Comments For Heaven
MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Sep 04, 2009 06:30 pm (Chapter 30)
Enter text here.i understand how lena feels in this chapter. im white but my bro & sis are black so we get all kinds of hating, plus my own bullies. but im sure justin will kick whosever butt says anything :)

funny/cute ending


Author's Response: You're reaction is exactly what I was going for. My husband is on of 8 kids and his youngest brother is biracial. He is the only one in the family besides some cousins and he as well as the rest of the family goes through that too and I adore him. I'm glad that no one took any offense to it and I really really do hate the word I used but I know that this is something that a lot of people deal with on a day to day baisis including someone I love dearly. I'm so glad you liked this. 



JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 04, 2009 05:46 pm (Chapter 30)
Ok so Justin was stupid for dancing the way he was with that girl and Lena was stupid for trying to get back at him! The worker guy had my blood boiling with all the crap he was talking. And then you made me "awww" when Justin was talking about how perfect their skin colors look together. I had a lot of emotions in this chapter! Great update...hope another comes soon!



MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Aug 13, 2009 07:20 am (Chapter 29)

i know how she feels, i hate any kind of yelling.

cute chapter :)




sonia (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2009 06:23 pm (Chapter 28)

you have  new reader :D

i really love this story, so please update soon



Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. It's always nice to get a new reader. I'm working on a new update I promise. :)



Becca Lynn (Signed) on Aug 09, 2009 02:40 pm (Chapter 28)
the store scene was funny. I pictured this short kid going to buy something. I'm not sure why he was short in my mind but it made all that much funnier. Great update. :)



Becca Lynn (Signed) on Aug 09, 2009 02:35 pm (Chapter 27)
that was sweet. lol can't wait to see what happens.



MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Aug 06, 2009 07:19 am (Chapter 28)

aww i want that man! lol i dont need jewelry, itd just be nice to feel good :)

great chapter




MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Jun 28, 2009 02:27 pm (Chapter 26)
aww justin is sweet :). & lol at chris & joey :D



LuLu (Signed) on Jun 26, 2009 04:43 pm (Chapter 25)
Ok first off...HOT! Lena is one lucky, lucky girl. LoL.

I hope little Miss Britney doesn't rear her ugly head anytime soon.



MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Jun 26, 2009 08:28 am (Chapter 25)
i really love this fic, its so cute :)



amk88 (Signed) on Jun 26, 2009 02:51 am (Chapter 5)
  Justin got  alil sassy on that one.  LOL, Brit deserved it.



amk88 (Signed) on Jun 26, 2009 01:47 am (Chapter 2)
  She's too cute.  "She yells like that for lunch?"  Hehe.  I like it so far.



MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Jun 14, 2009 12:13 pm (Chapter 24)
cuuuuuuute :)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 11, 2009 08:55 pm (Chapter 23)
FINALLY HE TELLS THAT BITCH OFF!!!!



MrsTimberlake18 (Signed) on Jun 11, 2009 05:35 pm (Chapter 23)
go justin go justin! lol. great having putting wacko in her place. he belongs with lena. i love how lena cuddled up to him & he held her while britney was yelling :)





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