06 pm (Age Aint Nothing but a Number)
just hot I luv how they keep "teasing" each other, as u as well as the writer by making us believe of THIS IS IT!!! lol...
Wow I so did not think that JT was going to say that!, I thought he was akward b/c of the whole huggging thing and shared much info or somethin like that... Well Nik outburt well it wasnt overdone b/c she is 17 and how dare JT assume that shes crushin onhim (well she is ) but u noe what i mean... And to Kiki/Nik I wana c that furry unleash speacially on JT haha.... thanks 4 da quick update!!!
Wow I so did not think that JT was going to say that!, I thought he was akward b/c of the whole huggging thing and shared much info or somethin like that... Well Nik outburt well it wasnt overdone b/c she is 17 and how dare JT assume that shes crushin onhim (well she is ) but u noe what i mean... And to Kiki/Nik I wana c that furry unleash speacially on JT haha.... thanks 4 da quick update!!!
SexualCoco (Signed) on May 31, 2008 07:30 pm (Age Aint Nothing but a Number)
Oh lord...haha. Now I can't wait to see what he says in response to that outburst she just had. Great update, can't wait to read more!
just a girl (Signed) on May 31, 2008 07:28 pm (Age Aint Nothing but a Number)
Just stopping by to say you're work is great and I cant wait to see what she is up to!
a_nonymous (Signed) on May 31, 2008 06:50 pm (Age Aint Nothing but a Number)
Hell hath no fury like a KiKi scorned.
LMAO! I *heart* this story sooooo much! Seriously.
LMAO! I *heart* this story sooooo much! Seriously.
WastedHeadspace (Signed) on May 26, 2008 03:24 pm (Torn in Two)
I'm really enjoying this story! At first I was kind of doubtful about the whole disguise thing but you've convinced me! Can't wait for more :)
Reshaye (Signed) on May 23, 2008 12:17 am (Torn in Two)
This is my favorite story online right now and trust me I read alot! Love the storyline...love the characters. You really know how to end a chapter leaving the reader wanting more. I'm looking forward to the next update. All I've got to say is keep doing what you're doing....you are a natural writer and you never know where it might take you in the future. You're a badass, fo sheezy!
classicbeauty (Signed) on May 23, 2008 12:07 am (Torn in Two)
Girl you have a great imagation, because i promise you some of the big brother things justin does so my brother. homemade coco, always buggin you and big head! i so could hear him callin me that, or visa versa.
this is a huge dilemma here, i thought he figure it out by now, but i guess not. i love the whole idea, but i cant help but wonder if while shes fucking him can she see him flashbacks of earlier when he was all big bro on her. eww
cants wait for more, like i need some by saturday at the latest!
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your much derseved stars
Dani
P.S. Thank you for the update, i read it before i went shopping. kept a huge smile on my face while i spent way more money then i planned today, but its for the ones i love so why the hell not right? Anywho, I got the 17yr old a Coach purse and the 13 yr old a Dooney Bourke wristlet, their bdays are coming up in the next few days. they saw i bought myself one and wanted one too. they've been good this year in school and at home, they dont know i got it for them, so this should be a nice surpise.
this is a huge dilemma here, i thought he figure it out by now, but i guess not. i love the whole idea, but i cant help but wonder if while shes fucking him can she see him flashbacks of earlier when he was all big bro on her. eww
cants wait for more, like i need some by saturday at the latest!
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your much derseved stars
Dani
P.S. Thank you for the update, i read it before i went shopping. kept a huge smile on my face while i spent way more money then i planned today, but its for the ones i love so why the hell not right? Anywho, I got the 17yr old a Coach purse and the 13 yr old a Dooney Bourke wristlet, their bdays are coming up in the next few days. they saw i bought myself one and wanted one too. they've been good this year in school and at home, they dont know i got it for them, so this should be a nice surpise.
MissM69 (Signed) on May 22, 2008 10:04 pm (Torn in Two)
I'm at the edge of my chair reading this simply awesome can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for the reviewing Missy!
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks for the reviewing Missy!
SJane (Signed) on May 22, 2008 08:48 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
i'm torn like the titale says lol I'm so pulling for them to do it as you can just feel the chemistry between the two but on the other hand you just know how pissed Justin will be if he finds out the truth. Also Jess is acting a little shifty if you ask me lol
Author's Response: It's just a LITTLE complicated, yeah? lol As far as Jess goes.... this is only the beginning. haha. Thanks for the review my love!
Author's Response: It's just a LITTLE complicated, yeah? lol As far as Jess goes.... this is only the beginning. haha. Thanks for the review my love!
rev0586 (Signed) on May 22, 2008 08:29 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
god grl how could u not be thinking that he is gona b so angry when he finds out the truth! and wow im sure hes gona b thinkin i fucked my 17 yr old step-sis!,
oh i also kinda got a feelin that he might develop a crush on jess. or am i wrong?? cuz idk the way he said "Then there's Jess" (or somethin like that) and just left it like that, idk
Author's Response: lol I love this review! We'll see what happens with Justin and Jess.... only time will tell. ;) You rock for the review!
oh i also kinda got a feelin that he might develop a crush on jess. or am i wrong?? cuz idk the way he said "Then there's Jess" (or somethin like that) and just left it like that, idk
Author's Response: lol I love this review! We'll see what happens with Justin and Jess.... only time will tell. ;) You rock for the review!
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on May 22, 2008 07:55 pm (Torn in Two)
Man, how does he not know that they are the same person. I would think it would be obvious based on how I picture Kiki and/or Nicole to look.
Bet Justin isn't going to be very happy though if he finds out the truth.
Author's Response: It's funny the way the mind will believe whatever it wants to, even if something is staring it right in the face. lol Thanks for reviewing Lucca Lover! mwah
Bet Justin isn't going to be very happy though if he finds out the truth.
Author's Response: It's funny the way the mind will believe whatever it wants to, even if something is staring it right in the face. lol Thanks for reviewing Lucca Lover! mwah
sandy (Signed) on May 22, 2008 05:32 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Really love the story. Quick question though. In Vegas she told Justin she was from Los Angeles, which is why he asked for her number. Now when she ran into him in Tahoe she claims to work at the bookstore down the street..he wouldn't catch onto that and find that shady???
Author's Response: YOU ARE AN OBSERVANT LITTLE COOKIE. I love that you're paying attention this closely. I'll just say that her lies will absolutely catch up to her. That is all. lol Thanks for the review Sandy.
Author's Response: YOU ARE AN OBSERVANT LITTLE COOKIE. I love that you're paying attention this closely. I'll just say that her lies will absolutely catch up to her. That is all. lol Thanks for the review Sandy.
a_nonymous (Signed) on May 22, 2008 04:04 pm (Torn in Two)
Holy fuck I love this story! : )
Author's Response: And I love you! Thanks for reviewing! Woot!
Author's Response: And I love you! Thanks for reviewing! Woot!
mandycherie (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:58 pm (Torn in Two)
Huh, that took a turn I wasn't expecting. Can't wait for Justin to catch Kiki in her lie.
Author's Response: lol I can't wait, either. Thanks for reviewing mandy!
Author's Response: lol I can't wait, either. Thanks for reviewing mandy!