OliviaShawReel (Signed) on Feb 29, 2020 07:30 pm (
Chapter 1)
Love this story, omg! I know it's been years, but hopefully one day we can see it completed. I enjoyed their relationship and the fact that JC's characteristics were completely on point! Good job. Now onto Cornflake University...
mollyanna5 (Signed) on Sep 20, 2012 10:59 pm (
Chapter 17)
I just the entire thing, you can't leave it there! Finish it please!!!
Megan (Anonymous) on May 09, 2012 03:31 am (
Chapter 17)
Well SHIT! Not sure how I ever missed this story but Im so happy I stumbled upon it while browsing threw looking for a good JC story! First I must say, I am a MN girl and I love how you put that aspect into your story. I can picture all the landmarks and places you described. Second, I LOVE THIS STORY! I am sad to see JC being such a selfish bastard. And I am also REALLY sad to see that you haven't updated since 2008....holy crap. I really hope you haven't forgotten or given up on this story because I wanna know how it ends! :)
Vikki (Signed) on Nov 30, 2008 04:23 pm (
Chapter 17)
omg! you DID update! when i got the email I thought I was hallucinating... LOL!
JC can't let her go! I need a big sappy dramatic airport moment with a bad 80's song in the next chapter or something. He needs her! Doesn't she see how messed up he is? he has to open up a little and let her know whats going on. poor JC... he seriously needs a hug.
man i missed this couple.... you know i love this story so please update soon missy!
hp5010 (Signed) on Nov 23, 2008 06:04 pm (
Chapter 17)
Wow... Good update. Hopefully this is the wakeup call he needs. Can't wait to read more.
SJane (Signed) on Nov 23, 2008 07:48 am (
Chapter 17)
So I finally got around to reading ur story on full and I love it so far.
My heart broke for jc in this chapter losing all he did in 1 go...yeah he may have had a hand in each thing but still that's gotta hurt
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Nov 22, 2008 11:02 am (
Chapter 17)
Aww damn girl, I think you just broke MY heart as well. Not a good ending for these two... so quick fix it! I don't like seeing my JC is down and broken, but damn he does need to more flexible... well more flexible in relationships because I am sure he is plenty flexible in other areas of life.
Vikki (Signed) on Oct 21, 2008 09:05 pm (
Chapter 16)
I have been looking so hard for a good JC story on here...its like a freakin needle in a haystack! LOL!
I love this story...read all 16 chapters and now have to bust ass on everything i needed to do today that i didnt...damn it! ;)
I noticed you havent updated since sept....please update soon k? pretty please! I'm already hooked!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! Rest assured, I have not forgotten about this story. Live has been hectic - Quit my job and and am moving this weekend. But once things settle a bit I am picking it back up - I promise! Thanks for the review, it means a lot! Don't get many - lol
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Sep 03, 2008 10:21 pm (
Chapter 16)
I feel something is still brewing between them fight wise... I hope it doesn't all build up and then explode because both seem to be alittle snippy... Glad to see that you updated Mel! I can't believe it took me a few days to find it!
soxy58 (Signed) on Aug 17, 2008 06:14 pm (
Chapter 15)
Dramz! I love it Mellie!
soxy58 (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 08:43 pm (
Chapter 14)
Whee! I love that they were singing Sweet Caroline. :)
_Kay (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 09:45 am (
Chapter 14)
you're writing is amazing..i love the story..keep it coming ! ! !
Jorie611 (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 03:56 am (
Chapter 14)
Another wonderful update! :)
The sing along and the sex in the woods were both cute ideas and well thought up. I am wondering how JC will actually win Hannah's mother over for good and what's next for these two. Can't wait for more!
DaniD (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 02:02 am (
Chapter 14)
Shoot..I thought JC had her Mom there..but stupid phone! lol
These two are such a great couple...but something has got to give. Actually Hannah's idea wasn't so bad! Hope they can make it work..but I feel like I'm being lured into a false sense of security! haha
Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks, Dani! Glad you enjoyed it. I like Hannah's idea quite a bit myself, if I may say so ;)
Mel514 (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 12:37 am (
Chapter 1)
My favorite fiction couple, Mel! Loved this chapter :)
Author's Response: Aww thanks Mel! Glad you're liking it!
