Comments For Paradise Lost
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 07:42 pm (The Nature Of Lying)

Just had a chance to catch up on this chapter...and I must say that I think Justin Timberlake is a pussy and I think he should have come out with the truth.  I mean, Addy could very well be upset, but I feel that they've gotten to know each other enough now that she wouldn't care one way or another about his fame...

ah...you do this on purpose.  Because now this problem is just going to hang over his head even longer which means the blow up will be even bigger.

Gah...I think I'm entirely too involved. lol



Author's Response: Me? On purpose? How could you say such a... oh, wait, yeah. Fair point.


alimera (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 08:40 am (The Nature Of Lying)
Oh boy, he's digging himself a DEEP one. How on Earth will he be able to get himself out of the doghouse when Addy finds out the truth? Ugh. Dreading that moment! Update again soon.

Author's Response: The boy is headed for China at this rate...


MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 09:11 pm (The Nature Of Lying)
Ughhhh. I thought he would finally come clean. But he just has to draaaag it out. Someone should tell him that he's only making things worse for himself. Tisk tisk. Great chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Someone should.. unfortunately anybody that knows enough to do so has been left in America *lol*


Gigi (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 04:22 pm (The Nature Of Lying)

Watch something happens to Lily's flight and she ends up staying.



Author's Response: *mouth is zipped*


lostinadreamx (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 11:57 am (The Nature Of Lying)
That bastard got so lucky! Ah, when the truth comes out, it's really going to get ugly. It's really going to hurt Addy that she was lied to yet again. Man, Justin is a piece of work! He's sitting there saying that being lied to and hurt is terrible, but he's setting her up for the same thing! :( Not cool.

Author's Response: You'd think that this would occur to the boy, but no...


glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 09:04 am (The Nature Of Lying)

Hollie, I love you most of all for curing my work-induced boredom.  

Justin, you stupid boy. You get presented an opportunity to come clean and you don't use it. That little superficial lie is going to come back and bite him in the ass way harder than he thinks, lol. 

I love the 'untruth' bit. Sort of reminds me of Alice in  Wonderland, the whole unbirthday thing. And Justin's inner monologue is hysterical, in the general miserable self-deprecating way of course. 

 



Author's Response: Work induced boredom sucks, happy to be assistance. Especially when I get such amusing reviews and JJB comments out of it! :o)


a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 15, 2008 05:38 pm (Mental Health Days)

So...I'm guessing that Lily is a little more up with the times (meaning music) and she's going to out JT for the musician he is...and there will be drama.

am I close?



Author's Response: I couldn't possibly say...


MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 15, 2008 05:21 pm (Mental Health Days)
I bet Miss Lily will recognize Justin. Cover blown and I love it. Pleae update soon.

Author's Response: *whistles innocently*


lostinadreamx (Signed) on Jul 15, 2008 11:27 am (Mental Health Days)

Lily is about to blow Justin's spot up at this get together. :D I can't wait to read all about that! Update soon!



Author's Response: *looks innocent (doesn;t do a very goo djob) and says nothing*


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 08, 2008 12:49 am (Foreign Places)
Justin Timberlake speaking spanish....that's sexy!!!

Author's Response: Oh as far as I'm concerned he doesn't need to speak so long as I can just look at him *lol*


a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 07, 2008 08:45 pm (Foreign Places)
I sense trouble on the horizion.  This never stay this good in your stories for long :) lol.  Love it, and I'm totally on the JT/Addy train.

Author's Response: I have absolutely no idea what you could mean by that *Hollie's nose grows*


alimera (Signed) on Jul 07, 2008 07:06 pm (Foreign Places)
Okay, he's digging himself a really deep hole. Problem #1, he's JT. Problem #2, he's not going to be there forever so at this rate, he might end up being just like that guy who broke Addy's heart. Problem #3...he's JT. Lol, besides all that, this story still rocks. Update again soon!

Author's Response: You get a big smooch for this review because this is so what I wanted at least one person to say after this chapter.


SJane (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 07:18 am (It's a Start)
Wow justin the banker? I think I need to go make a deposit lol glad to have something new from u girl

Author's Response: I'd certainly go to my bank a lot more often if any of my bankers looked like that *lol*


a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 30, 2008 03:25 pm (It's a Start)
Justin Timberlake and normal don't seem to fit in the same sentence together,  but that could just be me :) anyway...I love it so far and I can't wait to see where you take it.

Author's Response: He seems like he'd stand out even if he wasn't famous, but maybe I say that only because I've always known him as famous *lol*


alimera (Signed) on Jun 30, 2008 12:24 pm (It's a Start)
Hahaha, sure you can be normal, Justin! Everyone's entitled to some normalcy. Update again soon!

Author's Response: I think so :o)




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