Comments For Right in Front of Me
SJane (Signed) on Jun 24, 2008 07:12 pm (Chapter 6)
oohh it's clubbing time lol i can just sense the fun about to come
Author's Response: Oh yeah, it's definitely about to go DOWN! Haha. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, it's definitely about to go DOWN! Haha. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
JoJo (Anonymous) on Jun 24, 2008 05:23 pm (Chapter 6)
I haven't given feedback on this story and I don't know why 'cuz I've been reading it. I love it!! Can't wait to see this little triangle of La, Justin, and Nick...and when Jessica gets involve. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the club. Update soon!! Can't wait!
Author's Response: Things are about to get real interesting and confusing the people all the people involved so far and heck, Jessica doesn't even know what's going on! Haha. Like I've been saying, the club is going to be very interesting and I can't wait to post it. Thanks so much reading and reviewing, I appreciate it and I'm glad that you're enjoying it!
Author's Response: Things are about to get real interesting and confusing the people all the people involved so far and heck, Jessica doesn't even know what's going on! Haha. Like I've been saying, the club is going to be very interesting and I can't wait to post it. Thanks so much reading and reviewing, I appreciate it and I'm glad that you're enjoying it!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 24, 2008 05:13 pm (Chapter 6)
Wooie Bri, loved these last two updates. But uh oh, Justin might be liking La a little much eh? hehe, kidding, but it is obvious he has a 'thing' for her. It's sad to hear about her past and I guess I can understand why Ava is so protective over her now but she still needs to lighten up some. And oh! I knew Nick was going be a little issue. It's cute that they like each other though, but how well is that going to work out if Justin ends up being in the picture? lol Can't wait to see where you take this and the club scene! Loved it! Update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah, there's a lot of stuff going on right now...and it's only the beginning. Selah has had it rough and you're right, that's why Ava is so protective, but she's going to learn that her baby sister is not a baby anymore and can make her own decisions on things. One of those things is Nick, and I think that he and Selah have potential as long as her heart is all the way in it, ya know? But you're right about Justin, I think he's met his match flirtatiously and intellectually so it's starting to get him and Selah in a bit of trouble. The club is going to be very interesting and it's going to leave Selah with some questions that she needs to answer about what and who she wants.rnrnSorry for that long rant (haha), but thanks so much for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Yeah, there's a lot of stuff going on right now...and it's only the beginning. Selah has had it rough and you're right, that's why Ava is so protective, but she's going to learn that her baby sister is not a baby anymore and can make her own decisions on things. One of those things is Nick, and I think that he and Selah have potential as long as her heart is all the way in it, ya know? But you're right about Justin, I think he's met his match flirtatiously and intellectually so it's starting to get him and Selah in a bit of trouble. The club is going to be very interesting and it's going to leave Selah with some questions that she needs to answer about what and who she wants.rnrnSorry for that long rant (haha), but thanks so much for reading and reviewing girlie, I appreciate it!
kkhbtb (Signed) on Jun 24, 2008 05:00 pm (Chapter 6)
I freakin' love this story. i feel trouble brewing at the club though... OOOOH I can't wait to see what happens!!! Don't keep me hanging for too long...
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your review, I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. The club is going to be very interesting and I can't wait to post it, so I'll be sure not to keep you waiting. ; )
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your review, I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. The club is going to be very interesting and I can't wait to post it, so I'll be sure not to keep you waiting. ; )
MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 24, 2008 04:04 pm (Chapter 6)
This should be good. Club, music, dancing, Nick, Justin. Something good is bound to happen. Bow-chicka-wow-wow. *eyebrows* Now, how soon can we get rid of Jessica? She's all in my way. I'm trying to get La and Justin together. She's ruining my plans. She must be destroyed. Please update soon.
Author's Response: LMAO!!! Girl, you are a mess but I love your reviews. I don't want to give TOO much away, but something really good is about to happen at the club...so you're just going to have to wait and see. Now don't count out Ms. Jessica just yet, she's still firmly attached to her man even though she has no idea what's going on. I'll just say this, if and/or when she does find out about what's going on, don't think she'll give Justin up without a fight. ; ) Thanks for reading and I reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: LMAO!!! Girl, you are a mess but I love your reviews. I don't want to give TOO much away, but something really good is about to happen at the club...so you're just going to have to wait and see. Now don't count out Ms. Jessica just yet, she's still firmly attached to her man even though she has no idea what's going on. I'll just say this, if and/or when she does find out about what's going on, don't think she'll give Justin up without a fight. ; ) Thanks for reading and I reviewing, I appreciate it!
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 23, 2008 11:18 pm (Chapter 5)
OoOoOo ;) Interesting. It's nice we got some back story on Selah ... interesting. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen ... whether it's between Justin or Nick ;) LoL. Awesome job as usual! TTYL -Traci
Author's Response: Traci!!! *hugs* Yeah girlie, I had to put some background info in there so that everyone can kind of see where she's coming from and what she keeps hidden away from everyone. It's about to get real interesting indeed now that these two men are involved as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Traci!!! *hugs* Yeah girlie, I had to put some background info in there so that everyone can kind of see where she's coming from and what she keeps hidden away from everyone. It's about to get real interesting indeed now that these two men are involved as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 23, 2008 05:42 pm (Chapter 5)
oh what...get 'em girl!!!!
Author's Response: Haha, I know right? Selah can definitely play Justin's game...or can she? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Haha, I know right? Selah can definitely play Justin's game...or can she? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
classicbeauty (Signed) on Jun 22, 2008 04:26 am (Chapter 5)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and reviewing!
ooooo i cant wait to see where this is going.
update asap
dani
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Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading and reviewing!
MochaB (Signed) on Jun 21, 2008 07:19 pm (Chapter 5)
Can it be the other F? haha! i'm kidding!!...maybe...ha! ;o) anyway, another great chapter. thanks for the insight. i think selah needs to better distinguish from love and lust. she mentioned she has that problem of thinking the slightest attraction means love, so admitting it is the first step. plus, i mean her sister told her how Nick is so it's like dang...she didn't have a warning with Dame, but now she does. she better listen. so with her problem, maybe Ava does need to stay on top of her. and nick's shallow story about the prom...red flag. the whole n.e.r.d. part was so funny. i've been listening to the new album constantly since tuesday. can't wait to read more. :o)
Author's Response: LMAO! Oooh, the story is just beginning and Justin is taken so it can't be the other F (just) yet (haha). I agree about Selah and how she needs to distinguish those two differences and since she's learned the hard way before with Dame, she's trying to be more cautious and you're going to see more of that as the story goes on. On the contrary, I don't think Nick's story should be a red flag, he was just being a stupid teenager at the time. But regardless, I personally think Selah should cautious just due to everything she's been through. I'm glad you liked the N.E.R.D. part, I LOVE them and I want their new CD SO BAD (haha). Thanks again SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! : )
Author's Response: LMAO! Oooh, the story is just beginning and Justin is taken so it can't be the other F (just) yet (haha). I agree about Selah and how she needs to distinguish those two differences and since she's learned the hard way before with Dame, she's trying to be more cautious and you're going to see more of that as the story goes on. On the contrary, I don't think Nick's story should be a red flag, he was just being a stupid teenager at the time. But regardless, I personally think Selah should cautious just due to everything she's been through. I'm glad you liked the N.E.R.D. part, I LOVE them and I want their new CD SO BAD (haha). Thanks again SO much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! : )
Marissa (Signed) on Jun 21, 2008 02:04 pm (Chapter 5)
LMAO Bri, that chapter was awesome. Keep it up woman!
Author's Response: Thanks love, I appreciate you reading and your review! *Muah*
Author's Response: Thanks love, I appreciate you reading and your review! *Muah*
MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 21, 2008 01:47 pm (Chapter 5)
Well, it seems Justin might just be interested in little Selah. I think those two are making a little bit of progress. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hmmm...he might be. But yes, these two will definitely be making progress as the story goes along. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I love your reviews. : )
Author's Response: Hmmm...he might be. But yes, these two will definitely be making progress as the story goes along. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I love your reviews. : )
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 09:18 pm (Chapter 4)
Was the TV show Jessica referred to called Seventh Heaven? I think that's where I first remember seeing her act. HAHA. random thought. lol. HAHAH OMG Bri I love you! That meeting was cute and unconventional hahaha. And Justin was chearking her out! And uh, Ava is really overprotective, my thinks that might be a problem. And ooohhh Nick! And...what guy is Selah over 99.9%? Hmmm interesting. lol Loved it gurl, update soon.
Author's Response: Haha yes D, Jessica used to be on "7th Heaven." I just thought I'd throw that random tidbit about her life in there. I'm glad you liked them meeting, I mean I know it wasn't all glamorous and exciting, but it will definitely get that way in these next few chapters as they start to get to know each other better. I agree, Ava is a bit overbearing. But like I've said before, she just wants to prevent her sister from getting hurt and getting in over her head ya know? And that mystery guy? Well you're going to find out about him very soon and it's going to clear up a lot of things about Selah.rnrnI love your reviews girlie and I appreciate you reading and leaving them. Thanks girlie, I'll update soon! : )
Author's Response: Haha yes D, Jessica used to be on "7th Heaven." I just thought I'd throw that random tidbit about her life in there. I'm glad you liked them meeting, I mean I know it wasn't all glamorous and exciting, but it will definitely get that way in these next few chapters as they start to get to know each other better. I agree, Ava is a bit overbearing. But like I've said before, she just wants to prevent her sister from getting hurt and getting in over her head ya know? And that mystery guy? Well you're going to find out about him very soon and it's going to clear up a lot of things about Selah.rnrnI love your reviews girlie and I appreciate you reading and leaving them. Thanks girlie, I'll update soon! : )
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 07:57 pm (Chapter 4)
Epp! It jus keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen awesome job as usual Bri ;) Hope more is comin soon :-D -Traci
Author's Response: Thanks girlie, I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate your reviews. There is definitely more to come, so stay tuned! : )
Author's Response: Thanks girlie, I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate your reviews. There is definitely more to come, so stay tuned! : )
MissM69 (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 08:09 am (Chapter 4)
Author's Response: Wow, three times? Aww, thank you so much! And no worries, I have an update coming really soon for you.
omg omg omg !! :o
love this chapter read it 3 times already :p
keep it coming :D
Author's Response: Wow, three times? Aww, thank you so much! And no worries, I have an update coming really soon for you.
Marissa (Signed) on Jun 19, 2008 12:15 am (Chapter 4)
Looks good, girl! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks love, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Author's Response: Thanks love, I'm glad you're enjoying it!