WOW OR WOW! This was a fun read, I was gonna review every chapter but I don't think I needed to, love the way you mentioned each of the guys POV.. :D
Pretty good job on this.
Author's Response:
Thank you love! I had a good time with the first one so I had to do something that reached that level of intensity. Hope that was conveyed!
Ki
Author's Response:
Lol thanks honey!!
Ki
Um Hi...can I just say that I never read visuals and you know this, but I read because I heart you soooo much! That said, I'm glad I did. You're so good with emotions and helping the reader to envision what's going on. I could feel the music, I could see the night club, the outfits and the...toys. It was all so real, and you say I'm awesome?My favorite part was JC's, and I don't ever read JC!
You are awesomeness :) I'm going to read all of your stuff!
Author's Response:
Aww honey, thank you! It's crazy because I never think of it from the reader's perspective but I like to make sure you know what the character's going through in the moment. I'm glad you liked JC's part as I love him and you were supposed to lol. Again, thank you for the compliment....it means more than you'll ever know :)
Ki
Girl, you know that was the hottest thing ever, and I'd gladly have a housewarming party like that constantly.
So hot! Thank you so much. You're awesome. <3
Author's Response: Aww you're more than welcome mama! I'm glad you liked it, as was my goal. :)
Author's Response: Thank you honey! I wanted it to come across strong and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it! :)
Author's Response: I FUCKIN LOVE YOU!!! Thanks doll! I'm glad the point came across and I'm so glad you loved it. Thank you for reviewing, it means more than you know. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me how you felt about it. It's the longest story I've ever written for *NSYNC so I'm glad for your review. Thanks again love! :)
I'd be in the mood for whatever to. Look, just to be with that man is suffice. But, damn it all, if I don't NEED more. Let's get this going. I would not give up to til I got what I needed. Ooh wee, jesus, I need some water.
Great job missy!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was thinking that I had never read a story like this but I didn't want to go to far into detail because I didn't know how it would be received. But, I'm so glad you liked it mama! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Author's Response: That's okay honey! I'm just glad yoiu got a chance to read it. I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Can you ever get enough with JC? Really? You know you can't! LOL! Anyway, thanks for the review mama :)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it. I've been playing around with the idea for a while. Thanks for reviewing mama :)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it. I've been playing around with the idea for a while. Thanks for reviewing mama :)
Author's Response: Thank you girl. The concept was so crazy that I had to jut go there you know? As for this being the end....who knows? LOL! Thank you again, I really appreciate it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I was looking for some kind of way to build the anticipation from chapter to chapter so I'm glad that worked out. I would love to do anything to JC so I know where your coming from ;). Thanks again honey!
Hahahahha! Thats a good one..love it!
Author's Response: This was my first time writing something like this involving Joey so I didn't want to go too far just yet. Getting my feet wet, seeing if it feels right. It feels right, lol. Thanks again :)
YES! :D
Author's Response: LOL! Yes indeed mama! Thanks for reviewing :)
