Comments For The End Song
Bobbilynn (Signed) on Jun 21, 2011 03:29 am (Chapter One)
To Mozie (Since I cannot edit my response!) - I was actually thinking of another story ... I believe that I had a sequel up but removed it shortly after posting it because it wasn't what I wanted; perhaps I will revamp it and post it ")
mozie (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 05:44 pm (Chapter Two)
just re-read the end song and was wondering if you have a sequel because i can't find it
Author's Response: I do, but it is only one chapter - I'm actually probably going to take it down and revamp it. It's called "Rush Over Me" :)
Author's Response: I do, but it is only one chapter - I'm actually probably going to take it down and revamp it. It's called "Rush Over Me" :)
DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Apr 20, 2008 05:50 pm (Epilogue)
Why would she do that? Did she honestly think by leaving and avoiding Justin and JC they wouldn't still have a broken heart regardless? Stupid girl you can't win for losing...
I don't like how selfish and shallow these guys seem to be! When she moves on and is no longer at their disposal as easily as before when she had feelings for them all of a sudden they having such a burning and torturous need to be with her *smh*
All of them all silly and have no idea of what they really want. Alison needs to live for herself and stop trying to make everyone else around her happy...in the end that will only make her miserable and with life long regrets.
omgwtfjustin (Signed) on Sep 14, 2007 10:30 pm (-:- Meet the Characters -:-)
Author's Response: Alisan Porter was just the basis of what I wanted my character to be and it was kind of ironic that I had named my character Alisan to begin with, so I went with it. By bigger, I meant with chest and hips, not so much heavy - but an actual curvy woman and not too thin.
As I noted, Alisan was a dancer before she ruined her knee. So she obviously was skinnier before, and Alisan Porter could be more portrayed by her then than presently - though it was still somewhat there. I wanted an Italian-looking, dark haired, olive complected woman, and she was it.
None of my characters are the women that I post as characters, what I have cooked in my head will never be brought to a photo because there hasn't been any actress/model/singer/whatever that has fit the mold of who I want them to be. They are close, but not even exact. I like to base my original characters on real-life women, women who worry about their hips, their bellies, their insecurities ... and as you probably saw in 'By My Side', Katharine McPhee was chosen as the character for the opposite weight issue (her battle with an eating disorder) though it coincided with what many young women face - obesity, struggle with fluctuating weight or just not weighing enough.
And the bland part was actually just Justin's description of someone he refused to see past his friend until later on. Kind of in denial, I guess? Later on, he noted that she was beautiful and hated that she was losing weight that she had been losing. You always see someone differently until you realize you have fallen in love with them.
Thanks for the review! :)
I'm sorry but if that is how alisan looks then there is no reason she should be 25 and single.. not to mention didn't you say she was a little bigger and bland...
that girl just doesn't fit the image in my head. in fact it sort of ruined it.
Author's Response: Alisan Porter was just the basis of what I wanted my character to be and it was kind of ironic that I had named my character Alisan to begin with, so I went with it. By bigger, I meant with chest and hips, not so much heavy - but an actual curvy woman and not too thin.
As I noted, Alisan was a dancer before she ruined her knee. So she obviously was skinnier before, and Alisan Porter could be more portrayed by her then than presently - though it was still somewhat there. I wanted an Italian-looking, dark haired, olive complected woman, and she was it.
None of my characters are the women that I post as characters, what I have cooked in my head will never be brought to a photo because there hasn't been any actress/model/singer/whatever that has fit the mold of who I want them to be. They are close, but not even exact. I like to base my original characters on real-life women, women who worry about their hips, their bellies, their insecurities ... and as you probably saw in 'By My Side', Katharine McPhee was chosen as the character for the opposite weight issue (her battle with an eating disorder) though it coincided with what many young women face - obesity, struggle with fluctuating weight or just not weighing enough.
And the bland part was actually just Justin's description of someone he refused to see past his friend until later on. Kind of in denial, I guess? Later on, he noted that she was beautiful and hated that she was losing weight that she had been losing. You always see someone differently until you realize you have fallen in love with them.
Thanks for the review! :)
rev0586 (Signed) on Jun 18, 2007 05:20 pm (Epilogue)
awww its over, that was a sorta sad ending, but it was a great story, and im glad that hes not gonna give up :)
Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Jun 17, 2007 03:38 am (Chapter Thirty Two)
Amazed and totally in love with this story! Update Update you have to UPDATE soon ok? Ok I'm done. Lol. :)
Author's Response: Hopefully, I'll have the last chapter of this story up by tonight/tomorrow afternoon. Bear with me! The sequel will be posted within a week or so :)
Author's Response: Hopefully, I'll have the last chapter of this story up by tonight/tomorrow afternoon. Bear with me! The sequel will be posted within a week or so :)
rev0586 (Signed) on Jun 04, 2007 05:10 am (Chapter Twenty Seven)
DAMN!! that was HOT!!!! lol great job
Author's Response: Haha thanks, I tried!
Author's Response: Haha thanks, I tried!
mistressofburden (Signed) on Jun 03, 2007 09:08 pm (Chapter Twenty)
Wooooooowwwwwwww....who needs a written piece when that visual was enough to get my heart racing a little bit. That song fits perfectly, and it's one of my favorites.
Author's Response: Thank you! =] And I love 'Come to Me', too - it's my ringtone and gets my mind going every time someone calls (which could be a good or bad thing)!
Author's Response: Thank you! =] And I love 'Come to Me', too - it's my ringtone and gets my mind going every time someone calls (which could be a good or bad thing)!
chazgurl4life (Signed) on May 31, 2007 01:16 pm (Chapter One)
i think they should be together ..have like a huge fight then...katie gets into the mix again...and then alisan hooks up with jc and in the end gets back with justin ( in a sequel)
LoveYou2 (Signed) on May 31, 2007 03:47 am (Chapter Twenty Three)
Well, I'd like some closure lol I mean all good things must come to end, right?Either she doesn't want hook up, they do hook up & he dumps Kat, or they hook up and have issues. Either one is ok with me. lol I don't mind cliches lol A sequel is OK too, but honestly I don't think you need one :D It's your story, surpise me!
Littlefoot (Signed) on May 30, 2007 03:49 pm (Chapter Twenty Two)
you can't just leave me hanging like that! oh god!
chazgurl4life (Signed) on May 30, 2007 12:37 pm (Chapter Twenty One)
omg ..i loved this story...update asap...like now...lol
LoveYou2 (Signed) on May 30, 2007 02:34 am (Chapter Twenty One)
Oh, the beach is always good for romance lol Can't wait to see what happens next :D
LoveYou2 (Signed) on May 30, 2007 02:29 am (Chapter Twenty)
That chapter was funny in a perverted way lol Really though, I don't get her! I mean, she's with some pyscho guy she doesn't even really like. And has this great guy who loves her and wants her and she's STILL scared?! grr. More soon :D
crash coincidence (Signed) on May 30, 2007 12:41 am (Chapter Twenty)
holy hell no. there cannot be a sad ending. i refuse. simply refuse. love this tho :)
