Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 29, 2009 04:40 am (
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ok this is what I think will happen - they have an affair in LA and on the way back decide together that it can't work - Trace shows up (I love him in the story) Justin confesses and the loss of Charlie is over powering. Charlie somehow finds out that Amelia is having an affair. Charlie can't hurt Justin and tell him in the meantime finds out she's pregnant and quits to go home keeping her secert. they do get married but Justin finally realizes that his heart is no longer with Amelia and he is desparate for Charlie. Trace bumps into charlie very pregnant and finds out from her Amelia's secert and Charlie's secert. Justin of course is hurt by charlie quiting and running away from him but he soon realizes from Trace the sorid details of his wife and mistress. Then there is a part two divorce and the special love that Justin and Charlie have it won't be easy but in the end true love wins - all this I only hope. just me begging for an update soon please.
Author's Response: Wow that is a REALLY cool idea! See that's what I totally LOVE about writing is that there are so many different ways that you can take the plot. I'm not saying if you're right or if you're wrong because that would spoil the fun ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
alimera (Signed) on May 28, 2009 11:45 am (
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEK! Holy effing crap. Now what the hell are they going to do?! They're either going to embrace the passion and lust they have for each other and spend the whole trip like the end of this chapter, or they're going to go back to ignoring each other. The second choice is the smarter of the 2 but I don't like it at all. The first choice is AWESOME but they'd be in for a world of hurt when reality hits and they're back in NY. Jeez. I don't know how you're going to fix it but they better end up together!! Lol, update again soon, have fun in Switzerland!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA YES!!!! Exactly the reaction I was looking for! They're kinda screwed (literally *giggle) but that makes for more fun reading anyway...we'll see what happens. Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Ram4 (Signed) on May 27, 2009 10:03 am (
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Dang! The internet ate up my long and detailed review!!
I haven't got time to rewrite it :( but the key points were:
a) That I hate you for stopping where you did because I neeeeeeeeed to know how they are going to react this time! I feel like Justin is going to act even crazier than last time but I'm reeeeeeeeally hoping that he doesn't! haha
and b) that I don't really hate you at all because I loved this chapter so so much!
aand lastly c) I'm becoming increasingly scared of Amelia and all the ways she could possibly react if/when she finds out about all this! eeeeeek!
I know you're probably wondering what my original review was like if this is only a summary of it but really it was exactly the same but with more emotion like this: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY DID WHAT!!! OMG!!!!!! THIS IS BAD! BUT SO SO GREAT AT THE SAME TIME... something like that. hahaha!
Author's Response: NO! Why does the internet always eat things? Seriously its kinda ridiculous lol. But thank you for taking the time to type another review to send!!! I've come to realize that with this story I've been doing cliff-hanger-esque type endings of chapters lol It was not intentional I promise! But I'm glad you liked the chapter!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
JoJo (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 05:18 pm (
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First time I've read the story and I couldn't stop! Charlotte and Justin seem like a great match, better than Amelia. Amelia is just annoying! And Justin...I feel bad because he seems confused and in his head he knows he loves Amelia but he tries to deny he feels something with Charlotte! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you're liking it! I agree Justin is just so confused and doesn't know where to turn. Hopefully it's to Charlotte lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Shufflee (Signed) on May 26, 2009 02:14 pm (
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do you realize how amazing you are??
I'm in love with this story!!
Author's Response: Wow seriously that just made my day! lol I'm really glad you're loving the story!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 26, 2009 01:41 pm (
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This should be a clue to both of them. Charlie needs to tell Justin how she feels and they need to be together. I love this, PMS.
Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!! You'd think they'd get it *smacks them* I'm glad you're loving it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Joanne (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 09:37 am (
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You are truly an imazing writter, this story is one of the best! I doubt Justin has the balls yet to leave the B.... but I really think he and Charles have something very special that either one will admit yet. maybe it will take a suddent unexpected welcome from the stork to bring them together. Even then it won't be perfect like Charlie described but worthwhile.
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I'm glad you not only like the story but my writing as well! We'll see where the story goes from here, I'm not giving anythign away just yet ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 08:18 am (
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i hope they don't get more awkward around each other after this.
Author's Response: Yeah that's the old double edged sword. Years of pent up sexual frustration manifests itself in some delicious hot tub!sex but then here comes the guilt train...maybe *is mean and vague* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Tink (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 03:52 am (
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So glad you posted again! I love this story and can't wait to read more, he really needs to break up with amelia
Author's Response: HE DOES!!! Hopefully he wakes up soon but knowing him he's gonna have to mull around about it for awhile *sigh* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
SJane (Signed) on May 26, 2009 01:53 am (
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*thud*
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Can't ask for more than that! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 26, 2009 12:54 am (
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oh no...this is BAD!!! but it is sooo good at the same time
Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!! Their relationship is so bittersweet right now. *sigh* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on May 25, 2009 10:30 pm (
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Well hot diggity damn! I mean I don't think there's anything else to say. LOL. Surely, the first time after was awkward enough for them that they won't fall back into it once the reality of what they've done, AGAIN, washes over them.
I have to agree with Charlie. Roxy is testing them. I think Justin still has his blinders on and doesn't want to think that of her. But then again, I think Roxy has misplaced her trust in Charlie. She thinks because shes "plain" and not like her that Justin wouldn't give her the time of day. So that's working toward the face of Justin being right.
AH, regardless. Charlie and Justin forever! LOL. I can't wait to read what you've got in store for them next. Maybe a go at it in the shower? LOL. Just kidding. Have a great time in Switzerland!
Author's Response: YES EXACTLY!!! Amelia's one flaw (among MANY lol) is that she seriously just doesn't get Justin. And poor Charlotte is just in the middle *pets her* Thanks for the well wishes! And thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
band nerd (Signed) on May 25, 2009 10:20 pm (
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you're killing me here! I am physically dying because of this story. omgomgomg. . . .so much needs to happen right now and just ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Author's Response: No don't die!!! lol Trust me girl I KNOW so much needs to happen. They characters are bouncing around my brain like WHOA! Hopefully this means the new chapter will come out relatively quick. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
ladybugs26 (Signed) on May 25, 2009 10:11 pm (
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Oh my god, this is so my absolute favorite story! It is amazing. And this last chapter with the hot tub sex, just....wow! Justin so needs to be with Charlie instead of her royal queen of bitchiness...we all see it now he just needs to! HA if only guys weren't so hard headed and stubborn!
Author's Response: Wow thank you SO much! That seriously makes my day to hear that it's your favorite! And seriously boys are stupid. Here's to hoping he figures it out soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
MissTasha (Signed) on May 25, 2009 08:03 pm (
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Well, that's not going to help matters. But as unhelpful as it was, it was hot as hell. I loved, loved, loved it. So good. *happydance* I think they're just going to be even more confused and tense and uncomfortable around each other. But what a way to go. I mean, if you're goign to make matters worse, that's a hell of a way to do it. Bravo. Please update soon. And thank you so, so much for 2 chapters in one day. Thta's just plain awesome.
Author's Response: Yeah this chapter was just too long so I had to cut it into two parts. Seriously I'm waaaaay too long winded for my own good lol. Glad you liked the section! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!