MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 08:23 am (Chapter 10)

this just gets better better fantastic chapter girl :D

btwhappy 100 review can't wait for the next update ^^ 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and being my 100th review! That means so much to me and I'm so happy I have been able to get to this point so thank you again and I'm you enjoyed it.



Vessy (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 05:27 am (Chapter 10)
great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks Vessy, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!



SJane (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 01:50 am (Chapter 10)
Oh boy I hope they don't think by knowing more about eachother will make them ok being just friends lol my money is on it becomming harder to fight the attraction to each other

Author's Response: Haha, I guess we will have to see huh? They definitely have chemistry, but having them get to know each other is going to be the real test in order to see if they can possibly become something more. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!



Nana26 (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 01:48 am (Chapter 10)

Bri I don't even know what to write. I'm so shocked ( and relieved for her) that she spilled to Ava like that. I just want to hug her lol. I can't wait for Nick to find out, major drama. 

Oh and is it wrong that I found Justin's ramble so cute even though he's still a wee bit of an asshole? Nope cuz it's Justin lol.

Love it, keep it up so I won't have to shank you! 



Author's Response: Yeah, I was feeling real sad as I wrote her confession because I was just trying to get into her mindset and be in her shoes. But now that Selah's at least talked to her sister about it, it's time for her to take the steps to get out of this mess and I think her and Justin starting over is going to give her that chance. No, it's definitely not wrong to think Justin's ramble was cute because it was sweet...but think that this is the last time you're going to see Asshole!Justin rear his head. ; ) Thanks for reading love and stay away from Nick so I won't have to shank you! *Muah*

Author's Response: Yeah, I was feeling real sad as I wrote her confession because I was just trying to get into her mindset and be in her shoes. But now that Selah's at least talked to her sister about it, it's time for her to take the steps to get out of this mess and I think her and Justin starting over is going to give her that chance. No, it's definitely not wrong to think Justin's ramble was cute because it was sweet...but think that this is the last time you're going to see Asshole!Justin rear his head. ; ) Thanks for reading love and stay away from Nick so I won't have to shank you! *Muah*



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 01:05 am (Chapter 10)

Ok...That's all well and good. Friends..Though Justin should have to be left hanging a bit I think. He WAS a pretty big asshole. *shrug* He made Selah feel pretty horrible about herself.

As long as they can keep it at the friends level with Nick and Jessica in their lives. Otherwise, they'll be right back to square one.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Yes, I think friendship is the most appropriate area for them to be in right now because it's definitely time for these two to dig deeper and get to know each other for something more than their bodies. Don't think that Selah is just going to jump at this chance, she has her reservations about it but we'll find out her decision pretty soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 01:05 am (Chapter 10)
i'm glad justin apologized, but i feel like selah is trying to play the victim here. i mean, don't get me wrong. justin is older and he should no better, but it's not like selah was pushing him away. she seemed fine until he denied her request to break up with jess. i know her past is hard on here so that didn't help the situation, but yeah. again, good for justin for apologizing and suggesting they get to know each other. personally, i just wish selah would break up with nick. i mean, if she's constantly thinking about justin it doesn't matter that she physically is leaving justin alone. he's still on her mind, plus she has guilt. the main reason i think she should break up with nick is so she gets to know herself better. i feel like she doesn't know herself enough. she needs "me time." concentrate on making herself better, gaining confidence, and work on going after her dreams. and i know i was all like, "man! ava needs to back off" at the beginning of the story, but now i'm thinking, "ok ava. get the leash on this girl." hahaha! :o)

Author's Response: I feel what you're saying and where you're coming from. I agree that Selah should have been stronger and smarter about her decisions when it came to getting involved with Justin and I think she tried to do so, but went about it in a messed up way that kind of made her look selfish. But at the same time I feel that since she doesn't have a lot of experience in the whole "relationship/male" area, she got herself involved in a very shitty situation and didn't really know how to get herself out of it on her own and I think Justin stepping up to the plate and suggesting that they start over as friends is going to give her that opportunity. I think the two of them starting over is going to get her to look at things, put them into perspective and help figure out what and who she wants in life because you're right, she doesn't know herself very well and that's why she keeps getting into these messes. Also, confessing to her sister I think was her cry for help because it's obvious that she's needs some outside assistance and guidance. As for breaking up with Nick...well they're even officially dating or anything, they're just involved with each other so Selah could easily break things off with him if she wanted to. But something tells me that Nick isn't going to make it easy for her to do so. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing, I love your reviews...they make me think (haha).



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 12:54 am (Chapter 10)
How dare you update when I'm about to go to bed?! Don't you know this can't wait until morning?! I'm being forced to read this against my will! But I'll do it anyway. *sigh* I'm glad Justin is manning up and being less of an a-hole. La doesn't deserve to get jerked around like he's been doing to her. I think starting over as friends is a great idea. Of course, I'm hoping they'll have sex very soon but friendly sex. Won't Nick be extra suspicious now that they'll be all chummy and hanging out together? I kind of think them being friends will draw more attention that them sneaking around. And Nick's not having that shit. Mm-mm. Dramaaaaaaaaaa! *rubs hands together evilly* Please update soon. 

Author's Response: Haha, I know! Hell I was supposed to update earlier today but I had so much other stuff going on...but anyway, I'm glad that Justin is starting to man up too and realize that basically what they were doing was going nowhere fast. I think it is definitely time for these two settle down and really get to know each other for something other than their bodies. They already have the chemistry so it's time to see if they can find a foundation for it and then if need be, take the steps to take it further-the RIGHT way this time (haha). But you're right, Nick definitely cares a lot about Selah so I highly doubt he's just going to give her away all willy-nilly and believe me when I say that he is not a stupid man... ; ) Thanks for reading and reviewing girl, you know I love your reviews.



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jul 09, 2008 04:55 pm (Chapter 9: Part II)
Uhohhhhh. Ekk. I hope things don't get weird now :( That was a hot chapter but the ending was sad. LoL. Awesome job as usual chica and I can't wait to see where this is gonna go. Hope more is comin soon! -Traci

Author's Response: Yeah the shit has definitely hit the fan right now between these two, but I think the next chapter will definitely give them a chance to resolve their issues with each other and get to know each other BETTER, outside of the sexual stuff and whatnot. I'm glad you are enjoying it girlie and thank you SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jul 09, 2008 04:37 pm (Chapter 9: Part I)
Wow. That's all I have to say. LoL. Sorry it took me so long to review gurlie, i've had a busy freakin weekend. LoL. Awesome job though, that was freakin HOT even though it was with Nick ... but I can see why she choose him ... it's the safer bet. Anyway, so glad you updated quickly and I'm off to read the second part :) -Traci

Author's Response: Traci!!! No worries about reviewing girl, take your time and read at your leisure. Nick is the safer bet, but the question is does Selah want to be safe? Hmmm... ; ) Thanks for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!



Marissa (Signed) on Jul 08, 2008 11:35 pm (Chapter 9: Part II)
"Oh damn" is all I have to say!

Author's Response: Haha, oh damn is right girl. Thanks for reading and reviewing love, I appreciate it!



DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jul 08, 2008 05:55 pm (Chapter 9: Part II)

Wait....gotta review again cause I missed that part! lol

 

What the hell does Justin mean by how would that look blah blah blah only to be seen with you!!!!!! ummm excuse me?

I know for damn sure Jess can't be better then she could be virgin or not since she can't even handle him on the dance floor and he's bored already... not that should be the major point of consideration lol 

Jess for damn sure isn't more attractive since Jussy wants to be breast feed and I'm pretty sure she isn't exceedingly more intelligent then Selah either so wants all the shame about?

Jussy *gasp* are you prejudice? Is is because Jess has more money and happens to be famous thereby fitting your status more abtly then that of a unemployed "hang on?"

Do you feel that my girl Selah is good enough to freak in the background rather then to bring to light on your arm? Get your jollies off her in a condo you bought her in the country then gon show up to Jessica's movie debut smiling for the camera's!!!!!!!!! You got the wrong one playa! Got ya'll kids wondering who their daddy is lololololololo

 LMAOOOOOO sorry too much suga guys but I was still serious

 



Author's Response: *Dead from laughter, but gives you two snaps and some hand claps* Girl, you are preaching! While it was highly hilarious, again you brought up some great points. Even though it came out really wrong, I think what Justin meant by that comment was that it would look weird (particularly to the people who know them and are around them right now) if he dumped Jessica all of a sudden and then started dating Selah. But it also poses the question that if they were to start dating, could Selah handle Justin's lifestyle? Could she handle being in the spotlight, the paps, the constant traveling, etc.? It's obvious that Selah wasn't thinking about all of that when she blurted that out and was trying to do the right thing. But these two are going to get some time to try to resolve their issues and hopefully make things right between them. Girl you had me cracking up about the condo in the country! LMAO, that had me rollin'. But thank you so much for your awesome feedback, I really appreciate it and enjoy reading it!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 08, 2008 12:57 am (Chapter 9: Part II)
WHAT THE HELL!!!! OMG....these two are hard-headed as hell

Author's Response: HAHA, indeed they are but they're going to see the error of their ways and try to make things right. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!



DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jul 07, 2008 09:43 pm (Chapter 9: Part II)

Ummm Selah needs to slow the hell down! Those orgasms got her wayyyy too open and she shouldn't have stayed when she realized Justin was trying get in some "private" time with her. If it has to be private it ain't right...If he doesn't want all, just some... he deserves none girl *damn that was a good one! lol j/p*

 Justin knows what he's doing and for him he doesn't care how hs has go about it to get it as long as he does....He should have more respect for Jessica and Nick...calling himself tasting her and then gon go kiss up on Jess when he sees her *that actually goes both ways tho...who knows what he's done with Jess! lol* Let me stop cause I'm taking this way too personal...

 Selah calm your fast ass down and realize that Justin treats you like youallow him too...don't toss NIck away for a maybe shot! Justin ain't right with his sexy self and your not helping your cause by letting him play around with you like that.

Be strong girl...umm wasn't Brown waiting for her in the hallway? Her sister's gonna know something went up and that's gonna put her in a real uncomfortable place...her boss or her sister. 

Justin needs to do some serious groveling  ASAP and really mean it lol



Author's Response: Another awesome review that speaks truth, I love it! Haha. You have touched on a lot of great topics like some of the other readers and one of those is Selah being strong and standing her ground. You are so right about her needing to calm down and really take time to evaluate each situation with each guy. I told another reader that I think Selah has a hard time distinguishing lust from what's real because she's not used to having her feelings being reciprocated and since she doesn't want Nick or Justin to stop caring or liking her, she's going to do what has to do to keep it that way, even if it may be wrong. But Selah is going to see the error of her ways for real in this next chapter because the lying and sneaking around is going to start taking a toll on her. You're also right about Justin because he does know what he's doing and like I've said before, he's being a selfish person right now by trying to have a relationship and Selah on the side. But even he's going to see that the two of them need to slow down and reevaluate their situation because it is not working. As for her sister, well you're going to have to see what happens in the next chapter for that. ; ) Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 07, 2008 05:08 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm like three updates behind. ugh. lol.I'm trying to catch up. Will let you know when I have. :)

Author's Response: Aww don't worry girlie, take your time because a lot happens in these last three updates so I hope you enjoy them and thanks for reading love!



alimera (Signed) on Jul 07, 2008 03:14 pm (Chapter 9: Part II)
Hmm. I don't know. If Justin doesn't cut the crap I would have to venture to say that Nick is better for her than Justin is. But then again...nope, no one can be better than JT. Even if he is a gigantic asshole. Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: Haha, I hear ya girlie because there is NOTHING like some JT. But like I've been saying to the other readers, Justin is being a selfish person right now by trying to have a relationship and mess around with Selah on the side. And you're right, if he doesn't cut it out he could lose out on something potentially great. I think the next chapter will give these two a chance to try to resolve their problems so things should start looking up. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!





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