Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Feb 10, 2009 10:35 pm (Chapter 18 pt 4)
Does this bitch have nine lives or something?

Good grief!

I was literally gripping my laptop harder the more I read...at first I was like, "Wow. He actually ended it." Then the more I read I was like "WTF Mate?"

Just...Grr!

He needs to man up and not take that shit anymore! But then again...there's only so much of that put down shit that a man can take before he says to hell with it.

She literally treats Timbs like crap, and to be frank, I don't like it! Therefore she deserves to have her ass pushed into oncoming traffic, and I'd be more than happy to do it.

Just so Charlie and Justin can live happily ever after!

Author's Response: HAHAHA NINE LIVES!!!! Seriously this review is made of win. You cracked me up girl! Glad to see you're into it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 10, 2009 10:25 pm (Chapter 18 pt 4)

no no no he needs to be with charlotte not amelia aka the bitch >_>

umm....yes update soon please ^_^



Author's Response: Guh he doooooooes. Stupid stupid boy. Updates will hopefully come soon! Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Feb 08, 2009 02:05 pm (Chapter 18 pt 3)
Whoa, I think she the bitch deserved it. How dare she say those things. You go Justin! Show her what you're made of! Great update hun! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: She DID deserve it. Lets hope it sticks! Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Feb 03, 2009 03:13 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
Oh goodness. Justin is so busted! LoL. That was awesome though. Serves that girl right. Awesome job as usual. Glad you made us all wait for this chapter and that is was freakin LONG! Loved it! Anyway, fantastic job as usual, keep up the good work. I can't wait to see where this is gonna go. :) BTW- Love Trace's character in this story :) Hope more is coming soon! -Traci

Author's Response: YES TRACE!!!! *cuddles him* He is becoming one of my favorite characters seriously! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Feb 03, 2009 03:02 am (Chapter 18 pt 2)
Wow! There's no way he can NOT say something. The conversation between Molly and Amelia is just CRAZY! He seriously needs to lesve her, she's not worth his time at ALL. Fantastic chapter! Loved the saving of Charlotte that Justin did. :) Awesome job, going to finish reading now! -Traci

Author's Response: I KNOW!!! Seriously the kid needs to man up and tell her what time it is! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Feb 02, 2009 08:17 pm (Chapter 18 pt 1)
Loved Justin's reaction to Charlotte's dress... :) Awesome job with the beginning. I'm anxious to finish the chapter and see where this goes. Awesome job! -Traci

Author's Response: YAY Justin's reaction to the dress was so much fun to write. That boy is coming around I swear lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jbear (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 02:31 pm (Chapter 1)

DAMN!!!! That's all I can say. I can't believe that she said that about him. I hope that he dumps her now for sure.



Author's Response: Explicitives are ALWAYS a plus in a review! They say so much! Here's hoping this time it got through his thick skull! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Keediluv (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 03:30 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
I can't say anything but how wonderful this story is.  I've been reading since 7pm and it's about 3:30am now.  I just couldn't stop.  Justin is amazingly punkish, which is different for me.  Amelia...the word bi*** doesn't even seem to fit, like it's so much more than that you know.  I really love this story! Great work!

Author's Response: WOW that's a marathon session there! Thanks for taking the time to go through and read everything. I'm glad you're enjoying and thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



shan030709 (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 01:24 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
Praise Jesus Justin finally let loose and really heard what Amelia has been saying!!!  It's about time!!  Also, did Charlotte just admit she loved Justin?  I think so!!!  I am absolutely in love with this story.  I cannot wait to see what the aftermath of the party happens to be.  I am sure it will be interesting!!!

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it! Justin and Charlie really are making some progress. Hopefully they keep it up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



katethegreat (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 01:21 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)

oh for crap sakes!! is he friggen blind?!?!

i'll admit, at first i was feeling for the guy, and thinking of various ways to punch ameila's lights out, but then i'm like wait a second...he isn't completely innocent. he lets her pull this nonsense under the guise of "love", when in reality...he's got love staring him right in the face, in the form of charlotte.

even fictional men are morons!

anyway...loved it!



Author's Response: YES OMG! That is EXACTLY what I was going for! Realism of Justin's man moronic-ness! Glad you loved it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vikki (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 12:17 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)

“HEEEEEEEEEEEEY PARTY PEOPLE!!!!!”

LOL! OMG!

giiiirl! I dont even know where to begin! holyfuckingshit!

This 3part chapter was a damn roller coaster ride of emotions. First I was kinda sad with him playing the piano and Ameila... ugh.... being Ameila.

But Trace shows up he's just a ball of amusement. And i laugh and laugh.

Then Charlie shows up and YES YES YES! FINALLY! Justin's eyes start to open and hope is back. Then the coat... and the talking... then the bar convo with Trace and him rushing to save her. The dance! And the almost-kiss! OMGOMGOMG!

And then that BITCH ruined the night with the fucking candles! And why am I giving you a play by play? You wrote this! LOL!

Ok but yes... roller coaster! thats why I started rambling. But just WOW DUDE... best chapter ever. I know it was super long and you wont hear me complaining. But I hope it didn't run you dry and some more will be popping up soon? yes? please? I'm seriously dying to see what happens next! :)



Author's Response: BAHAHAHA I love the "party people" part too. I could just SEE that in my head, like Charlotte reeming Trace out and then she looks over like O_O where's Justin? and then cut to him being sloppy ass drunk on stage hahahaha. Seriously I have so much fun writing this story *is a dork* I'm glad you liked the rollercoaster-ness. That was the main reason I didn't chop this up and post at different times. Didn't wanna lose the momentum. I'm not quite burnt out yet so hopefully updates by the end of the week *crosses fingers* Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 12:17 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
girl, girl, GIRL! this was the bomb diggity! lol! oh man. so much to say. omgomgomg!helikesher!! gosh! well we knew it, but he freaking admitted it! i wanted to scream my head off. i love the frowns he would get when trace had his hand on her back, called her charlie, and his dislike for that stanford was pushing up on her. i live how he could picture her walking down the aisle towards him and how he mentioned her ringless fingers. i love how he got butterflies and was in awe then actually wondered if he'd feel that way when amelia walks towards him. you're only supposed to feel butterflies and be in awe of the person you love. hinthint. but gosh he admitted he likes her! and the pull they each felt throught this whole chapter. gosh. i was so pulled in by it. like i could feel my own self! haha. honestly, i know justin has taken a whole bunch from amelia, but the convo he overheard between her and her mom takes the cake. takes everything. when i read the last thing she said about him not having it, i seriously just put my head down and shook it in dsibelief. i could hear the instant rip in his heart. i could just feel the pain he had to be feeling. the one you love and still have hope for just basically said she doesn't believe in you and you are pretty much a puppet. he's like not even human to her! i don't see how he could want to be with her after this. i just can't grasp that. and she meant what she said cause she was talking candidly to her mom. i wanted to punch her so bad. haha. ugh. i just want him with charlie so bad. she really makes him truly happy, and she believes in him and the music and talent that is in his blood. i loved their convo during the dance. it was so sweet and *sigh*. and i love how michael caught their intimate moments together. hopefully they can have them framed once they get together. winkwinknudgenudge. haha. ok, i'm sorry. i just had to get all that off my chest. wonderful update. you always grab me and get me going with each new update. i can't wait to read more
happy birthday to our king!! yes, i'm a lurker. great job on that and all the other ones you made before. ;o)

Author's Response: LURKER!!! You mustn't lurk you must PLAY with us lol We welcome any pervs! And we don't bite...well unless the king asks us too *giggle* I LOVE your reactions to the different parts of the section! I used to make my friend read it on the phone with me so I could hear her reactions hahaha. Glad you liked it girl! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



jep77 (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 10:24 pm (Chapter 17)
posting on this chapter cause i don't want to be tempted yet,....but i love that the next chapter is 3 parts!!!

Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad everyone is loving the three parts. I was afraid that people would be like HOLY CRAP I can't read all that but once again you guys have proved that you're awesome and are willing to sacrifice a little extra of your time. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 09:47 pm (Chapter 18 pt 3)
ROOOOOOOOOOXANE!!!!!!!!! I shall now have that song (along with ooooooh waaaaaaaah oooooooooh) stuck in my head for a week hahaha...well we had a glimpse of what appeared to be a soul in Amelia last section, only to realize in this section that her soul is still frozen over with chunks of glacial ice.  This was also quite possibly the longest section I've ever read *snigger* *poke* but you know I loved it anyway :)  Oh and the description of Amelia's mom kicked ass.

Author's Response: GUH I KNOOOOOOOOOOW!!! My head was about to explode from all the longness. And ROOOOOOXANNE is now on the list of songs I want JT to cover. I would probably pee myself if he did lol Glad you liked it bish. Thanks for readin and reviewin'



MissM69 (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 06:16 pm (Chapter 18 pt 3)

OH MY GOD !! YEAH BABY !! :D

oh please update soon ^_^



Author's Response: YAY that's awesome! I'm glad you liked it! Updates coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!





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