Author's Response: I LOVE TRACE TOO!!!! He's seriously so underappreciated in fanfic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: EEP me too!!! But you know these characters. They're so stubborn lol Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Guh I'm like a crack head with this story lol. Can you make Amelia go away? Just for me please =) lol. I was grinning like a fool while reading this, I love Millington!Justin, and Trace and Rachel. You made my ovaries melt, Daddy!Justin is just love. Oh and I'm glad Amelia doesn't want children, Justin can't have children with that "See you next Tuesday".
What I love even more is the Jack and Johnny Cash, Heather you are simply amazing <3.
Author's Response: Wow I'm really glad you're likinng it! Nothing like a little Jack and Cash to round out the chapter. I've been waiting to write that forever lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I'm so glad to see that Justin's family is a little frosty towards Asshole...oh sorry Amelia lol i mean they don't do it so it's blantantly obvious but you can still feel it.
I love how at least Trace feels like he hasn't changed still the southern boy we love lol
great update love at home Justin
Author's Response: BAHAHAHA ASSHOLE!!!! That's hilarious! Trace and Justin are really so much fun to write! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: EEP yessssss Justin and Trace: Bodyguards *giggle* There's a fic in that in itself! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Awww good for Justin and Trace! I still feel bad for Charlotte, but I am glad she is realizing that it could be worse, that at least Justin's family is awesome.
But why is Justin with a woman that everyone in his life clearly hates???
Author's Response: Justin's family is serioulsy love and I adore writing them! And all will be revealed in time I swear. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Okay, proper review time:
-Amelia is a cunt. Plain and simple. I progressively dislike her more and more and I keep having to remind myself that she's not real, except I have to deal with very real-like version of her (albeit producers, but whatevs) every day so mostly I just want to make a dartboard with her face on it.
-Justin is wonderfully charming in this, though I hope he isn't legitimately giving Amelia to be as manipulative/calculating with him as she has been.
-Charlotte is love. But I wish she'd learn to speak up for herself (I know, I know, she can't, but a girl can dream, yeah?)
Anyway, point being, you've done a really lovely job of drawing out three very distinct characters who glide easily from one extreme to the next in terms of personality traits. And honey, your dialogue is FINE. :) Great work, doll!
P.S. Don't worry about the graphic, I've got a temp one so whenever you have time, I remember how school bullshit goes.
Author's Response: YAY god dialogue is the hardest part for me I swear. I love the recognition of the characters! I've said from the beginning that I REALLY wanted this to be a character driven story and its good to know I'm accomplishing that. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA "break off a thing of two" I like that! And as far as a love/sexfest I have no idea what you're talking about *whistles* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah I feel you. Money can't buy her Christmas with her family. I'm glad you're liking it. Hopefully more will come next week *prays for some free time* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I dunnooooo Patti's a hot little thing and Justin...well he has needs...soooooo I dunno you'll just have to wait and see *snigger* Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
Author's Response: YAY! Seriously I've been waiting to write this upcoming part of the story for SO LONG so I hope you guys are gonna like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA you calling Amelia a tard seriously made my day!!! I love all your insights on the characters and as the story progresses we're gonna get more into all of the characters I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Well I don't know if he is. I mean they're engaged! *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Awwww thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'm hoping to get my next update out in a week or so but this internet sitch is Ca-Ray-Zay right now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
