Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Shufflee (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 03:17 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
and it was worth the wait.

Author's Response: Awesome! Good to know it was worth it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Shufflee (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 03:12 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
hahaha damn damn damn

Author's Response: YAY YAY YAY lol! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 03:11 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo.....

You can't stop there!

I cannot contain myself right now!

HAHAHHAHA Satan's Wife finally got what she deserved!!

My only to concerns are this...

Justin surviving this.
and
Charlie and Justin having hot, steamy, pent up passion for four months, sex!

I'm even more addicted than I was before!

Author's Response: *snigger* I thought it was a rather nice place to end it. Don't worry another section is coming up pretty quick. I was gonna tack it onto the end of this one but this one was long enough as it is *headdesk* I'm really glad you're liking it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 03:01 am (Chapter 18 pt 2)
Bitch. That's all she is. In fact calling her a bitch is a compliment! Ugh, thoroughly disgusted with her.

But kudos for getting me so worked up!

I love it!

I didnt mention it before but the more Trace is in the story the more I love the man. Seriously, he's a man after my own heart. I would have done all that myself, I venture to say I would have shown up to his party in the toga!

Author's Response: YAY for worked up! That's what I aim for! And seriously I LOVE writing Trace. He's such a goofball and so much fun to work with. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 02:57 am (Chapter 18 pt 3)
WAY TO GO JUSTIN!!! Send that bitch packing. If everything Justin does, thinks, wants, is; is wrong, why does she still want him? I think that he needs to jump that bitch and get together with Charlie. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Yeah about time the boy stood up for himself. Although maybe not the BEST way to do it...hahahah but it was certainly entertaining! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 02:36 am (Chapter 18 pt 1)
Ok...I tried. I really, really, really tried to overlook it. I tried to look past this person to try and see the old person shine thru...but damn.

Amelia is a bitch!

Ok...that's my review for this part. LMAO. On to the next one.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA But she's tryyyyyying...*cough* so she says*cough* What? lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



alimera (Signed) on Jan 11, 2009 10:58 am (Chapter 17)
Ugh NO. I was fully expecting Amelia to jump up and down and Justin was going to see that she's nothing but a bossy bitch and HARDLY a woman worth marrying but nooooooooo. She had to actually look like she was trying to listen. Ugh. Can I just tell you that this line: "Amelia nods “For her dress for the party. I gave her one of the wedding dresses I’m not using,” " totally made me space out and have a vision of Amelia doing something awful right before the wedding and/or Justin realizing that Charlotte is the right girl for him and they don't even have to plan a wedding because she already has a dress and a venue...but then that dream disappeared in a puff of smoke and I realized that I could just have an extremely overactive imagination. Guilty, lol. Well, hope school doesn't take you away from us for too long...and you can update again soon!!

Author's Response: That Amelia. she's a crafty sucker lol. Just when you think you know her she goes and shows that she does have a soul hiding in there somewhere. I LIKE your over active imagination! I love hearing where people think it's gonna go. That's a lot of the fun of writing this. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Jan 10, 2009 02:19 am (Chapter 17)

Wow, I love Amelia, but that reaction was a surprise! A little voice in my head, though, is saying that it won't last long (if it was even real--homegirl WOULD be that manipulative), and even if it does, it doesn't matter because Justin and Charlie have to get together at some point. LOL Not that I’m (that) disappointed about that. As far as Amelstin goes, I've just accepted that, as much as Justin and Amelia may have fit together in the past, they just don't anymore and no matter how much shape-shifting either of them does, I think they're ultimately in different places looking for different things. Hopefully, the break-up will be amicable-ish, because as we know, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned and Amelia WOULD be the one to hunt his ass down for dumping her for Charlotte. lol

 

What I really love about this story is the fact that you don't love or hate any of the characters. They all have flaws, but they all have redeeming qualities, you want to punch them in one scene, and hug them in the next, which is probably why it's so hard to pick a side! Plus, I love how the title applies to each character and works into all the storylines... It's really cool.

 

Also! And this is SUPER random, but, I don't know if you watch "The Office," but for some reason Amelia reminds me of Angela (pretty straight-laced, uptight, opinionated, bitchy) and Justin sorta reminds me of Andy, Angela's fiance (kinda hammy, doting, sometimes clueless, goofy and bubbly). It's pretty funny actually. lol. Anyway! More soon!!!



Author's Response: OMG THE OFFICE!!!! I never made that connection before but you're kinda right!!! That's so weird!!! I'm so glad you like that you can't love or hate any of the characters. That's really what I'm going for and its the challenge of writing this story. I've said from the beginning that it's an experimentation with character and what drives people to do the things they do. I'm really proud of how it's turning out and of course I'm glad you're enjoying it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MyHobby81 (Signed) on Jan 09, 2009 07:15 pm (Chapter 1)

You MUST update faster. This story is like crack, meth, and espresso all at once. Although I'm guessing about the first two :)

 

 



Author's Response: I'm workin on it I swear! School started up again so it's harder to keep on a schedule but I'm workin' on it. Glad you're likin it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Jan 07, 2009 10:04 pm (Chapter 17)
not liking amelia becomes a conflict when reading this update. it's hard to be like, "ugh i hate her!" when reading it through justin's pov like that. he was so hopeful, and how he could see the old her coming back, and she's shifting awkwardly and stuttering and really trying, it almost made me be like, "whoop! stick with her!"...almost. aha! you almost got me! lol as uncomfortable as it made me feel at times since i was like, "yay a breakthrough!" then immediately, "but no! he needs charlie!" i really enjoyed reading this update. but of course, change doesn't come overnight and i don't think things are going to be ok for very long.

Author's Response: YAY CONFLICTED EMOTIONS!!! EXACTLY what I was going for with this chapter! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jan 07, 2009 03:14 am (Chapter 17)
Justin...you are in such denial it's not even FUNNY! What a great chapter. I was glad to see Justin put his foot down and stand up for something. I just don't know how this is gonna work out. I loved that the first thing he wanted to do was tell Charlotte. :) Cute! Awesome job as usual. Good luck with your new semester mine starts in Feb :) I still have a few weeks to enjoy. Hope more is coming soon! -Traci

Author's Response: GUH FEBUARY!!!! *jelliiiiiiiiis* Yeah school's gonna kick my ass this quarter. My time management skills are certainly gonna get a work out! Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vikki (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 11:17 pm (Chapter 17)

she needs to add actress to her freakin resume.... fake ass bitch.

UGH! this chapter was an emotional rollar coaster, lol! at first i was worried, thinking Justin would cave and meet her at the sushi place.

then i was shocked beyond belief when she showed up. but her pissy attitude began pissing me off. but WOW she actually has a heart? and I think that ... well... maybe she's not Satan and I began noticing why Justin was so hung up on her.

BUT SURPRISE! Bitch showed up again! Justin better listen to the inkling of doubt that's nagging at him. its called intuition baby... eat your pork pulled sandwitch and wake the fuck up! lol!

*sigh* ... if this story was reality I think i'd pull all my hair out by now, lol! :)



Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA VIKKI! I love your review! Hearing your reactions to the key parts of the chapter is awesome and great because they're the exact reactions I was looking for! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 10:24 pm (Chapter 17)
Is that...is that actually a glimpse of a soul I see in Amelia?  I think I must be hallucinating...because we all know Amelia has no soul lol

Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA She is indeed quite souless I must agree. Who knows maybe Amelia's turning around? Maybe they'll live happily ever after and have little blond babies in Dolce & Gabanna chest carriers? *snigger* Thanks for readin and reviewin bish!!!



hp5010 (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 09:40 pm (Chapter 17)

Yeah, Justin, keep telling yourself y'all will be ok and it will magically happen...

 

Good update, I'm glad Justin finally stood up to her.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully Justin will leave behind his doormat-y ways! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 04:23 pm (Chapter 17)
He can’t help but realize that somewhere in the back of his mind an inkling of doubt is nagging at him. Something in the way Amelia looked at him, a mix of frustration and tolerance and something else he couldn’t quite place.

Go with that feeling, Justin. She's not gonna change!

Author's Response: You tell him Roz. The boy is certainly not listening to me lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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