treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 03:32 am (
Chapter 10)
This has to be my favorite chapter so far, mostly because its the first chapter where Justin is being completely straight up and honest. It's making him a lot more likable.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 03:15 am (
Chapter 9: Part II)
You go Selah! Justin can't have his cake and eat it too. She need to leave is cheating ass alone until he figures out if he wants chocolate or whip cream.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 02:49 am (
Chapter 9: Part I)
awwww....i love nick! I hope I'm suppose to...lol.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 02:16 am (
Chapter 8)
Girl that chapater screamed sex all through it and it didn't have a bit in it. I love it! Justin is one sexy muthafucka!
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 01:52 am (
Chapter 7)
That shit was hot girl! It was fire!
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 01:14 am (
Chapter 6)
Although I'm not to sure about the Justin La thing I do like their interaction.
I also dig the relationship La has with her sister. It remind me of me and my sister.
I can' wait to see what's poppin' off at the club.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:54 am (
Chapter 5)
This was a good chapter. I like the back story. Her story really touched me. My mother had MS, she's past now. All though MS is a diffrent disease i can see how having something like that can affect you. I can see now why La is the way she is. I still think she needs to be careful with Justin. I think he might try to play her ass.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:37 am (
Chapter 4)
I like how you but in that "Shut up!" I have the Future/Sex/Love/Show on DVD so that part was too funny.
I really hope La doesn't fall in love with Justin and get hurt. That would be fucke up because I like the chick.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:17 am (
Chapter 3)
I loved this chapter. I could actually imagine everything as it happened. I was cheesing the entire time.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 12:06 am (
Chapter 2)
Girl you had me at the beginning of this chapter. I thought La had ran in to him on her way up to her sister's room but it was nick...you got me.
treasure (Signed) on Mar 24, 2009 11:55 pm (
Chapter 1)
I'm liking this and where it's going.
d_simplicity (Anonymous) on Mar 10, 2009 12:26 am (
Chapter 18)
Bri, how can you leave us with such an amazing update and then not update for over a month????????????????? Don't mind me, I'm guilty too on my stories. lol
Anway I'm late on this but loveddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd it!!!!!!!!!!!! woooo!!!! the shit is about to get complicated. I hope Ava doesn't go crazy on Justin. And poor Nick. :( I felt so bad for him. Hey, I cud help him pick up the pieces easy. hehehe. kidding. But anyway, love the updates. I can't wait to see how this Justin and Selah deal will all play out. oh and the bedroom scene was hot! I miss this story. Hope you update soon and everything is good with you missy. Take care :)
alimera (Signed) on Jan 24, 2009 04:17 pm (
Chapter 18)
Wow, Nick was no idiot that's for sure. Update again soon!
Timberlake (Signed) on Jan 23, 2009 12:00 am (
Chapter 18)
oh lord, i teared. you had the denzel washington, john q, one tear down the cheek cry. congratulations. i feel bad for nick and now i see how fucked up selah and justin are... however, i still want them to be together. is that sick or what? i don't approve, but i can't see it any other way.
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jan 21, 2009 09:28 pm (
Chapter 18)
First of all, I love that song by Christina! Second, you need to update ASAP!!! I feel bad for Nick and I hope that her and Justin work out because then she did it for nothing...but what's a great story without drama right? Great update!!
