kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 22, 2009 10:39 pm (Chapter 4)
Aww. I'm glad she told Eric where to go. Great Job.


mozie (Anonymous) on Jul 16, 2008 08:46 pm (Chapter 1)
Story was cute but remember that when writing a story you should use proper english, not texting shorthand. Maybe next time make it a little bit longer and get into the story a little bit more. Looking forward to another story

Author's Response: what do u mean shorthand? i do in author's notes but not in the actual fics


MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 15, 2008 12:11 am (Chapter 3)

Lonnie should had shove his foot up Eric ass that guy is an A/hole she is better off with Justin yay for a real men lol :D

great storyline can't wait for the next update :) 

 



Author's Response: thanx. ure the 1st review. the end should be up soon. i gotta work out the dialogue. glad u liked it.




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