Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
aswift (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 09:13 pm (Chapter 21)
YAY!!!! All that sexual tension was getting to me and they finally did something about it!  That was hot!  Unfortunately we know that they will both feel guilty and they'll end up avoiding each other.  You're evil like that!! Haha!!! Keeping me on the edge of my seat and can't wait for more.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA i AM evil like that! More is coming I promise! Just gotta find the time and a quiet place to get it done! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 05:37 pm (Chapter 21)
Finally some justice in the world! That was so hot. Sadly, I think he's gonna hurt her again. But happy thoughts for now. :)

Author's Response: Yes yes happy thoughts for now! Lets hope Justin gets his damn head on straight but I fear its gonna get worse before it can really get any better *sigh* Stupid boys. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



hp5010 (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 05:27 pm (Chapter 21)
Oh crap, I just realized, they didn't use protection (assuming Charlie's not on BC pills...).  That would be an interesting turn of events if she wound up pregnant...  Anyway, probably completely off basis, but it was one of those thought that hit all of a sudden during a very boring work day.

Author's Response: GUH boring days at work/school are some of my BEST fanfic days lol. You just get so many good ideas! Interesting thought indeed! I'm not gonna say anything other than stay tuned...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Apr 07, 2009 02:08 am (Chapter 21)
All I can say is: FINALLY! OMG! and this better not be a dream ... LoL. SO many people will NOT be happy about that. Now, what to do with Amelia is the question. Hmm ;) I can think of a few ideas. Haha. Anyway, awesome job! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter as always and can't wait to see where this is gonna go! Nice work. Hope France is good! TTYL -Traci

Author's Response: No worries girl it was most DEFINITELY not a dream! France is treating me pretty well at the moment so YAY for that hahaha! I'm working on the next section now but I dunno when I'll get it finished but its going well so far. Glad you liked the section!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



mandycherie (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 11:21 pm (Chapter 21)
Oh my god. How is she going to explain the china?!?Why does Amelia want to marry Justin anyway? Seems to me her and Justin don't even like each other half the time. I guess she likes the idea of owning Justin Timberlake or something.

Author's Response: I think you hit the nail on the head. I feel like Amelia has put all this work into their relationship, like she's obviously "trained" him to be exactly what she wants ie someone she can control in every way and that's what she wants. And we all know what Amelia wants Amelia gets lol. You don't even wanna KNOW Amelia's reaction to the plates dude. It is NOT gonna be pretty lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 08:30 pm (Chapter 21)
I really really hope that Justin doesn't hurt her anymore than he already has, but I get the feeling he's going to. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Guh I know! He's so selfish most of the time but he really does care about her. That's one of the things I love the most about him. He has the best of intentions but he's just a fuck up right now hahaha. Glad you liked it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



azchickadee (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 08:20 pm (Chapter 21)
Oh my heck.  Sigh.  That was...amazing.  Justin just needs to wake up an open his eyes and see what's right in front of him!!  He and Charlie belong together.  End of story.  :)

Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!! Guh the boy kills me! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



hp5010 (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 08:12 pm (Chapter 21)
Yes!!!!  Ok, now, if only this "incident" will give him the confidence and cajones to dump amelia...  Tho, I know it won't be that simple.  I so hope Amelia doesn't find some way to trap him...  Hmm, wonder what this business dinner is.  Great update, can't wait for more, hope you're having fun in France.

Author's Response: GUH I KNOW RIGHT!!!! Although you're probably right I don't think it's that simple -_- Stupid Justin and his stupid stubborness hahaha. And who knows what that business dinner is. Amelia must still have a few more tricks up her designer sleeves lol. France is being pretty good to me at the moment I will admit! Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 08:08 pm (Chapter 21)

first let me say i'm pissed right now cause i had this incredibly long review typed out then my computer decided to perform an illegal operation and shut the freak down. UGH! so now i have to start anew and it probably won't be as great. lol

oh my freaking hell.
seriously...OHMYGOOOOSH!! :oD :oD :oD :oD
heather, and i BEG of you, do not make justin take any steps back from this. when he was about the start thinking about his guilt and all that stupid mess i was like this fool better not, and he didn't a peace came over me and him too probably and the last sentence just made me sigh and melt and just think it was sooo romantic. in a way it was, along with being freaking hot and sexy and beautiful. OH MYGOSH!! final-freaking-ly! i feel like donna. my head is all over the freaking place! final-freaking-ly that they gave into their emotions and wants and needs and did the dang thing and the same goes for charlie actually telling justin like it is straight up. i was just like, oh shit son!! lol then when she said at least one of them had balls i was just like it's over man. shut it down! you go girl!! i was and am cheesing so dang hard right now i'm just giddy! i really wish all the readers could be in one room and read this at the same time because it would be really amusing. my leg was bouncing, i was pumping my fists in the air with excitement, i was just..man..in a trance! dang that was hot and so worth the wait! please, please please do not let them go back. justin knows completely how he feels about charlie and his life. the dam has broken and nothing else can be placed in the back of his mind; it's all out. when he mentioned charlie writing off them i was like this fool has been writing off his whole life for the longest! writing off the kiss, his pain and hurt of being with and dealing with amelia, his own desires and need to sing again, his feelings for charlie! everything! but they can NOT go back now. that knot is like pretty much untied. one more tug (ending things with amelia officially) and no more. ok. yes. please update soon. my gosh. i'm shaking. lol so beautiful and sexy and animalistic and UGH. ok. yes. i'm not writing off that business dinner thing with amelia though. something fishy is up. ok, update soon! btw, i've been reading your journal and i love it! ok, i'm going to go bask in my happiness now. bye. lol :o) 



Author's Response: OMG that sucks about your comp being a douche! But THANK YOU for taking the time to go through and type it up again!!!! I of course loved all your thoughts on the section! I love hearing the reactions and things to the different plot points becasue you're SO dead on with how I wanted you to feel about it hahaha Its like you're in my brain!  And he HAS been writing everything off for a long time. One of the things I love about Justin in this story is he's such a flawed character. Like he's selfish and a doormat and kind of a coward but goddammit we love him anyway lol Same goes for Charlotte really. I'm glad you're reading the journal!!! I think it helps you guys to know what the crap I'm doing over here when I'm not writing hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



shan030709 (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 07:45 pm (Chapter 21)
YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!  About damn time!!!!!!  Please let Justin realize that this was a good thing and not mess it up again!!!  Don't leave us hanging for too long please!!!!

Author's Response: I AGREE!!! Guh these two I swear! I'll try not to leave you guys hangin' I'm working on the next section now so hopefully I'll find some time to work on it in the next few days. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



dosaen leabhar (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 07:14 pm (Chapter 21)
OMG! I've never commented on any story but this chapter left me totally speechless. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Oh YAY!!! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Hopefully updates will come in the next week or so. I'm working on the next section now *crosses fingers* Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!!



Marissa (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 06:30 pm (Chapter 21)
I reviewed before and it was both happy and witty, but I don't think it came through :( Anywho, it went something like this.......

YESSSSSSSS!!!!! Finally. That was so god damn delicious, on top of the desk, china breaking everywhere. Ugh! Want.more.NOW

That said, I think Amelia is a cheating whore. "Business dinner" wtf is that about?! Anyway, I hope she is so Justin will leave her and Charltin can live in peace. I was quite proud of little Charlie for speaking her mind...good for her. And it resulted in her getting the sex. So. Cool.

I love you, hope France is treating you well, and update soon!

Author's Response: YES hopefully Charlie makes that connection as well. Justin likes a little cheek from his women apparently *giggle* The china breaking wasn't actually in the outline when I originally came up with the idea but its SUCH a good metaphor for his and Amelia's relationship, like Charlotte breaks the first plate like a break through to him and then he just fucking decimates the rest of them totally not caring. *sigh* Thanks for the well wishes! France is doin me pretty good at the moment. It was bein kind of a dirty bitch for awhile but now I think I'm pretty well adjusted to being here and finding my own niche here. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 04:38 pm (Chapter 21)

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINAL-FUKIN'-LY!!!!!!!!! YES CHARLTIN Ultimate connection. Sorry there's no way they can deny each other or go back now even if moving forward would be hard. Right? lol

Ok, so, I could say a million and one things about this...but damn!!!!! I think I'll just indulge in how hot and intense and delicious that all was. Heather, you rock! seriously, for this update anyway. lol

Because I feel like the way it all happened, the massive drama is just around the corner huh? With Amelia still being in the picture and Justin hasn't really grown a full pair yet I've noticed. he's getting there, but he's not quite there yet. Hmmm....

How long again before the next update? The aftermath is always fun to read but just....don't let them go through too much torture trying to figure everything out mkay? And don't make this turn out to be a dream either! lol.

It would really suck if Amelia tried to pull some stupid stunt so Jusitn would have to stay with her. I swear my mind is going all kinds of places. What's going on with Amelia by the way? Can't wait to find out all the missing details and links. For some strange reason, I picture her as Eva Longoria. LOL. Anyway please please please update soon!!!!!!! LOVED IT!



Author's Response: Oh no worries there was no way in hell this was a dream! lol I'm glad you liked it!!! I really kinda toiled over this section and I'm really happy with how it turned out and happy that people are liking it too! I will admit there COULD be some drama around the corner... Dunno how long till the next update. I'm working on it now and hopefully I can crank it out in the next week or so. I gotta do something its bouncing all around inside my head hahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sweetchic05 (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 03:00 pm (Chapter 21)
WOW!!!!!! Finally!!!!!!

Author's Response: MY SENTIMENTS EXACTLY!!! You have no idea how long I've been waiting to write this chapter! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Keediluv (Signed) on Apr 06, 2009 02:55 pm (Chapter 21)

OMG!!! I so saw and didn't see that coming.  I kinda figured all that passion and fire would erupt someday but I didn't expect it to happen after that arguement.  That was so intense that it would make sense that they would but she also could have pushed his ass back.  I wouldn't have either though.  It would be something if this encounter gets her preggers!!  You know it only takes ONE TIME!!!  That's how my momma always put it :).  Amelia's going to flip her fuckin wig when or if she finds out!  Can't wait to see that happen.  That was fuckin awesome!

Ki



Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA It only takes ONE time!!! That killed me. I was actually kinda torn about having their first time be here because of the nature of their argument. Like it does kind of make Charlotte a doormat in a way but it kind of works along with this parallell between them. Like Justin is a doormat to Amelia and Charlotte is kind of turning into a doormat to him so they're these characters that are kind of painted into this box and the rest of the story is going to be them trying to break out of their respective boxes and how that effects their relationship with eachother, Justin's relationship with Amelia, and Charlotte's relationship with herself. Whoa that was kinda deep hahaha ANYWAY thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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