Comments For Paradise Lost
justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2010 12:05 am (The Painful Truth)
Oh Justin, so naive and in denial. I just want to pet him and then smack him. But, hopefully, this little intervention will get him to open his eyes and do what he should be doing (i.e. help Addy, profess his love for her, and get with her, once and for all)... Something tells me he's gonna keep being an idiot though. For a while at least. love this! more soon(ish)?

Author's Response: Yeah, the petting and smacking sounds about right... though kind of dirty when I say it like that



Tink (Anonymous) on Feb 10, 2010 05:19 pm (The Painful Truth)
So glad you updated, really love this story and hope you post again soon

Author's Response: Thanks Tink... hee, your screen name always makes me think of fairy dust



Vikki (Signed) on Dec 09, 2009 03:13 pm (Guilty Pleasures)

oh my god!

omgomgomgomgomgomgomg!

YES to ill advised sex! wooo hooo!

btw Trace is an ass lol! but i love him. and I love your brain, this Justin is like... my fav of all time! lol!

Damn my fucking conscience.

Cockblocker. 

 

LMAO! LOOOVE!



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the cockblocker line, that was my favourite lol



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Dec 06, 2009 10:52 pm (Guilty Pleasures)
oooh sounds like things are going to get interesting even more than they already are! can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: ;o)



meggie (Signed) on Dec 06, 2009 06:07 pm (Guilty Pleasures)

OH.MY.GOD.   i cannot stop laughing!! why does trace win in every story that anyone writes him into??  lmao 

ok, more please?



Author's Response: Trace is just very easy to write as a winner



glowbug917 (Signed) on Dec 06, 2009 04:19 pm (Guilty Pleasures)

No, you are not smart, idiot boy. Not even remotely.

"I've learned the hard way that the right person at the wrong time works out no better than the wrong person."

And yet, he slept with her anyway. Good thing he's pretty because I fear the alcohol killed what was left of his brain cells.



Author's Response: It is a good thing he's pretty because he's not going to win any awards for being observant or self aware



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 21, 2009 07:31 pm (Uh Oh with a Side of Oh Crap)

aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh! I love them!

they need to get drunk more often, well at least Addy, lol! I miss their good times and happy, giddy, flirtyness! :) 

He just put on a really stupid posh boy English accent and I have to burst out into hysterical drunk laughter. It was terrible. 

LMAO! dude I'd pay so much to hear him! omg!

 

Damn you, Lily. Bloody party. Bloody friends. GAH.

I felt really bad for laughing at her hear lol! but I'm glad Justin was able to bring her out of her funk, a least for a little while.it totally sucks that she came to LA expecting something else, and now she's all fallen out with her bff, hates her job, hates the "promotion" she's been offered, and really all signs are pointing back to Adora.

Do we get to see what happens back at the apartment? hmmm? *wink wink nudge nudge* lol!



Author's Response:

*looks innocent, says nothing*

 *okay, looking innocent not working but still keeping it zipped*




Vikki (Signed) on Nov 21, 2009 06:56 pm (Oh Hell)

omg! pooooor Addy!

 

It would be beyond shitty of me to sit back and listen to people who don't know her judging her without standing up for her. 

ugh! I feel like that waaaaay too often. everyone thinks they have a right to throw out their two cents when they dont even know everything about who/what they're talking about. its so annoying and THANK YOU Justin... lol!

btw this made me lol so hard...

It's like the Ringling Brothers took a whole bunch of LSD.

LMAO! oooooo the mental picture.



Author's Response: Thank you. I liked that line lol



meggie (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 05:37 pm (Uh Oh with a Side of Oh Crap)

a side of crap is right! thank god these two just need to get it on (again) and i'll be a happy girl. please and thank you.

 

also, i dont know about the other rangers but i hear voices in my head all day lol



Author's Response: Yeah, that's not something you should admit in public honey lol



mzmillion (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 04:29 pm (Uh Oh with a Side of Oh Crap)
As much as I like this story, the depressive nature and over thinking analyzing of the characters is headache giving....sorry. I just want them to get together already.

Author's Response: Well, you know, depression generally isn't a barrel of laughs lol



glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 04:06 pm (Uh Oh with a Side of Oh Crap)

Well, ADD helps with the double, triple, quadruple story duty. that and, if you're stuck on something you can always pretend like you're not by working on something else...shifty! haha

ahem anyway...drunk addy is hilarious. sloppy and hilarious. 

more to the point...have i mentioned you're a tease? cause yes. 

 



Author's Response: Yes, you called me a cock tease last chapter lol



alimera (Signed) on Oct 11, 2009 02:17 pm (Oh Hell)
Oh dear, doesn't sound good at all. Maybe Addy is better suiting at home, where she's used to the slower lifestyle. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Maybe she is... but will she ever admit it? No, that'd be too simple lol



Tink (Signed) on Oct 10, 2009 04:51 pm (Oh Hell)
Still loving it and can't wait to read more. Please post again soon

Author's Response: Thanks hon xx



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Oct 09, 2009 07:40 pm (Oh Hell)
aug!!! more more more! I want to see her reaction to the party!!!!

Author's Response: Your wish is my (eventual) command



alimera (Signed) on Sep 13, 2009 11:33 am (What You Don't Know)
Oooooooooooooooooooh boy. This does not look like its going to be good. Update again soon!

Author's Response: :o)





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