Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
MissM69 (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 09:52 am (Chapter 17)

now that's what I call putting somebody in their place you go justin :P

 

update soon :D



Author's Response: YES! He's finally coming around! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 03:33 am (Chapter 17)

Yes finally he spoke an told her what he wanted. but i can't help but think this is going to be the end of them... hmmm great update girl! please update soon



Author's Response: It's about damn time right? I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 03:33 am (Chapter 17)
Okay I just started reading this (I don't know WHY I waited so long to do so) and I have a few gripes...

*clears throat*

This bitch is like Godzilla, all the dinosaurs from Jurassic Park, the Boogey man, and Chucky all rolled into one. By bitch I mean Amelia. I mean damn. And she's calling the Sexy Beast (Justin) selfish? She's about as selfish as they come. I don't think I've read anything where the girl is THAT big of a bitch. I mean I really wanted to just come through the screen and slap the ever loving mess out of the ho! God, I hope Charlie tells him about the whole plot to catch him with Patti deal. Grrr...

I said I had a few gripes...but she was the only one. I mean hell that woman is enough to make any person feel like they have a million gripes.

Anyway, I love it. I can't wait for the next update!! Like..NOW! LOL. Honestly though...awesomeness!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAH Godzilla and the SexyBeast!!! Some power couple huh? Glad you took the time to catch up and super glad you're liking it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Joy (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 02:34 am (Chapter 17)
Nooooooo! They're supposed to call it all off. End it. Splitsville. lol :( Justin needs to start seeing what everyone else sees already or at least let Trace offer him some guidance.

Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!!! Justin's a stubborn bastard. Don't worry Trace will make another appearence soon and hopefully knock some sense into him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Karlita (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:57 am (Chapter 17)
Aww, I love how adorably naive he is.  He's such a good guy.  It's sweet that he's trying so hard to make things work with Amelia, but one conversation isn't going to fix a broken relationship.  Plus he's always thinking about Charlotte because he knows deep down that she's so much better for him than the bitch.  Great update as usual. 

Author's Response: He really is incredibly naive so much so that it kinda breaks my heart. Hopefully he gets his head on straight soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:43 am (Chapter 17)
Oh, Justin. Poor, naive Justin. Blindy desperate to believe Justin. *shakes head* Tisk, tisk. I love the boy but he is in for a world of disappointment. Nothing changes that fast especially when that something's name is Amelia. I feel bad for him because I know that she'll go back to her old ways and he'll be so hurt. :( I'm glad that he stood up to her, though. I'm glad that he finally stood up for himself and wasn't swayed by Amelia as usual. And I admire that he wants to try and make their relationship work. He loves her and he wants to be with her so badly. It's kind of romantic. Makes me like him more that he's so dedicated to her and their relationship. And here goes the crazy: I actually kind of like Amelia now. *end of the world undoubtedly approaches* This chapter was awesomeness, missy. Please update soon.

Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHA "blindly desperate to believe Justin" That cracked me up! I agree there is something really noble and romantic about Justin and his determination to make it work with Amelia. Its also really kinda sad *pets him* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



SJane (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:35 am (Chapter 17)
I think its more wisful thinking on justins part that shell change I mean once a robot always a robot lol
Mind u maybe he needs to take more notice when he has all these things and ppl reminding him of charlie, I mean its can't just be for shits and giggles

Author's Response: I agree! Amelia's not going to change over night but she seems to be making some sort of progress. Who knows how long it will last. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:01 am (Chapter 17)
He just needs to dump the stuck up bitch and go to Charlie. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this so much. PMS

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA I agree!! Guh silly Justin and his hopeful albeit delusional ways lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



band nerd (Signed) on Jan 05, 2009 11:04 pm (Chapter 17)

They are SO not ok!  omg break them up and get him with Charoltte!

 

I can see Amelia being really mean to her soonl   omg more more more!



Author's Response: Iagreeomg! But you can't tell that boy anything *sigh* He's all in love and hopefully and determined *siiiiiiiigh* I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



violet (Signed) on Jan 05, 2009 11:04 pm (Chapter 17)

Oh poor delusional Justin... Going to be okay... *insert gagging noise here* If they're going to be okay why does he keep thinking of Charlotte?? Sometimes I just want to slam his head against a wall I swear. Of course that would hurt him and we can't hurt JT...much...

 

Awesome update!  I have been keeping up but I just haven't had time to review...sillyme... I just adore your writing. The way you create the characters and take things slowly just amazes me and I wish I could do it so beautifully. *smooch* Talk to you soon! :)



Author's Response: Awwww I got this really funny visual of Justin being like "I love her" and someone just grabbing him by the neck and slamming his head into a wall and he's just like *blink* "Okay I needed that" lol I'm glad you've been reading Jo! Thanks for droppin me a line! We wanna see you in JTPC more girl! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jan 04, 2009 03:21 am (Chapter 16)
Wow. That was a great chapter. Awesome job gurlie. Finally Justin is seeing the light! Now all he has to do is see Charlotte and it's all good! Anyway, I hope more is coming soon. Sorry it took me so long to review the holidays were CrAzY! I hope you had a good one! TTYL -Traci

Author's Response: Oh girl I know all about holiday craziness! Glad you liked the chapter! The next one should be out in the next couple days. It's done i'm just tweaking before I send it to edits. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Karlita (Signed) on Dec 29, 2008 08:34 pm (Chapter 16)
Okay, I've officially had enough of Amelia.  I tried to give her the benefit of the doubt, but she's just horrible!  I so wanted Charlotte to stab her with a fork.  Poor Justin.  He needs to realize that Amelia's not the same woman he fell in love with and, oh yeah, that Charlotte is perfect for him! Love this story.  Update again soon please.   

Author's Response: STAB HER WITH A FORK!!!!! That's AWESOME!!! lol I'm glad you're lovin the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 07:16 pm (Chapter 16)
Seriously before this story is over, you HAVE to let charlie tell amelia off. Please I am begging you! My heart ached in my chest just reading the first part and charlie just taking it like that. It makes me so sad and that's sad...how upset I got over it. Haha. and why does amelia feel she has authority over what justin wants and needs? That is absolutely insane! Nobody should have authority over their significant other! Charlie just actually listens and cares about Justin and what he wants, unlike his fiance! Ugh! Oh and amelia has definitely made a mistake in thinking justin couldn't possibly fall for charlie. Mistake on her end, but great for charlie, justin, and us readers. Lol! Great revelation justin. It didn't go as far as I would have liked (yet) but it's great for now. I can't believe he has let her make him a shell of a person. You love that person?!? He loves who she used to be but he's certainly not IN love with her. He will realize and acknowledge that soon I hope. Charlie should have just told him the truth. He may have been mad, but he'd get over it once he woke up. And his reasons for giving up music, his blood, and the fact that the person that supposedly loves him and that he loves made him do it for those reasons...Biggest.Doormat.Ever! How sad. For a little while it seemed like charlie was the love interest in a romantic music video staring justin. Haha. I can't wait until you update again. You always get me going. Haha. :o)

Author's Response: Justin is very doormat-like I must agree. Hopefully he wakes the hell up soon. Who knows how Amelia's going to take his newest revelation. I'm glad you're liking it and I'm glad I've got you going!!! That's what I'm here for lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Dec 27, 2008 10:09 pm (Chapter 16)
GUH I loved the scene with Amelia and Charlotte, their dialogue was spot-on and I'm glad that Charlotte is finally building up a LITTLE bit of courage.  The scene with Justin and Charlie was also very pivotal as well, he's finally starting to see a bit of Amelia's true character...we'll see how all that works out for him lol

Author's Response: EEP YAY for DIO!!! bish you KNOW how hard that shit is for me lol Thanks for readin and reviewin bish!!!



alimera (Signed) on Dec 27, 2008 11:52 am (Chapter 16)
It breaks my heart to see Justin this helpless--he really should cut Amelia loose, she's OBVIOUSLY not right for him. Charlie on the other hand, is an amazing choice lol. Update again soon!!

Author's Response: I know my heart really does go out to Justin. He's really just trapped. Charlotte should help him with that lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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