Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
crestbaby (Signed) on Feb 17, 2009 11:34 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)

You need to hurry up and update! I'm already getting withdrawals. haha

 



Author's Response: I know I know guh School is kicking my ass pretty hard right now. Hopefully I'll get to it this weekend *crosses fingers*. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MyHobby81 (Signed) on Feb 12, 2009 07:58 pm (Chapter 1)

You're a "cock" tease, you know that? One part? Really? Really, one part?

Come on! I can't even stand it.

 



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Well TECHNICALLY its the fourth part of 18....but yeah I get what you're saying...lol Hopefully updates will come in the next couple weeks. School's gonna be a little crazy this week so we'll see *puts on helmet* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Feb 12, 2009 12:50 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)
OK, so I love this, but I'm frustrated because I want to punch Charlotte and Justin for being punks! Can she stop being passive aggressive for one minute and talk to this fool???! Can he get it together and take a stand for once? DAMN. BUT on the bright side, I've finally realized the reason why I haven't quite taken to Charlotte like others is because I feel about her the same way I feel about Jessica Biel: ambivalent. She's not bad, but nothing particularly special. Can she pleeeeease just stop thinking and DO something? It's so frustrating that I want to smack the poor girl. lol.

But it's not just her that I'm confused about, it's also Justin and his intentions. Honestly, I'm still not quite convinced he even wants Charlotte because it just seems like he's looking for someone to fill the void that Amelia's left (or will leave). Plus, the fact that Charlotte's everything Amelia's not makes her a convenient rebound. It just seems like we don't know much about Charlotte herself, just the ways that she's different from Amelia and what I wonder is if Justin’s ideal woman is somewhere between these two women.

That said, I'm not defending Amelia as I have in the past (although, I'm still leaning to the "dark" side, as it were), but I'm still not quite on Team Charlie or Team Charlstin. Charlotte still has a lot to convince me of in terms of her character and Justin has a lot to redeem as well. Have to say though, it's pretty refreshing to have to really think about whether you like a character, what you like about them, and what flaws you're willing to overlook in order to like them, or at least understand them. Sorry for this long-winded review lol!! Can't wait to see where this goes! Update soooon!

Author's Response: Youre completely and totally right to be confused lol One of the hardest parts of this story has been giving all the characters some face time and getting everyone to a place where they feel like they kind of know them. Without giving TOO much away I will say that I wanted to get the people who read to sympathize with Justin but also to kind of want to strangle him too lol So in order to do that I kind of decided to split the story into two main focuses; Justin during the first half and then go kind of indepth into Charlotte in the second half. Since we're about halfway through now (which I just realized holycrapomg lol) we'll be learning a lot more about her in the upcoming chapters. But I like that you're thinkin!!!! All of the stuff that you have said is EXACTLY what I want people to be pondering about! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 07:35 pm (Chapter 18 pt 4)

that was a cute chapter, now i was hoping when he said it was over.. that he really meant it an he was away from that stupid whore.. but dammit you shot down my hopes.

Him and charlie are so perfect of each other. he needs to ditch "roxanne" and go for her!

Great update hun! Can't wait for more



Author's Response: Ooooo girl Amelia's all seething in the corner with you callin her Roxanne *giggle* But fuck her we don't like her anyway lol. Glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



mozie (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2009 04:52 pm (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Amelia is b**ch. he had his chance
to get away and backed out. I love this story so much please update more

Author's Response: Guh he totally DID!!! Stupid Fiance!J *kicks him* lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 02:40 pm (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Heather,

First, I wanted to marry you because I thought Amelia was GONE FOREVER.

Then, I wanted to strangle you because SHE'S NOT GONE FOREVER.

Now, I think it's time we at least get engaged because this line made up for most of the above:

But none of that changed the fact that when he’d closed his eyes, he had wished for Charlotte.

Love (sort of),

Roz

Author's Response:

Roz,

First I wanted to thank you for reading

Then I wanted to thank you for not stangling me

Now, I want to thank you for your review which made me laugh!

Love (no really I mean it!)

Heather 




alimera (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 01:41 pm (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Ugh GOD Justin screwed EVERYTHING up when he took Amelia back just because the bitch had crocodile tears in her eyes and I hated the heck out of him, but then he had to go and recite states and their capitals to keep from jumping Charlie and then he wished for her when he blew out his candle and NOW he's back in my good graces, for the moment. He better put his head on straight soon though...update again soon!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA That's what I love about Justin in this story. He's such a fuck up and then he goes and does adorable shit and he's just SO CLOSE to getting it right GUH! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jbear (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 12:58 pm (Chapter 1)
What is wrong with the man? Here I thought he was so close.... And then wham!! He disappoints me. Get it togeather Justin u said it urself u wished for Charlie. LOL Great Job!!

Author's Response: I KNOW it was such a blow! The big idiot. And poor Charlie *sigh* These kids I swear... Glad you liked it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 11:54 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Nooo! That didn't turn out the way I wanted it too! LoL. Sadness. Okay well ... The O.C. comment was hilarious! I totally LOL and it didn't help that I'm in my school library waiting for class to start. LoL. Anyway, fantastic job as usual! I can't wait to see where this is gonna go. The cupcake thing was so sweet! :) Justin needs to WAKE UP! seriously, that boy has blinders on or something. Charlie is the one for you Justin! Anyway, you did a great job and I hope more is coming soon! -Traci PS-Hope you did well on your mid-term!

Author's Response: EEP Thanks!!! I did decent on all the midterms I think. This has been the quarter of catch-up I swear! Anyway glad you liked the section! Justin is such a moron in this I swear. Its frustrating to me too believe me...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



sylvie (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2009 11:51 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)
ugh why cant he just break up with her and be with charlie its as simple as that come on justin open YOUR FREAKIN EYES!!!!!!!!-oh on a side note i love felicitys character she's funny hehe anyways keep on writing and btw im a new reader and you got me to read the whole story in one sitting hehe keep it up!

Author's Response: WOW one sitting??? Dang that's determination becasue I am LONG WINDED lol Thanks for taking the time to read through everything! Oh and I love Fee too. I love the little quirky minor characters. They bring so much life to the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



isis (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2009 10:49 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)
i was re reading i dont know how she can stand it i would just quit than suffer through seeing him everyday being a dumbass!!

Author's Response: EEP Double read and review!!! I know what you mean! Charlotte's taking as much of a beating as Justin is. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 10:33 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Sigh. i love their little moments. Luvs it!

Author's Response: YES guh its all about the little moments. Hopefully they will turn into bigger moments but who knows. Justin's such a dufus in this lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 10:19 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Sigh. i love their little moments. Luvs it!

Author's Response: YES guh its all about the little moments. Hopefully they will turn into bigger moments but who knows. Justin's such a dufus in this lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Keediluv (Signed) on Feb 11, 2009 08:38 am (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Aww shit now!  This is the direction we need to be heading into.  Although some ppl may not agree with me, I think Justin should take his time to see how much he can grow out of comfort (because it's not love) with Amelia and in love with Charlie and himself.  Awesome update!

Author's Response: EEP I like the way you're thinking! He needs to see that there's more out there! He needs to open his friggin eyes! lol Glad you liked it Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2009 06:52 am (Chapter 1)
Ahhhhh.....These two are driving me crazy...Good job girl....Can't wait 4 the next update=]

Author's Response: They're driving me crazy too man! All bouncin around in my brain and bein obnoxious. Hopefully that means the next update will come sooner rather than later lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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