Comments For Right in Front of Me
LuLu (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 10:26 pm (Chapter 13)
My crystal ball says Selah's going to be on the receiving end of a drunk dial from Justin. She did forgot to add that to the screening process... Can't wait to see what happens "down under". LoL
Author's Response: Hahaha, a drunk dial? Well I'm not too sure about that, but I can definitely say that Justin will be putting that number to use and yes, "down under" is going to very interesting as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Hahaha, a drunk dial? Well I'm not too sure about that, but I can definitely say that Justin will be putting that number to use and yes, "down under" is going to very interesting as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
mscomplex (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 10:18 pm (Chapter 13)
This just keeps getting better and better. I hope something verrryyy interesting happens... involving that phone number ;) Update sooon! (ps this is Rox :) )
Author's Response: Hey girlie! Well I'm glad you are enjoying it and I can say that yes, something interesting is going to happen with phone number. ; ) Thanks for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Hey girlie! Well I'm glad you are enjoying it and I can say that yes, something interesting is going to happen with phone number. ; ) Thanks for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 10:07 pm (Chapter 13)
Great chapter He better, and I mean BETTER, put that number to good use. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hahaha, oh believe me girl I can actually say that he will. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Hahaha, oh believe me girl I can actually say that he will. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Tash2 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 08:00 am (Chapter 1)
Okay i have a lot to say cause this story means a lot to me. First off, You are so amazingly wonderful for this one i've never been more hooked on a story before it's just great and you ain't done yet. Secondly, I love Justin and Sel so much they got so much fire between them you almost have to check the wires on your computer after each chapter . Now i like nick he cool and right now he where he need to be but he need not forward his mail there cause he will be moving along soon it's no way of stopping it . When they first thought up this lwt's just be friends R.l and deborah cox started going off in my head."WE CAN't BE FRIENDS" but they trying which is cool it's cute . As far as chap 12 goes homey almost slipped up with the "if you passionate about something or someone don't let anything stop you." I caught that and that song does make you feel like he doign stuff to your body it just so seductive it's almost sinful. Well i'm done I just had to get that iout since i can finally review i had been ill could sit up long enough to type but since i can expect more from me. i'm done no wait GREAT FUCKING STORY!!!! now i'm through.
Author's Response: OMG, your review just made my day. First off thank you so very much for taking time to read and review my story. It means so much because I'm still new to this whole writing thing and I never expected people to like my story so much. Secondly, you had me cracking up on some of the points you brought up...some very important ones might I add. Justin and Selah do have some crazy chemistry and even though they're trying real hard to keep it in the friends zone, you can definitely tell that they're having trouble keeping it together, especially Justin. In fact I think you're the only person who mentioned his slip up, so good eye on that one. I think right now Selah thinks she's in the clear and wants to move forward with Nick since her and Justin are on the friendship tip, so hopefully she'll be able to do that without "other" feelings getting in the way if you know what I mean. ; ) And OMG, that song by Deborah Cox and R.L. used to be the cut back in the day! Haha. But I can see why you would think of that song, I feel you on that. Again, thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it and I'll be updating soon!
Author's Response: OMG, your review just made my day. First off thank you so very much for taking time to read and review my story. It means so much because I'm still new to this whole writing thing and I never expected people to like my story so much. Secondly, you had me cracking up on some of the points you brought up...some very important ones might I add. Justin and Selah do have some crazy chemistry and even though they're trying real hard to keep it in the friends zone, you can definitely tell that they're having trouble keeping it together, especially Justin. In fact I think you're the only person who mentioned his slip up, so good eye on that one. I think right now Selah thinks she's in the clear and wants to move forward with Nick since her and Justin are on the friendship tip, so hopefully she'll be able to do that without "other" feelings getting in the way if you know what I mean. ; ) And OMG, that song by Deborah Cox and R.L. used to be the cut back in the day! Haha. But I can see why you would think of that song, I feel you on that. Again, thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it and I'll be updating soon!
alimera (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 09:01 pm (Chapter 12)
Where can I find that song? Lol. Update again soon!
Author's Response: Well if you're talking about Justin's song, it's a pretty rare find. In fact, the only way that I have it is from the JJB, but I think it's on youtube if you haven't heard it and want to hear what it sounds like. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Well if you're talking about Justin's song, it's a pretty rare find. In fact, the only way that I have it is from the JJB, but I think it's on youtube if you haven't heard it and want to hear what it sounds like. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Jbear (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 06:42 pm (Chapter 1)
I finally got 2 read this & ur story rocks! I so love it & can't wait 4 the update. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I really appreciate your words and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm almost done with this next update-finally-(haha) so I'm hoping to get it up soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I really appreciate your words and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm almost done with this next update-finally-(haha) so I'm hoping to get it up soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 23, 2008 03:54 pm (Chapter 12)
Awww....those two are just too damn adorable
Author's Response: Awww, haha I'm glad you think so. They're in the beginning stages, but they're really trying hard to be friends and do the right thing. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: Awww, haha I'm glad you think so. They're in the beginning stages, but they're really trying hard to be friends and do the right thing. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Vessy (Signed) on Jul 23, 2008 06:45 am (Chapter 12)
great work!
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Sox (Signed) on Jul 23, 2008 12:30 am (Chapter 12)
Author's Response: Haha, awww I'm glad that it makes you think of you and your sister because that's what I wanted to do; make it possible for people to relate to it. And yes, Justin...what is Selah going to do about him? *SMH* Hopefully she'll be able to keep this friendship between he and her going in a positive way...otherwise they're going to be headed toward some problems if they're not careful. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
um... how'd I miss this? I love it.
I love the girl's relationship, reminds me a lot of me and my sister lol and as for Justin... sigh haha
update soon :)
Author's Response: Haha, awww I'm glad that it makes you think of you and your sister because that's what I wanted to do; make it possible for people to relate to it. And yes, Justin...what is Selah going to do about him? *SMH* Hopefully she'll be able to keep this friendship between he and her going in a positive way...otherwise they're going to be headed toward some problems if they're not careful. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
MochaB (Signed) on Jul 23, 2008 12:12 am (Chapter 12)
i don't really have anything much to say about this chapter. for once. haha. all i can say is that while i read it i made the following noises in no particular order: uuuuuuh..., hmmm..., oooh kaaaaaay..., uuuh huh... haha. update soon! :o)
Author's Response: LMAO! Well I guess I can understand why you made those noises because there was some questionable lines in there. But I hope you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: LMAO! Well I guess I can understand why you made those noises because there was some questionable lines in there. But I hope you enjoyed it and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 10:59 pm (Chapter 12)
“Look at you trying to butter me up like some toast,” I say jokingly.
You always come up with the best lines Bri. LOL. Awesome job once again. I like how they're getting close :) I hope something comes from this. I can't wait to read more! :-D -Traci
Author's Response: Haha, I try girl, I try. These two are really working hard at being friends so I hope it benefits them in some way. Thanks for reading and reviewing girl, I appreciate it!
You always come up with the best lines Bri. LOL. Awesome job once again. I like how they're getting close :) I hope something comes from this. I can't wait to read more! :-D -Traci
Author's Response: Haha, I try girl, I try. These two are really working hard at being friends so I hope it benefits them in some way. Thanks for reading and reviewing girl, I appreciate it!
Shybeauty (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 08:25 pm (Chapter 12)
I've always wondered why he never released that song.. I ♥ it, great update =)
Author's Response: Shoot, you and I both! Haha. I love that song and I figured that this would be a good place to put it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Shoot, you and I both! Haha. I love that song and I figured that this would be a good place to put it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Marissa (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 07:14 pm (Chapter 12)
mooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, please!
Author's Response: Yes ma'am, I'm working on it! Haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing love.
Author's Response: Yes ma'am, I'm working on it! Haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing love.
DaniD (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 06:41 pm (Chapter 12)
Author's Response: *Nods head in agreement* They really are trying, especially since they didn't know too much about each other from the beginning (well except for their bodies...*teehee*). But yes, the million dollar question is how long will these two remain friends before deeper feelings get involved. I can't say yes or no because I don't want to give TOO much away, but I will say that you *might* be on to something... ; ) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Awww...Justin and Selah are really making a go of their friendship! They can really talk to each other.
Right off the bat their was EXPLOSIVE chemistry between them...we know that. What will be interesting is seeing if this friendship won't lead to much deeper feelings. If it hasn't already started. :D
Love this!
Author's Response: *Nods head in agreement* They really are trying, especially since they didn't know too much about each other from the beginning (well except for their bodies...*teehee*). But yes, the million dollar question is how long will these two remain friends before deeper feelings get involved. I can't say yes or no because I don't want to give TOO much away, but I will say that you *might* be on to something... ; ) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 05:21 pm (Chapter 12)
Okay, I've devised a compromise. You don't kill him but you break his ankles so he can't dance. He's still alive but not on tour and interferring with my plans. Hmm? Hmm? A little physical therapy and he's good to go. I think that's a pretty good deal. I'll give you some time to mull it over and weigh your options. No pressure. Now, when the hell is Justin going to break up with his girlfriend? I forgot he even had one. lol. Anyway, great chapter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Girl, what am I going to do with you? *SMH* Let me revise my last statement: I will neither KILL or INJURE Nick in this story okay? You're just going to have to deal with him for a while and like I said before, I'm not saying that something will or will not happen between Justin and Selah...so I guess you'll just have to keep reading in order to find out. Oh and that goes for Jessica too (haha). Thanks for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Girl, what am I going to do with you? *SMH* Let me revise my last statement: I will neither KILL or INJURE Nick in this story okay? You're just going to have to deal with him for a while and like I said before, I'm not saying that something will or will not happen between Justin and Selah...so I guess you'll just have to keep reading in order to find out. Oh and that goes for Jessica too (haha). Thanks for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
