Comments For
Paradise Lost
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 08:32 pm (
Haggling)
It's taken me forever to catch up...and since no one else commented on this chapter...I wanted to be the 1st :)
I love these two...and I have a feeling that those dropping shoes I'm so concerned about will come in the form of Addy's brother and some new-found England info...
but that's just a guess :)
Author's Response: I'm glad somebody did, it was looking a little pathetic with that 0 on it *lol*
kkhbtb (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 01:42 pm (
Lonely)
He's killing me... He really needs to tell her... ok so maybe they can have sex a little more, then he needs to tell her.. HAHA! I love it :)
Author's Response: Got to have your priorities, eh? ;o)
monkeymonkey85 (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 01:12 pm (
Lonely)
Uh.. yeah.. this sucks.. yup... just thought I'd tell you.
NOT! :) :p Loved it... told you what I thought on JJB!!!
Author's Response: JJB? What's that? *looks innocent*
alimera (Signed) on Aug 16, 2008 09:58 am (
Hangovers)
Hahahahahahahahaha, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! They had drunken sex! That is the best, lol. I like that they're being so open about that. Update again soon!
Author's Response: I don't know, drunken sex always seemed too messy to me *lol*
SJane (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 11:41 pm (
Hangovers)
they had drunk sex lol classic
if only she knew what surprises he was hiding from her lol
Author's Response: If only she did... *whistles*
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 08:33 pm (
Hangovers)
Justin is throwin Addy for a loop. Hopefully none of his family and friends find him soon....or else Addy will figure out thathe lied and has been lying the whole time. She already doesnt like tourists...that would just be another reason for her to close herself off from love more.
Author's Response: Somebody really ought to mention that to him. He seems to have missed it
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 06:38 pm (
Hangovers)
Well damn. That just makes it more complicated when she finds out the truth about who he really is. But maybe Justin can blind her with amazing sex and she'll forget all about it. Awesome update!! Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: hahahahah - blind her with the sex, I like it
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 04:31 pm (
Hangovers)
So...I'm a little dissapointed that we didn't get any of the sex, because I would've liked to have seen that (perve, I know) and I'm a little excited about this fling too. I attempted to have a summer fling, but it turned into more of a flop, and he was horrible in bed.
I just over-shared...didn't I?
Author's Response: You did, a little. *lol*
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Aug 10, 2008 09:15 pm (
Persona Non Grata)
I really, really like this story. Of course its not really that surprising considering I like EVERYthing you write. But I can't wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks hon
monkeymonkey85 (Signed) on Aug 10, 2008 08:53 am (
Persona Non Grata)
Such a great story so far!! please update soon! I was waiting for them to hook up too! EEEk.. they have so gotta kiss again! ) )
Author's Response: They might... they might not. Depends how I feel *lol*
alimera (Signed) on Aug 09, 2008 03:17 pm (
Persona Non Grata)
"Mais oui, they see the young Addy is spending more time with you than whichever of them thinks she's the love of his fickle young life this week and they band together against a common enemy when usually they fight between themselves. There are few girls their age in this town, they all routinely fall in love with one or other of the girls, usually until the next tourist boat pulls in. I wouldn't worry, next week it will be Mariela and you will be forgotten." HOLY CRAP YOU MENTIONED MY NAME!! My name is Mariela...alimera came from the letters in my name all jumbled up! I'm such a dork.
Anywhooooooooooo...HOLY CRAP THEY KISSED! I'm jumping up and down for joy right now. Update again soon!
Author's Response: I didn't know that... oh well, coolness!
alimera (Signed) on Aug 04, 2008 08:54 pm (
Understanding)
Hahahaha, they're awesome. Maybe they'll both find themselves in LA...oh no that will be BAD. Update again soon!
Author's Response: Couldn't possibly comment
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 04, 2008 05:57 pm (
Understanding)
I want him to tell her. I thought he was going to, especially after that "i'm a millionair" comment...but...you're dragging it out and that just kills me!!!
and you're enjoying every minute of this too, I'll venture to bet. :)
Author's Response: You'll venture to bet, would you? I'd say that was a pretty safe call.
alimera (Signed) on Jul 28, 2008 08:14 pm (
Life)
Hmm. He turned his Blackberry on and I was so scared he was going to have a bad message on there making him need to go back home...still, his lie will come out soon. Update again soon!
Author's Response: Well, if the boy will cut himself off he will find the messages stacked up!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 27, 2008 07:33 pm (
Life)
I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop (or perhaps the first shoe, knowing how you work, lol) and I will be waiting with baited breath because I know that it's only a matter of time.
Bah...this is such a great story.
Author's Response: Shoes may be dropped, they may not be... I'm incorrigible like that.
