You need to hurry up and update! I'm already getting withdrawals. haha
Author's Response: I know I know guh School is kicking my ass pretty hard right now. Hopefully I'll get to it this weekend *crosses fingers*. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
You're a "cock" tease, you know that? One part? Really? Really, one part?
Come on! I can't even stand it.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Well TECHNICALLY its the fourth part of 18....but yeah I get what you're saying...lol Hopefully updates will come in the next couple weeks. School's gonna be a little crazy this week so we'll see *puts on helmet* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
But it's not just her that I'm confused about, it's also Justin and his intentions. Honestly, I'm still not quite convinced he even wants Charlotte because it just seems like he's looking for someone to fill the void that Amelia's left (or will leave). Plus, the fact that Charlotte's everything Amelia's not makes her a convenient rebound. It just seems like we don't know much about Charlotte herself, just the ways that she's different from Amelia and what I wonder is if Justin’s ideal woman is somewhere between these two women.
That said, I'm not defending Amelia as I have in the past (although, I'm still leaning to the "dark" side, as it were), but I'm still not quite on Team Charlie or Team Charlstin. Charlotte still has a lot to convince me of in terms of her character and Justin has a lot to redeem as well. Have to say though, it's pretty refreshing to have to really think about whether you like a character, what you like about them, and what flaws you're willing to overlook in order to like them, or at least understand them. Sorry for this long-winded review lol!! Can't wait to see where this goes! Update soooon!
Author's Response: Youre completely and totally right to be confused lol One of the hardest parts of this story has been giving all the characters some face time and getting everyone to a place where they feel like they kind of know them. Without giving TOO much away I will say that I wanted to get the people who read to sympathize with Justin but also to kind of want to strangle him too lol So in order to do that I kind of decided to split the story into two main focuses; Justin during the first half and then go kind of indepth into Charlotte in the second half. Since we're about halfway through now (which I just realized holycrapomg lol) we'll be learning a lot more about her in the upcoming chapters. But I like that you're thinkin!!!! All of the stuff that you have said is EXACTLY what I want people to be pondering about! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
that was a cute chapter, now i was hoping when he said it was over.. that he really meant it an he was away from that stupid whore.. but dammit you shot down my hopes.
Him and charlie are so perfect of each other. he needs to ditch "roxanne" and go for her!
Great update hun! Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Ooooo girl Amelia's all seething in the corner with you callin her Roxanne *giggle* But fuck her we don't like her anyway lol. Glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
to get away and backed out. I love this story so much please update more
Author's Response: Guh he totally DID!!! Stupid Fiance!J *kicks him* lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
First, I wanted to marry you because I thought Amelia was GONE FOREVER.
Then, I wanted to strangle you because SHE'S NOT GONE FOREVER.
Now, I think it's time we at least get engaged because this line made up for most of the above:
But none of that changed the fact that when he’d closed his eyes, he had wished for Charlotte.
Love (sort of),
Roz
Author's Response:
Roz,
First I wanted to thank you for reading
Then I wanted to thank you for not stangling me
Now, I want to thank you for your review which made me laugh!
Love (no really I mean it!)
Heather
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA That's what I love about Justin in this story. He's such a fuck up and then he goes and does adorable shit and he's just SO CLOSE to getting it right GUH! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW it was such a blow! The big idiot. And poor Charlie *sigh* These kids I swear... Glad you liked it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: EEP Thanks!!! I did decent on all the midterms I think. This has been the quarter of catch-up I swear! Anyway glad you liked the section! Justin is such a moron in this I swear. Its frustrating to me too believe me...lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: WOW one sitting??? Dang that's determination becasue I am LONG WINDED lol Thanks for taking the time to read through everything! Oh and I love Fee too. I love the little quirky minor characters. They bring so much life to the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: EEP Double read and review!!! I know what you mean! Charlotte's taking as much of a beating as Justin is. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YES guh its all about the little moments. Hopefully they will turn into bigger moments but who knows. Justin's such a dufus in this lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YES guh its all about the little moments. Hopefully they will turn into bigger moments but who knows. Justin's such a dufus in this lol Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: EEP I like the way you're thinking! He needs to see that there's more out there! He needs to open his friggin eyes! lol Glad you liked it Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: They're driving me crazy too man! All bouncin around in my brain and bein obnoxious. Hopefully that means the next update will come sooner rather than later lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!