Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Ally (Anonymous) on Mar 06, 2009 05:25 pm (Chapter 19)
First of all I do want to say I love your story and it is awful that you were plagiarized; however, I have to agree with Anonymous in saying the disclaimer is quite a turn off.  Now I wouldn't go so far as to call it ridiculous but it does seem a bit unecessary. I myself am a writer and I personally would find it flattering that someone thinks my work is good enough to steal.  Now that doesn’t make it right but name-calling seems a bit immature.  I also don’t expect you to agree with my personal opinion but I do really think you should have stopped the disclaimer at “…CANNOT BE USED WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!!!”  The person who stole your work apparently admitted their wrongdoing and removed the stories from the site as well as apologized (according to the “Site News”).  It is understandable that you were upset but it seems you are goading that person when it should be said and done.

Author's Response:

Okay this has kinda gotten out of hand lol. I put up the disclaimer immediately after I saw that I had been plagiarized. This was when Fanfiction.net was down and then proceeded to be down for like three days and I had no way of contacting the person. While the disclaimer does reference what specifically happened to me (the HSM comment) it is a general disclaimer and the ending was meant to be slightly humorous. I was not calling the person who plagiarized me a douche and that was not my intention. I was merely saying that anyone who plagiarizes is a douche. I was trying to kind of go light and funny on the end since the disclaimer was kind of intense like "DON'T USE MY SHIT ALL CAPS AAAGH" I'm sorry if that wasn't clear. Needless to say I will be rewording the disclaimer in the near future lol

Thank you for your honesty. I do appreciate it and value your thoughts and opinions.




Ram4 (Signed) on Mar 06, 2009 08:08 am (Chapter 19)

Oh my golly gosh, I don't even know what to say! I started reading this story two days ago and I haven't been able to stop. It's so freaking amazing!

I love it so much! I can't believe I've only just stumbled across it. I've been missing out! haha Ok I'll stop gushing now but I just thought you should know that what you're writing is AMAZING!!

Oh and this last chapter was a bombshell! Holy crow! This changes everything!



Author's Response: Wow thank you! I'm glad you like the writing! Thanks for taking the time to go back through and reading and thanks for dropping me a review!!!



tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Mar 06, 2009 02:39 am (Chapter 19)
PRAISE! Freaking finally, is all I have to say. I know everyone is annoyed at you for ending it this way, but I think it's perfect. If you'd kept going, the moment would have been lost... and this is an EPIC MOMENT in the EPIC story that is Justin and Charlotte.

Loooove love love, Roxanne is a cunt, I hate her. Waiting for the hilarity that will be Trace's reaction to this whole situation, and not-so-patiently anticipating what I'm sure will be a fantastic next chapter. Seriously. Love. The end.

Author's Response: EEP I'm glad you think so!!! That was my feeling exactly. Like it felt so much more powerful when I cut it off there and this kiss was a long time coming so I felt the cliffhanger kinda justified itself. lol As far as hot being able to wait for Trace's reaction... you and me both sistah! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 11:39 pm (Chapter 19)
Ok so I was in the process of leaving you a review on the previous chapter before I read Ch. 19 when you first posted and then you had to go and "break" the site with your updatingness and everyone being UBER excited that I didnt get to read it until a few days ago.

I was utterly speechless!

I had to like go back and read that part like a few times because I couldn't be right. I mean Mr. Justin I-have-no-balls-I let-my dumb-bitch-of-a-fiance-preserve-them-in-a-glass-jar-to-display-them-on-her-desk- Timberlake kiss simple, loving, right for you in all the right ways, Charlie? Surely my eyes were decieving me!

But they weren't!

And I swear...I wanted to write myself into this story and slap ROXANNE's stupid, anal, bitch face off!

DO NOT INSULT THE TIMBS LIKE THAT, SKANKORAMA!

Just when I think ROXANNE can't be anymore of a bitch you go and throw that whole "you're a coalminers daughter. And no man would ever want to marry you" thing out there and I just wanted to pull every little well kept strand of hair out of that ugly scalp of hers!

So...needless to say...I LOVED IT!

I think I squealed like 20 times when I finally read it on your site!

So...I can't wait! Hopefully it's off with ROXANNE'S head and her ring finger with a ring the size of the Rockin New Years Eve ball on it!

Author's Response: EEP *hides* Seriously when Vikki told me about that I was floored. It just proves that I have the greatest readers EVAR!!! And thanks for coming back and leaving me a review! I love hearing all your thoughts on the section *bounce* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 10:29 pm (Chapter 19)
I love this. I'm so freaking glad that they are talking about this. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: EEP YAY I'm glad you liked it! I've been waiting FOR.EV.ER to write this so its great people are lovin it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Joy (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 10:18 pm (Chapter 1)

Yeah, this so didn't post my review. I posted it on jjb but I'm posting it again on here lol

 

OMFG You can not write a chapter like that and then tell us you're not gonna be on here for a while lol Be glad I don't know how to trace ppl through computers or I'd so lock you in a room until you finish. I'm gonna go crazy not knowing whether or not he leaves Amelia after this and what happens with him and Charlotte. Please update soon. My heart can't take it. :(



Author's Response: YAY thanks for coming over here and reviewing!!! And girl I would love nothing more than to be locked in a room and "forced" to write. Finals are kickin my butt I swear! Hopefully updates within the next two weeks but no promises. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



mscomplex (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 09:39 pm (Chapter 19)

omg. 

that's all that's registering in my mind right now.

omg.



Author's Response: YAY speechlessness is GOOD! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 07:51 pm (Chapter 19)
GUUUUUUUUUUUH KISS!!!!!!!  YAAAAAAAY!  And uh yeah that whole thing with Charlotte imagining herself all over him...HAWT.  Also would like to send out a big EPIC FAIL to Ms. Anonymous...if you're going to criticize someone, at least grow some balls and sign your name.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiss!!! And yeah Charlotte's got a dirty little mind who knew *giggle* Yeah no worries on Anonymous. Whoever it was didn't really say anything that pertained to anything important *shrug* Haters gon' hate lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



mandycherie (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 07:24 pm (Chapter 19)
aww...poor Charlotte, I know a lot of people are gonna be happy about the kiss but I'm not 'cause I know it's just going to end badly for her. Also, I'm not quite sure why Amelia didn't fire Charlotte because of her little outburst. I think Amelia knows just how close Charlotte and Justin are and she's going to find some way to manipulate it to her advantage. It seems as if Amelia's probably a little jealous and insecure of how close Charlotte is with Justin. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I like your thoughts on Amelia!!! I love hearing you guys speculate about her motives lol I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Keediluv (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 06:03 pm (Chapter 19)

OMG!!!  That shit was hot!  I know I wanted them to take their time but that slow torture shit was killing me.  YAY!! As far as Amelia goes...I would have kicked that 'ho' in her knees then proceeded to whip her ass.  It would be the shit if you made Charlotte this bad ass chick now.  She should put it on Justin now.  Okay, I'll stop.  Girl, you know I love you and this story!

Ki



Author's Response: Girl it was killin' ME too!!! I'm so glad you liked it and we'll see where it goes from here *excitedomg* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 05:58 pm (Chapter 19)

I've been trying to post a review to this shiznit for like 3 days. Damn! lol. I've had this saved in a word document since I read the chapter. Which was very, very awesome. Anyway, here goes...

SO GOOD! SO GOOD! SO GOOD! SO GOOD! I don't even know what else to say. You made me almost cry and want to slap the shit out of Amelia. And you made me all happy inside with the stairwell. You're awesome, lady. Please update soon. I know you have school stuff. But eff that. Who needs school? That was my evil twin talking, not me. I would never say something like that. What? Huh? What's going on? I don't know anything. I didn't hear anything.

okaybye.



Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHAH BEST REVIEW EVER!!! Seriously thanks for taking the time to save it and come back here and send it my way! Its nice to know that even with the imposition of the archive being down you guys are taking the time to come back and hit me up with some love *hugs& And I'm glad you (and your evil twin *giggle*) liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



meaghan (Anonymous) on Mar 05, 2009 05:31 pm (Chapter 19)
OH MY GOD!!! that was worth the wait but now i'm dying for more...and we have to wait again!! *sigh* GOOD LUCK WITH FINALS!!

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it!!! Guh Finals don't even remind me lol *avooooids them* Hopefully the wait won't be TOO terribly long. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 04:16 pm (Chapter 19)
HOLY SHIT! he finally kisses her! DAMN! you go boy! now j ust tell roxanne to take a damn hike an get it on with charlie. lol (a girl can dream right?) Omg i seriously wanna punch roxanne for what she said to charlie that was down right mean and cold! grr Great update hun! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: GUH yeah its getting harder and harder for me to make Amelia meaner than she already is lol That's one of the nice challenges of this story, creating a characters that is so DAMN evil lol I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Marissa (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 04:01 pm (Chapter 19)
Heather!!!! You dirty beyatchhhhhhh!!! Leaving us like that for WEEKS! AHhh

Well, fantastic update as usual. Amelia needs to CONTINUE playing in traffic and hopefully get hit by the four-wheeler that Justin and Charlie are driving away on into the sunset! lol

Author's Response: BAHAHAHA OMG DRIVING A FOUR-WHEELER INTO THE SUNSET!!! That made my life lol I'm gonna try and bust this update out in the next two weeks but I don't know how well that's gonna go. All I can promise is that the story is really rollin now so hang on tight! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Mar 05, 2009 03:11 pm (Chapter 19)

Wow, just noticed the negative plag. review. dang...I don't see the big deal. Sheesh what is up with ppl?

Anyway Heather, I re-read this update just to make sure, cus I zoomed through it so fast the first time since I was excited and yes...there was a kisss....hahaha I'm not freaking out anymore. My question though is...when are we going to get the gist on Amelia and her behavior? It might seem simple that she's just one of those people with her parents and lifestyle, but why do i feel like there's something more? hmmm...

Ask for Charltin...I'm super excited, but we all know this isn't going to turn out well at the start. GUH. *Points finger* again! Missy. Please, please, please...don't break our hearts ok? make us happy ok? no more torture! I can't take it. lol. 

K, that's if for review number 2. That's how awesome this was. hahaha....



Author's Response:

I dunno Donna some people are just haters *shrug* To quote the FABULOUS Dane Cook: “Who gives fruit fly’s balls about what anyone else is saying about my path and me. I’m on it and you know this is leading me somewhere that’s why you nip at my heels.”

As for Amelia we're gonna see a little more of her in upcoming chapters and hopefully more will be explained then! As for breaking your hearts...ItrynottoIreallydoomg! Thanks for reading and reviewing...again *giggle* 






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