Comments For Paradise Lost
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 01, 2009 06:39 pm (Two Sides To Every Story)

Wow...that's a lot to take in for such an uneventful chapter...if that makes sense.

First, I'm happy that Lily isn't turning into a coke whore, and I hope that she and Addy can get things out in the open and be OK again.  And...then...there's Justin.  I'm afraid that he might be a lost cause.  He's so hung up on Addy, really, it's sickening how oblivious he is. 

Anywho...I loved it :)



Author's Response: It makes plenty of sense - sometimes the uneventful stuff is where most happens in life!


alimera (Signed) on May 22, 2009 12:54 pm (Help)
Hmm, he's starting to listen to her issues...another step in the right direction! Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: :o)


SJane (Signed) on May 18, 2009 06:01 pm (Help)
Hmm and interesting turn of events indeed. Im totally feeling where addy is comming from...well minus the drugs lol

I like how she is using the fact that she's not in justins video as something making her feel slightly better but what if he did hire some1 that looks like her haha

Author's Response: What if indeed? *mwah haha*


a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 18, 2009 05:20 pm (Help)
Ooh...that was sweet.  I like them together :)

Author's Response: Thanks hon!


lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on May 18, 2009 01:43 pm (Help)
awe! More soon!!!!

Author's Response: Will try!


jaye2kaye (Signed) on May 10, 2009 07:38 pm (Slippery Slopes)
why is rachel being such a bitch?

Author's Response: Is it being a bitch if you're right? *lol* *ducks*


alimera (Signed) on May 09, 2009 12:49 pm (Slippery Slopes)
Hahahahahahaha...well, Justin, I hate to say it, but Rachel's no idiot. Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: She's really not *lol*


a_moments_grace (Signed) on May 04, 2009 01:53 pm (Slippery Slopes)
Oh Justin, Justin, Justin...I'm on Team Rachel with this one :)  and I was expecting to hear that he picked a girl that looks just like Addy for the video...it's pretty obvious, lol.

Author's Response: He does lack subtlety!!


Vikki (Signed) on May 04, 2009 11:27 am (Slippery Slopes)

LOL! I love this!

I think Rach hit the nail on the head and Justin is in La La Land of Denial.

He should just ask Addy to be in the video and call it a day. :)



Author's Response: La La Land of Denial... do they have chocolate there? Cos it sounds kind of fun but I can't go if there's no chocolate


SJane (Signed) on May 03, 2009 08:53 pm (Slippery Slopes)
I don't think they are as far off as justin likes to think they are...but I think I along with others r thinking that maybe he should hire our girls for the video

Author's Response: Hee, don't know how Addy'd feel about that!


alimera (Signed) on Apr 18, 2009 08:54 am (All The Small Things)
Hahahahahahahahahaha, oh man that's funny. Justin and Addy have the coolest/weirdest relationship, but I hope she ditches Steve and his big mouth and tries something more serious with Justin, they mesh very well. Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: Weird is a good word for it. *lol* Thanks hon!


jaye2kaye (Signed) on Apr 17, 2009 04:19 pm (All The Small Things)
what's going on with lily? i hope nothing serious is going on, i.e. "purple circles" under her eyes

Author's Response: *whistles*


a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 13, 2009 09:19 pm (All The Small Things)

So...Phew!  I've just managed to catch up on the back log of chapters I had going on...and...well....you know I love this story, and I can't believe I'd even let reading it slack a little!

Wonderful, juicy drama is just what I needed today (especially because it's not mine!) 



Author's Response: Sometimes it's nice to read about other people's dramas to distract from your own *lol*


Teeny (Anonymous) on Apr 13, 2009 11:41 am (Solitary Man)

No way! I lived in Surrey for a year when I was 13 and found English people to be very kind indeed.

Sorry, I must stop reviewing and actually read!



Author's Response: Review as much as you like my dear, I love your comments!


Teeny (Anonymous) on Apr 13, 2009 11:34 am (La Isla Bonita)

"I think it also had something to do with Tony Blair being voted into Government"

This was a 'lol' line, although when you compare Blair to what we got, surely he doesn't seem so bad?! 



Author's Response: I think we got bad and you got worse *lol*




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