Comments For Heaven
Leake (Signed) on Sep 03, 2008 10:11 pm (Chapter 5)
Hey lady, I reallllllly like this story and I'm always lookin' out for updates. I hope that Lena starts feeling better about herself.


MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 03, 2008 08:51 pm (Chapter 5)
Great chapter. Please update soon.


SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Sep 03, 2008 08:47 pm (Chapter 5)

Ooooh!!! I CANT STAND BITCHNEY"S STUPID ASSS!!!!! i hate her soooo much. she shouldnt be allowed to sing...thats a waste of studio space.

 

Sorry...britney issues



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Sep 02, 2008 06:58 pm (Chapter 4)

where to begin....

1) they need to try and get to know Hellena....

2)Britney's (future bald-headed) ass cant be callin NO body out they nameor even bring up the whole race card. She has GOT to be on fukin CRACK cause if she called me out my name or said some shit like she did....homegirl would be gettin knocked the fuck out. (sorry....her comments hit home....)

3) Justin needs to just admit to Hellena that he like her...cause WE know she like him back....

4) Lynn should've made sure that Justin paid attention to the fact that he has a SIBLING(im using that word loosely....VERY LOOSELY)

5) Hellena...she needs to be more out there. I get that she's scared but she should know as long as Justin or Mama Lynn is there...nothing is gonna happen to her.

 

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!! I THINK U ARE AND AMAZING WRITER AND SHOULD NEVER STOP WRITING!!!! :)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Sep 02, 2008 06:58 pm (Chapter 4)

where to begin....

1) they need to try and get to know Hellena....

2)Britney's (future bald-headed) ass cant be callin NO body out they nameor even bring up the whole race card. She has GOT to be on fukin CRACK cause if she called me out my name or said some shit like she did....homegirl would be gettin knocked the fuck out. (sorry....her comments hit home....)

3) Justin needs to just admit to Hellena that he like her...cause WE know she like him back....

4) Lynn should've made sure that Justin paid attention to the fact that he has a SIBLING(im using that word loosely....VERY LOOSELY)

5) Hellena...she needs to be more out there. I get that she's scared but she should know as long as Justin or Mama Lynn is there...nothing is gonna happen to her.

 

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!! I THINK U ARE AND AMAZING WRITER AND SHOULD NEVER STOP WRITING!!!! :)



Whtny (Anonymous) on Sep 02, 2008 01:11 pm (Chapter 4)
Ugh BRIT, I want LENA  to beat her ass,lol


LuLu (Signed) on Aug 27, 2008 12:52 am (Chapter 2)
I miss this story :(, are you gonna write more?


DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jul 19, 2008 09:38 am (Chapter 2)

How cute that she's so shy! Just adorable lol

I love the way Justin and Miss L are kind and reassuring but not in an pushy/overbearing/fake way... 



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 09:42 pm (Chapter 2)

Oooooooooo. Electricity. I like it. Please update soon.



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 12:33 pm (Chapter 2)

Awww....Poor Hallena!!!

I love Lynn...she is so sweet and Justin is just adorble



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 13, 2008 11:39 pm (Chapter 1)
Very interesting. Please update soon.


LuLu (Signed) on Jul 13, 2008 12:49 pm (Chapter 1)
I likey! The premise is very interesting. I can't wait to see when Justin and Hallena meet!


Quincyluv (Signed) on Jul 12, 2008 10:40 pm (Chapter 1)

Nice concept.

 

*Ahh the dangerous things foster-sibs can do*



MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 12, 2008 10:32 pm (Chapter 1)
I like what I'm reading does far can't wait for more :)




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