“NO!” she yells and she feels his body jerk in shock but he doesn’t let go of her arm. “You never meant to hurt me? That’s all you have to say? That’s fine. That’s fucking fine, Justin. You go on about your business, living in your little dream world and I’ll just bring by the cake samples and the seating charts and we’ll pretend that Amelia actually fucking cares about what you think–”
“Hey!” Justin exclaims, his brows furrowing deeply almost letting her go from the shock of her hateful words but Charlotte doesn’t stop.
“And you can pretend that this fucking fiasco is what you want and just let her treat you like a goddamn dog–”
“That’s enough Charl–” he tries to respond gruffly but she raises her voice over his until she’s yelling, unable to stop herself.
“–and we’ll both keep running on the pretense that you’re not about to ruin your fucking life by marrying someone who doesn’t even fucking love you.”
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn, homie. Daaaaaaaamn. I said, daaaaamn. That was rough. True but, damn, it was rough. I was glad when Charlie wouldn't see him and gave him the cold shoulder because he beyond deserved it. He deserved every second of confusion and hurt for what he did to her. He was being a self-absorbed, selfish asshole and he needed too be treated like one.
And that little exchange? I was NOT expecting that to happen. Not at all. Not even close. I guess I have been asking you to have them do it but I didn't think they would be whores and do it under these circumstances. lol. It was awesome, though. On the desk? I love you. Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter. I really, really loved it. Now, I'm just waiting to see how long it takes Justin to go crawling back to Amelia. Because I know that's exactly was he will do. SMH. Please update soon.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA I WAS WAITING FOR YOUR REVIEW!!!! Glad to find that it was satisfactory and to your liking *bounce* Also love that you weren’t expecting it. I was pretty sure everyone was just waiting for it at this point so it wouldn’t be much of a surprise but I’m glad that it caught at least a few off guard. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I just hope this doesn't make their rift bigger than b4 considering it was a kiss b4 and the rift happened now that they had hot hard sex (on the desk lol) I can only imagine how that's going to play out
Author's Response: Guh desk!seeeeex seriously I’ve been waiting to write this section since I started writing this story hahahaha. I’m glad you liked it girl! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHA Roxie Cock-Blocks. Seriously that kills me EVERY time!!! I can’t wait for Trace to find out EITHER hahahahaha. Seriously that is probably going to be the most fun section to write ever. I can’t say much in regards to your questions, only that I promise they will be answered eventually! Thanks for reading and revewing!!!
More! I love where you're going with this. I'm obsessed!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you like it! More IS coming. I'm trying to work on the next section now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
no! no! no! Get the hell off the bike thingy and go after her!
UUUUGGHHH! *shakes fiance!J* COME ON MAN!
he needs a good smack upside his head and I am raising my hand for the position. srsly... he can NOT go through with this wedding! He kissed Charlie! He loves her damn it... not the Wicked Witch of the Upper Westside ok! (wait... are they on the westside? eastside? lol!)
something needs to happen... I think Charlie should jump his ass, fight for him... lol! i dunno! something! this wedding can not happen! no! no! no!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHA Oh Vikki I love your reviews! Your reactions are just what I love to hear coming from the readers! *elbows Fiance!J hard* ahem....ANYWAY...I agree the boy needs to get his head on straight and realize Amelia isn't right for him (itiseastsidebythewayomg) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: O_O GOLFER!J????? *giggle* Oh he can come out and play. Glad you loved it! *bounce* The kiss GUH it was so hard to cut the last chapter where it was but I knew it would make this chapter so much hotter lol. Thanks for readin and reviewing bish!
Author's Response: YAAAY FRANCE!!! its kinda sucking here right now but I think I'm just still adjusting lol. As far as knocking Justin upside his head I AGREE!!! *smacks him* These two *sigh* I'm glad you liked it and I DO have more coming HOPEFULLY soon. I'm working on it now but quiet has been kinda hard to come by here. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Okay okay I'll see what I can do. Glad you loved it! I'm working on the new section right now. I have no clue when it will be done but I'm workin I swear! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Hmmm idiots together...I LIKE IT! Now as far as getting them to do it that's a whole nother bushel of apples right there. But you're right I am working towards it. Slowly but surely lol. Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
that bitch cheated on my justin???
Author's Response: SHE DID THAT WHORE BAG!!!! More on that to come I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
AAHH! So brilliant!
I got an email this morning saying it had been updated but I had to go to uni. So I spent all day waiting to get home! It was absolute torture! Haha
Charlotte is so incredibly cool. I loved that "You keep running" line. and he didn't even get it! Stupid man! (I still love him though, he'll come around! I know he will!)
I'm so excited to see how things pan out from here! Thank you for updating!
P.S. I'm so jealous that you're going to France!
Author's Response: GUH I HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS!!! Like when you check your email and you can't get to it till later arg. The "you keep running" line was my fave from the chapter *bounce* glad you liked it too! Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
If I wasn't already so aware of the fact that all men are idiots, I would be incredibly impressed with how stupid Fiance!J is. When you don't feel guilty about cheating on the woman you plan on marrying, isn't that a sign that you could care less about her? Why continue with the torture? And she's cheated on YOU before, so it's like ... payback and an easy way out simultaneously! I can't even lie, I was totally reading this and hoping for a sexy gym sauna scene between Charlotte and Justin, but no such luck. Roxie Cock-Blocks would surely find out anyway and then mayhem would erupt in massive amounts. Le sigh -- BREAK UP WITH HER YOU IMBECILE! Dump your evil wife-to-be and pay more attention to ol' girl you passionately made out with in a stairwell. Do so promptly before I nut-punch you. Thanks.
Also, love the new story banner. He's pretty, if not also mentally incapacitated. That is all.
Author's Response: She TOTALLY brain ninja-ed him lol!!! Like that's gonna haunt him later. and ROXIE COCK-BLOCKS BAHAHAHAHAHAHA omg that was fucking AWESOME. And nut-punch! lol This review was made of win!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I mean that sexual tension was effin thick!
Also I'd like to use it on Roxanne. Ya know with any other woman, usually getting your personal assitant an appointment at the gym on a saturday morning to make sure your fiance doesn't diddle the wedding planner would be like a flashing neon sign saying, "DON'T MARRY THIS MAN!" Because obviously she doesn't trust him!
Which leads me to the conclusion she's not a human at all! That's the only explanation! Have I mentioned she's a bitch?
Then you have Justin with his non-exsistent balls. I mean hello! I think you need to check and make sure they're still there because obviously Roxie has done away with them. Then he has to go and oogle Patti. Ew! Could the bitch not be any more obvious that she wants his junk? "You have great rhythm when you run." G-ROSS! Obviously "No Balls" needs to get laid (preferably with Charlie) so he can have the blood flowing normally instead of it all clogging up at his brain. Because that has to be THE only explanation as to why he's still with Roxie.
So now that I've wrote you a whole novel...it was pure awesomeness!! I am so jealous you're going to France! But have lots o fun!
Author's Response: DIDDLE!!! OMG that was AWESOME hahahaha "I was only minorly diddled...only minorly" Made my day! I agree this was a rather frustrating chapter. The characters, sometimes they mutiny what can I say. I love all your observations and thoughts and you know I like the novel-esque reviews!!! Proves I'm doing my job and makin' ya'll think! Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!! *smacks him* I dunno about roses and ponies but hopefully they'll come around! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: They do kinda have a big smile for each other don't they *giggle* Iagreetheydoneedsomesexytimeomg. Hopefully that comes soon...pun INTENDED *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
