Comments For Water, Water Everywhere
MissTasha (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:35 pm (Torn in Two)
Sex! Sex! Sex! This makes me very happy. If they don't do it this time, I'm gonna be pissed. LOL. Please update soon.
Author's Response: LMFAO! Thanks for the review Tasha, and your wish just may be my command! ;)
Author's Response: LMFAO! Thanks for the review Tasha, and your wish just may be my command! ;)
classicbeauty (Signed) on May 22, 2008 05:34 am (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
what can i say?
absolute geinus, is what keeps ringing in my head!
i love it, it is so great and the relationship with her sister, is so how i feel that way about my brother. and her sister is really off at times, just like him. but you gotta love them..
we got something in comman, crack...feedback for you and an update asap for me! like later today before i wake up at 10am.
today, im spending alot of money on my little sisters and i want something to lighten the mood for me when i give the money up...sorry im loosing track here.
MORE please love it! cant get enough of it.
Dani
Author's Response: Dani! Thank you so much for the indept feedback, it means the freakin world to me! THANK GOD you can see peices of Jess in your real life because I don't have any siblings so I have NO f-in clue what I'm talking about when I write them. lol What are you buying your sister? Hopefully she's a little more gracious than Jess is. OkayILoveYouByeBye! mwah ;)
absolute geinus, is what keeps ringing in my head!
i love it, it is so great and the relationship with her sister, is so how i feel that way about my brother. and her sister is really off at times, just like him. but you gotta love them..
we got something in comman, crack...feedback for you and an update asap for me! like later today before i wake up at 10am.
today, im spending alot of money on my little sisters and i want something to lighten the mood for me when i give the money up...sorry im loosing track here.
MORE please love it! cant get enough of it.
Dani
Author's Response: Dani! Thank you so much for the indept feedback, it means the freakin world to me! THANK GOD you can see peices of Jess in your real life because I don't have any siblings so I have NO f-in clue what I'm talking about when I write them. lol What are you buying your sister? Hopefully she's a little more gracious than Jess is. OkayILoveYouByeBye! mwah ;)
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on May 18, 2008 09:59 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
I have commented over at JJB, but I also wanted to leave one here because I think this is a great story, and I want to see an update because of the "oh my god" cliff hanger you left us with!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. There will definitely be a new chap by the weekend if it KILLS me. lol mwah!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. There will definitely be a new chap by the weekend if it KILLS me. lol mwah!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 13, 2008 12:33 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
LOL This is going to be interesting. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review babe!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review babe!
MissTasha (Signed) on May 13, 2008 09:41 am (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
Does he recognize her?!?! This story is so good. Are they going to have sex soon? Please and thank you. Please update soon.
Author's Response: lmao Sexy time will come very, very soon!
Author's Response: lmao Sexy time will come very, very soon!
ashmama (Signed) on May 12, 2008 08:51 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
Author's Response: Im amazing? YOU'RE amazing. Thank you for taking the time to write all of that for me. I'm SO thrilled that you like it and I'm working on the next chapter as we type! As for the editor, I FOUND ONE, but you rock for the offering anyway ;) Come to think of it, I have finals, too. lol Time to step away from the laptop, Tenille.
Oh,
MY
Goodness..
Ihave real-like LITERAL buttlerflies in m stomach. I do not know how much fanfiction Ive read over the past 10 years-
but this is the BEST i have ever ever ever read. YOu are absolutely amazing. I was speeding through this thing so fast..but i wanted to go slow to savor it...and....and..oh my goooooodness. I have so much to do (finals, etc) but GIRL...if you dont update..i will find you.
just kidding. seriously. but i could be an editor, if only to make sure that you crank this story out ASAP!!!
ohmygoodness...absolutely amazing.
THIS story is my crack. I applaud you...UPDATEUPDATEUPDATTTEEEE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Im amazing? YOU'RE amazing. Thank you for taking the time to write all of that for me. I'm SO thrilled that you like it and I'm working on the next chapter as we type! As for the editor, I FOUND ONE, but you rock for the offering anyway ;) Come to think of it, I have finals, too. lol Time to step away from the laptop, Tenille.
a_nonymous (Signed) on May 12, 2008 08:05 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
To control my natural instinct, and just in cause you were wondering, my natural instinct was to run after Lynn and body slam her before continuing onto Justin, so I could have first dibs at ripping him to shreds, I clawed my nails against the jeans on my thighs.
LMAO!
Oh, and 'oh shit' at the ending!
Author's Response: LMFAO when I wrote that I almost took it out because I have a bad habit of making my characters take after me and I'm trying not to do that with KiKi. THAT line, however, is ALL me. lol Thanks for the review!
LMAO!
Oh, and 'oh shit' at the ending!
Author's Response: LMFAO when I wrote that I almost took it out because I have a bad habit of making my characters take after me and I'm trying not to do that with KiKi. THAT line, however, is ALL me. lol Thanks for the review!
SJane (Signed) on May 12, 2008 07:18 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
oh suck a good update. I hope for her sake he is only noticing her different color eyes lol
Author's Response: I saw the word suck and panicked lol! Way to think outside of the box, Jane. Thanks for the review! Muah!
Author's Response: I saw the word suck and panicked lol! Way to think outside of the box, Jane. Thanks for the review! Muah!
Gigi (Signed) on May 12, 2008 06:02 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
Author's Response: Bwahahahahahaaaaaaaa
That cliffhanger is killing me!
Author's Response: Bwahahahahahaaaaaaaa
mandycherie (Signed) on May 12, 2008 01:43 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
Oh my, you are evil for leaving a cliffhanger like that! Jess is a trip, I love it
Author's Response: Yes, she is! ;P
Author's Response: Yes, she is! ;P
Vessy (Signed) on May 12, 2008 01:14 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
oh my god what??? come on, I need an update fast! :D
Marissa (Signed) on May 12, 2008 12:20 pm (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
I really like this story!! Keep up the good work!
And if you still need an editor, I'd be more than willing to do it. Let me know!
Author's Response: I found an editor (you guys are FAST) but thank you for the review Marissa! xoxo
And if you still need an editor, I'd be more than willing to do it. Let me know!
Author's Response: I found an editor (you guys are FAST) but thank you for the review Marissa! xoxo
rev0586 (Signed) on May 12, 2008 10:42 am (That love was meant for beauty queens...)
what what whats gona happen??!! did he recognize her?, noe no he wouldnt right? maybe it was something else... he couldn't have recogized her that quick lol
Author's Response: I don't knoooow. You'll just have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I don't knoooow. You'll just have to wait and see. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reshaye (Signed) on May 11, 2008 01:51 pm (I learned the truth at seventeen...)
Great story! It hook you right away...I, too was disappointed that they didn't hook up...they were seriously about to wreck that hotel room, I just know it! = )
Author's Response: In the unedited version of this chapter they DID wreck that room. lol I took it out, though, cause I didn't want them getting busy so early in the story.
Author's Response: In the unedited version of this chapter they DID wreck that room. lol I took it out, though, cause I didn't want them getting busy so early in the story.
