Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Jaimie (Anonymous) on Sep 24, 2009 04:40 pm (Chapter 1)
ok. your killing me slowly everyday by not updating. :( I <3 this story and I am dieing to know what Justin is going to do and if Charlie is even going to keep up what shes doing...please..

Author's Response: I am working on it I swear. School and work have been killing me lately but hopefully I'll make some good progress this weekend! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Sep 17, 2009 04:59 pm (Chapter 26)
It's about dang time she realizes she is not happy there. I hope things start to look up for her too because she's getting so depressed :( Like I always say, Justin needs to grow a pair. LoL. I’m anxious to see where you’re going to take this because really I have no idea! I am enjoying it a lot though! Anyway, fantastic job hope more is coming soon. Sorry about the late reply, this semester is kicking my butt! TTYL -Traci

Author's Response: You and me both sistah! Seriously whoever invented senior year is an asshole hahaha! Thanks for taking the time out to read though! Yeah hopefully this is a turning point for Charlie. We shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


MochaB (Signed) on Sep 16, 2009 02:08 am (Chapter 26)
Well I hope she actually finds and does something for herself. She needs to get back to being herself cause at the end of the day that's all she'll have and she has to live with the person she becomes. She definitely was bold at the beginning of this chapter. Forget making justin feel better though! He has brought this all on himself and he can fix things, but he doesn't. So she shouldn't feel the need to fix it, at least temporarily. She needs to not be so freaking nice. She makes sacrifices, puts her self (mentally, emotionally, physically) on the line for others...all for people who don't deserve it, are cold hearted, ignorant, and vindictive and she gets absolutely nothing in the end. Amelia most definitely doesn't give her anything except a pay check, and justin is not giving her what she desires the most, which is his heart one hundred percent. His body is great and all, but it only goes so far and she ends up feeling guilty and like crap. Stop being so effing nice! It's so sad. Everybody in this story is such a sad individual, even amelia. It's sad that she's become who she is and it's sad that she such a bia. Haha. We know why justin and charlie are sad individuals. As I read this chapter I had the thought that I think one of the reasons justin may like charlie so much is that she is like an old version of amelia. His amelia that wasn't the power and money hungry vindictive she-devil that she is today. Maybe that's a stretch since he hasn't actually had that thought exactly, but that's just what I think. But how things are going she's slowly make the transition to becoming a version of amelia, and not a good one. BUT it is great that she has caught herself ahead of time. It's so sad that she won't quite a job because of a man who she does not have...who she may never have. She better find herself and fast. And I've said it from the first time you mentioned justin's finances a few chapter back...justin, his finances, amelia - all tied together. When you prove me wrong I will admit that I was wrong, but until then...haha. Oh! It seems to me that amelia was eavesdropping on the convo between the 3 girls cause she knew they had been to Saks and that they asked charlie to go shopping with them. Yes she told them to do it, but how did she know they did it right then? I don't know. Maybe I need to re-read that part again, but I was like "something is not right." Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: Yes I've kind of come to notice that everyone in this story is kinda lame and sucky lol I didn't FULLY intend for them to be that way, like I wanted them to be flawed and as real as possible and I think that they are to a certain extent but damn lol I like what you said about Charlotte being like the old Amelia. I hadn't really thought of it that way, more so in the sense that Charlotte is very different from Amelia but you're kind of right. She's very much like Amelia used to be. I love when you guys make me see stuff in my characters that I didn't even notice before! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Keediluv (Signed) on Sep 13, 2009 05:09 pm (Chapter 26)

Sounds like someone is starting to lose themselves in the wonderfully weird world of Justin Timberlake.  That happens alot when we're in (love) or infatuation with someone...trust me.  Started acting all kinds of different with my first bf.  I think it may be time for a visit from her mom and dad.  Nothing like family to pull your head out of your ass...!  LOL!  Love the update, hun:)

Ki



Author's Response: YES UGH! I've been kinda in this situation with a guy myself just recently and while it didn't end up the way I would have hoped its given me some pretty good fuel for this story as far as emotion goes. Yeah Charlie needs a nice kick in the ass lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


alimera (Signed) on Sep 13, 2009 11:56 am (Chapter 26)
Okay. While I totally agree that she's changed her outward appearance a lot, inwardly she's still the same when she's around JUSTIN. The only thing she needs to get away from is Amelia and her prissy ass. So sure, Charlie, go to school, and maybe Justin will grow a pair and leave Amelia once and for all. God that woman is unbelieveably annoying. Lol...update again soon!

Author's Response:

EXACTLY! What I love about Charlotte is she's just slightly dramatic lol Like she starts dressing in nicer clothes and she's suddenly like "OMG I'M TURNING INTO AMELIA" lol Like its kind of a way for her to keep herself in check. She's hard on herself and tries to be brutally honest with herself. Its one of the things I love the most about her. Sorry that was a ramble lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



bogglethemind (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2009 10:03 pm (Chapter 26)

Ok, so I FINALLY had some time to read this story now that I'm done with my big long drama, and it took me some time to catch up, but I'm happy to say that I'm all caught up. Now... *cracks knuckles* In the next chapter, I demand that someone "accidentally" or not so accidentally really, pushes Amelia off the Brooklyn bridge. Preferably Justin. Or Charlie. I don't care. But it needs to be done. Yep. I'm sure you've heard it a million times by now, but that woman is seriously, seriously VILE. And I thought I created frustrating characters. Haha. She is, by far, the most god-awful character I've ever had the displeasure of reading about. Honest to God, I think she's the devil in disguise. I LOATHE her. And she ain't even real. LOL! She's just AWFUL. Awful, awful, awful. And that's a testament to how great a writer you are because I'm sitting here seriously hating the guts out of a fictional person. She has no redeemng qualities at ALL. God, I hope she gets hit by a taxi at least. I swear, I'm not a violent person. LOL

Which brings me to Justin. How can he even tolerate that... that thing (and yes, she's a thing because I swear she lacks a soul. Like I said, devil in disguise lol). He's seriously frustrating and depressing the hell out of me. This whole story is seriously depressing. GROW A PAIR, DUDE. UGH! He's so stupid. I love him, but he's seriously stupid. Like dropped on his head as a child too many times stupid. She's already sucked all the life out of you. GET OUT WHILE YOU STILL CAN! Bah!

And Charlie...I feel her dilemna, but man, she's just...ugh. I dunno. She's great, but she's stupid, too. lol She needs to stop giving into Justin and just walk away from it all. Maybe then his dumbass will finally realizes he loves HER and not that THING he keeps convinces himself he loves. I swear, I want to knock him around every time he thinks it.

I love Trace. He is awesome and not stupid. He's only character I like wholeheartedly at this point. We should get married. Make it happen, k? Next chapter. Kthanx.

This story seriously riles a person up, can't you tell? I love it, but it's still depressing. LOL You're a really amazing author. You paint really vivid images with your words. I've written you a novel now, but that was a lot of story to process. Haha.  



Author's Response: HAHAHA OMG YOU SHOULD MARRY TRACE!!! The last sentence "And then Trace dumped Ginger for Lisa." I'm glad it riles you! That means I'm doing my job. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Karlita (Signed) on Sep 11, 2009 09:29 pm (Chapter 26)
Okay, I'm sort of over Charlotte letting herself get used and walked all over.  And now she's becoming a mini-Amelia?  I'm going to need Trace to make another appearance because right now I think he's the only character I still like.  I'm still in love with this story though.  Fantastic update! 

Author's Response: Traaaaaace guh I seriously miss him. I promise he will make another appearence. I can't remember how soon but he's coming back I swear lol Glad you're loving it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


Shufflee (Signed) on Sep 11, 2009 03:25 pm (Chapter 26)
Ughh..Charlie, please don't turn into Amelia clone.

Author's Response: IKR. Seriously Charlie needs some garlic or holy water or something lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


utsukushiijisatsu (Signed) on Sep 11, 2009 08:36 am (Chapter 26)

Poor Charlie 8< All the shit she goes through for Amelia. She really needs to leave before she transforms into her. 

Lovely as usual~ ♥ I patiently await the next installment o/ 



Author's Response: IKR!!! I think it was kinda a rude awakening for Charlie. Here's hoping it knocks some sense into her! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


azchickadee (Signed) on Sep 10, 2009 07:40 pm (Chapter 26)

okay, so the first half of the chapter I was disappointed in Charlie.  I can't believe she's still with Justin!  I mean, I know she loves him, but the fact that he is being a complete idiot and doesn't realize the fact that he doesn't love Amelia is starting to get on my nerves and I want Charlie to stand up for herself and tell him good-bye.

I like the idea of her going to school.  She needs to concentrate on herself for a while instead of everyone else. 

Awesome update!  :)



Author's Response: She does. I'm seeing this as a bit of a turning point for Charlie but we'll see how it goes. She's a hard nut to crack...like a certain curly haired doormat we all know and love hahahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 10, 2009 02:13 pm (Chapter 26)
I feel so bad for her. She needs to just leave Justin alone all it's doing is making things worse for herself. Justin needs to decide what he wants and stop playing both women. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Yeah Charlotte's in a seriously tough situation right now. Poor kid. Here's hopin she can get out of it. Don't even start with me on Justin *puts him in the corner* LOL I'm glad you're loving it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


meggie (Signed) on Sep 10, 2009 06:09 am (Chapter 26)
Charlotte Charlotte Charlotte.... I want to be mad at her for fucking her life up so badly but dammit I love her too much! Haha And Justin, dude, get with it! You are falling for her! Men are so dumb! Grrrr Anyway loved it as usual light if my fictional life!

Author's Response: You know I think Justin's stupid-boy-ness is rubbing off on Charlie and not in any kind of sexy way lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


ninabina (Signed) on Sep 10, 2009 03:09 am (Chapter 26)

NO!  She can't be turning into Amelia!  I'm so ashamed of Charlie!

And if Justin doesn't come around with this mess, I'm going to slap him.

And Amelia is definitely up to something.  Going to Paris without her so she can keep an eye on Justin?  Come on...she's just waiting to make a fool of them.

 

*sigh* please write more soon! 



Author's Response: HAHA I know right! what is up with these characters doing the exact opposite of what they're supposed to do *smacks them* I'm workiing on the next section I swear! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


imikimi (Signed) on Sep 10, 2009 02:16 am (Chapter 26)
The last part made me so sad :( charlie really doesn't deserve this. she needs some distractions in her life she a needs a REAL MAN with some REAL BALLS!! Pls get her out of this mess or make her quit this fucking job. She really doesn't dererve this.

Author's Response: Its so hard with Charlie (and Justin too a lot of times) because even as the author I'm like AKSHDKJASHD JUST LET GOOOOO lol Stubborn stubborn fictional characters hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!


MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 10, 2009 01:25 am (Chapter 26)
This chapter made me sad. :( It made me feel even more homesick. :( That is all. Oh, no, wait. I have a bone to pick. I thought we decicded that you wouldn't be posting chapters in the middle of the night. I think you signed a contract or something. And you promised to pay for a contract violation in cookies. Where are my cookies? I keed. I keed. I really do have class in 5 1/2 hours. I'm rambling because I'm sleepy. Goodniiiiiiight! Please update soon.

Author's Response: EEP SORRY!!! I actually kinda screwed myself staying up late to post because I had to get up at like 6 oclock the next morning to drive twelve hours down to school hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!




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