Comments For This Time Around
Vessy (Signed) on Jun 06, 2008 04:48 am (Chapter 4)
Another good chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 05, 2008 02:58 pm (Chapter 4)
So he DOES like her. That won't be a problem at all. LOL. Please update soon.
MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 04, 2008 09:16 pm (Chapter 3)
Is Trace jealous or what? I'm confused about how he feels. Maybe he's just being protective. Hmmmmm. Please update soon.
Author's Response: we will find out soon :) Thanks
Author's Response: we will find out soon :) Thanks
Vessy (Signed) on Jun 04, 2008 05:14 am (Chapter 3)
great chapter!
Author's Response: THANKS :) I'll have another chapter out soon :)
Author's Response: THANKS :) I'll have another chapter out soon :)
SJane (Signed) on Jun 04, 2008 04:47 am (Chapter 3)
I think trace is just being protective lord knows I would if I was in his place. I love how ur hammering these updates out, lets hope u keep it up lol no pressure :)
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
I will I proimse. I should have another one done tomorrow.. maybe even two :) THANKS!!!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 04, 2008 01:55 am (Chapter 3)
Aww, I really like this. But dang Kiki for enduring all this abuse and it's so sad because these things happen in real life and you have to wonder what goes through these women minds. I think it's the fear that makes them stay. Anyway, it's good. Keep updating, I want to see how Kiki and Justin get along. I think Trace is jealous. idk. lol update soon.
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
I will have a new chapter out tomorrow :) we will see how mr. ayala feels :)
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jun 04, 2008 01:32 am (Chapter 3)
another update? you are on a roll...i love how trace is so protective over her...justin too. can't wait to see what you have developing between justin and kristina. of course i don't have to say it but i will...can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: THANKS :) I had a slow day yesterday... I will be busting them out as fast as i can. Another chapter tomorrow i promise!
Author's Response: THANKS :) I had a slow day yesterday... I will be busting them out as fast as i can. Another chapter tomorrow i promise!
SJane (Signed) on Jun 03, 2008 09:57 pm (Chapter 2)
i think that was sweet that she has people to rely on... justin kind of came out of nowhere tho lol not complaing tho
Author's Response: i know right? oh well... thanks :)
Author's Response: i know right? oh well... thanks :)
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jun 03, 2008 05:15 pm (Chapter 2)
great update!! i like the little twist at the end 'cuz you had me thinking it was trace when it was really justin...good job. can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Yeah cuz you didn't just make my day :) Thanks!! I'll have more soon i promise!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jun 02, 2008 06:50 pm (Chapter 1)
i like it so far...update soon!
