Good grief!
I was literally gripping my laptop harder the more I read...at first I was like, "Wow. He actually ended it." Then the more I read I was like "WTF Mate?"
Just...Grr!
He needs to man up and not take that shit anymore! But then again...there's only so much of that put down shit that a man can take before he says to hell with it.
She literally treats Timbs like crap, and to be frank, I don't like it! Therefore she deserves to have her ass pushed into oncoming traffic, and I'd be more than happy to do it.
Just so Charlie and Justin can live happily ever after!
Author's Response: HAHAHA NINE LIVES!!!! Seriously this review is made of win. You cracked me up girl! Glad to see you're into it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
no no no he needs to be with charlotte not amelia aka the bitch >_>
umm....yes update soon please ^_^
Author's Response: Guh he doooooooes. Stupid stupid boy. Updates will hopefully come soon! Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
Author's Response: She DID deserve it. Lets hope it sticks! Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!
Author's Response: YES TRACE!!!! *cuddles him* He is becoming one of my favorite characters seriously! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Author's Response: I KNOW!!! Seriously the kid needs to man up and tell her what time it is! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY Justin's reaction to the dress was so much fun to write. That boy is coming around I swear lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
DAMN!!!! That's all I can say. I can't believe that she said that about him. I hope that he dumps her now for sure.
Author's Response: Explicitives are ALWAYS a plus in a review! They say so much! Here's hoping this time it got through his thick skull! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: WOW that's a marathon session there! Thanks for taking the time to go through and read everything. I'm glad you're enjoying and thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it! Justin and Charlie really are making some progress. Hopefully they keep it up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
oh for crap sakes!! is he friggen blind?!?!
i'll admit, at first i was feeling for the guy, and thinking of various ways to punch ameila's lights out, but then i'm like wait a second...he isn't completely innocent. he lets her pull this nonsense under the guise of "love", when in reality...he's got love staring him right in the face, in the form of charlotte.
even fictional men are morons!
anyway...loved it!
Author's Response: YES OMG! That is EXACTLY what I was going for! Realism of Justin's man moronic-ness! Glad you loved it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
“HEEEEEEEEEEEEY PARTY PEOPLE!!!!!”
LOL! OMG!
giiiirl! I dont even know where to begin! holyfuckingshit!
This 3part chapter was a damn roller coaster ride of emotions. First I was kinda sad with him playing the piano and Ameila... ugh.... being Ameila.
But Trace shows up he's just a ball of amusement. And i laugh and laugh.
Then Charlie shows up and YES YES YES! FINALLY! Justin's eyes start to open and hope is back. Then the coat... and the talking... then the bar convo with Trace and him rushing to save her. The dance! And the almost-kiss! OMGOMGOMG!
And then that BITCH ruined the night with the fucking candles! And why am I giving you a play by play? You wrote this! LOL!
Ok but yes... roller coaster! thats why I started rambling. But just WOW DUDE... best chapter ever. I know it was super long and you wont hear me complaining. But I hope it didn't run you dry and some more will be popping up soon? yes? please? I'm seriously dying to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: BAHAHAHA I love the "party people" part too. I could just SEE that in my head, like Charlotte reeming Trace out and then she looks over like O_O where's Justin? and then cut to him being sloppy ass drunk on stage hahahaha. Seriously I have so much fun writing this story *is a dork* I'm glad you liked the rollercoaster-ness. That was the main reason I didn't chop this up and post at different times. Didn't wanna lose the momentum. I'm not quite burnt out yet so hopefully updates by the end of the week *crosses fingers* Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
happy birthday to our king!! yes, i'm a lurker. great job on that and all the other ones you made before. ;o)
Author's Response: LURKER!!! You mustn't lurk you must PLAY with us lol We welcome any pervs! And we don't bite...well unless the king asks us too *giggle* I LOVE your reactions to the different parts of the section! I used to make my friend read it on the phone with me so I could hear her reactions hahaha. Glad you liked it girl! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad everyone is loving the three parts. I was afraid that people would be like HOLY CRAP I can't read all that but once again you guys have proved that you're awesome and are willing to sacrifice a little extra of your time. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
Author's Response: GUH I KNOOOOOOOOOOW!!! My head was about to explode from all the longness. And ROOOOOOXANNE is now on the list of songs I want JT to cover. I would probably pee myself if he did lol Glad you liked it bish. Thanks for readin and reviewin'
OH MY GOD !! YEAH BABY !! :D
oh please update soon ^_^
Author's Response: YAY that's awesome! I'm glad you liked it! Updates coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!