I want my dog to gnaw Amelia's leg off. WHILE she watches a video-tape of Justin and Charlie dancing together on repeat. With the phrase "This is what a couple in love should look like"
that is all.
Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHA Okay Ally you win. That is by far the best Amelia torture I've heard yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: EEP Justin and Charlotte DEFINITELY deserve a happily ever after. We'll see.... lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YESSSSSSSSSSS *booty pops* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked it! Updates HOPEFULLY by the end of the week. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
yes! he finally realized what a you know Amelia is! I know u have school but still update soon!!!
Author's Response: YESSSS It's about time right! Hopefully I'll have updates by the end of the week! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
“Oh don’t even worry about it,” Amelia says and he can hear the meanness in her voice. “I’ve heard what he’s been working on. It’s nothing. He’s nowhere near the musician he used to be. His voice is weak. His melodies are trite and uninspired. There’s no way he’d make it. He doesn’t have it in him anymore.”
I could kill her. I really could. I hate her. It's official.
Now on to the good stuff: Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!! He likes her!!!!!!!!!!!!! And she likes him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Progress has been made! Now we just have to get rid of that damn Amelia. May I suggest she get hit by a bus? Or a ferris wheel? Can we get her dangerously close to a ferris wheel?
These were awesome, awesome, awesome chapters. I thought it was awesome when Justin was gawking at Charlie. Then I thought it was awesome that he was dancing with Charlie. Then...he started drunk singing. I love you. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah Amelia should have her tongue cut out for sayin that about our boy. AND HIT BY A FERRIS WHEEL!!!! HAHAHAHAHA We'll send her out to Coney Island! And girl I have been looking forward to writing the drunk singing since I STARTED this story hahahah I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
hahahah yesssss loooooves shitfaced!justin. and honestly, amelia reminds me of this girl that keeps popping up randomly every time i'm out... and every time i look at her face, i want to kick it. and i was like kickball superstar.
anyway... charlie/justin sexy time nowwwwww!!!! i can't deal with the tension anymore.
project: eliminate amelia & get charlie and justin in bed together. yesyesyessss.
Author's Response: BAHAHAHAH I must a agree a kick to the face might do Amelia a lot of good! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA!!! Yes Amelia is totally and completely evil I will agree! And Charlotte! Sweet little Charlie! She DID look a million times better in her dress than Amelia! Don't worry the next update is already in the works. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
Author's Response: PFT girl Amelia isn't cool enough to rock the name Roxanne and OBVOIUSLY you are!!! Glad you enjoyed it! And Happy Birthday to our King!!! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Bahahahaha yeah some party right? Poor Justin *sigh* Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
So aside from my heart breaking for Justin when he was overhearing his future un-future mother-in-law and future ex-fiance talking about how he was a washed up musician that needed to be controlled... I loved this chapter. Actually I loved that too, it just hurt to read because I wanted to cunt-punch "Amelia" (Roxanne -- GENIUS) so badly. I love how Justin is clearly falling for Charlotte, and how Amelia totally notices. I love how he named all of the things you would want in a life partner when he was describing her and how she takes care of him without even having to do much. I love that Charlotte didn't deny being in love with Justin in any way shape or form anymore. And oh yea, that part where they had a wedding dance and he almost kissed her. That was perfect. Also, I freaking love Trace.
I could keep going, but I think what should happen instead is that you should write faster and stop torturing me! k thanks, ttys! hahaha
But really though... I love it.
Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA yessssss "Amelia" definitely needs a "cunt-punch" hahahaha that's awesome! I remember when I was naming the characters I wanted to name her after a song so Justin would sing it all the time and I REALLY wanted it to be Roxanne but that seemed so un-Amelia. Then I thought how perfect would it be if she CHANGED her name or didn't go by her first name like she was SUCH a control freak that she even picked her own name hahahaha Oooooooh Amelia. And nice catch with the parallels between Justin and Charlotte's dance as a wedding dance. I was worried people wouldn't get that. And Trace is made of win in this story I'm so happy with how his character is progressing. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it! Updates hopefully by the end of the week! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it! More coming soon I promise! Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
OMG, why is Amelia so evil? I'm seriously waiting for the chapter where we discover that she sold her soul to the devil at some point!
I like the Justin/Trace scenes and of course I love love love the Justin/Charlotte moments. I like how he's just realizing that he likes her and Trace had to point it out to him. Boys are so slow!
Fabulous update as usual. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA That's what I love about Justin in this story. He's so completely delusional and its frustrating but oh so adorable at the same time. And it allows for Trace to come in and be awesome lol I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Guh she has it coming I swear! Justin needs to hold onto his balls while he still has them and tell Amelia what time it is lol I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
