just a girl (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 06:54 pm (What's Wrong)
Uggghhh she needs to tell him the truth!

Author's Response: She does need to tell him, but will she? I dunnnooooo. Stay tuned!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 05:21 pm (What's Wrong)
Dang!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now that's some messy shit. All these lives: Justin, Talis, Jess and Rie are going to be intertwined in something crazy huh? I just know, you're about to take us on one hell of a ride girl. lol But I can't wait! That's all I have to say for now. LOL. update soon.

Author's Response: Yep, Talis has created this big ridiculous mess for all these people to get their hands dirty in. Yeah, it might get a liiiittle crazy, but hopefully it'll be in a good way. And more importantly, I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the review, girl!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 01:47 pm (What's Wrong)
Damn. Twice? And once in his house? That's out cold. SMH. But she owes him an explanation and she needs to man up and tell him what she did. It's selfish for her to refuse to talk to him or tell him what happened. I completely agree with Jessica on that. Talis isn't protecting anyone but herself by keeping her secret. I'm glad that Jess is being stern with her and refusing to let her get away with the shit she's tying to pull. I'm glad Talis had enough guts and honesty to not go through with the marriage after cheating but the way she went about the whole thing is just wrong. I'm liking Jessica more and more in this story. I think if Justin starts hooking up with Rie, I'll be rooting for him to ditch her for Jess. She's a cool chick that would really take care of him and be good for him. I want those two crazy kids to get together. Hint, hint. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, she definitely did him dirty and now she won't even own up to it. It's sad, isn't it? I mean, I guess I wouldn't know what to do after that either, but after all that time with Justin, I wouldn't go all punkass like that. The girl has issues lol! But yeah, Jess isn't gonna play that game (for now, anyway). And she probably is the best choice for Justin, but I'm not sure when/if either of them will see that! Stayyy tuned! Thanks for the awesome review, hun.



just a girl (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 08:09 pm (The Running Man)
Great story so far. So sad but so good, keep it up!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks a bunch. I promise it won't be sad for long!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 12:17 pm (The Running Man)
Poor Justin and Jess for having to put up with him. I love Rie crazy behind already, but we can't love all the characters so I'm nervous to see what's happening or gonna happen. I mean, i can just sense the complication or love triangle or even square if Talis comes back damn. I really would like to know why she left him. Jess is sweet too but right now, I don't know what to think of any of them. It's too soon to tell. hehehe. Loved it update soon.

Author's Response: Haha, yay! I have a crush on Rie, so I'm glad you like her! And yeah, I'm pretty sure you won't love all the characters, but we've got a long way to go. You'll probably hate them all at some point lol! Definitely too soon to tell, but I hope you continue to like the story, triangles and squares and all. Thanks so much for the review!



toesinthesand (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 11:15 am (The Running Man)
awwwww I feel so bad for justin! I think he really is waiting for Talise to come back but I wish he would let her go. Jessica seems so sweet and maybe its just me but I get the feeling she wants to take talises spot in jusitns life. Oh but I also like rie and he seemed to like her instantly this is getting good. Update sooon!

Author's Response: Yeah, he is kinda pining away for her right now, which is to be expected! Jess is putting herself out there a little, but we shall see. Like she said, she mostly just wants Justin to be happy. Perhaps Rie is the girl to do it? Things that make you go Hmmm. lol Thanks for the review!



lyss2118 (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 02:33 am (The Running Man)

loooove it so far.

great characters and great story line. so sexy when justins vulnerable :) lol

keep up the good work girlie!



Author's Response: Yayyy, thank you so much! I agree, dark and twisty Justin has a certain quality about him, doesn't he? So glad you're enjoying it!



Shufflee (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 01:49 am (The Running Man)
I sense a love triangle coming up

Author's Response: You may be riiight. I have a thing for shapes though, so it could also be a square, a pentagon, maybe even a nonagon! lol Thanks for the review!



princess (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 10:46 pm (The Running Man)
oh man. this was fan-freakin-tabulous. I love rie. can I say that. I like jess always have but I always cheer for the pigmentally gifted. Does that sound racist? Anywhoo. . . SHe is wonderful. But why do I feel as if you are going to punch us in our face with something unexpected because we seem to be getting comfortable and you loke to be difficult. I know your stories man. *shakes head* This is about to get complex as a mug. Calm before the storm. calm before the storm. So more really really soon kay thanks so much

Author's Response: Why thank you! And I love Rie a lot, so I'm glad that you're already on her side... racist or not lmao. I wouldn't be doing my job if I didn't punch you in the face with something. But I do it out of love! Glad to see you've been paying attention, though lol. And I promise the storm won't be completely horrible. People will come out of it alive... mostly. Thanks so much for the review!



band nerd (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 09:41 pm (The Running Man)
LOVE IT!  But I love all of your stories.  Post more post more post more!!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! That means a lot. I'm glad to see you're reading!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 09:36 pm (The Running Man)
Uh-oh spaghettiOs. Rie is definitely going to cause some drama and relationship strain between Justin and Jessica. Maybe I'm reading her wrong but Jessica's got a thing for Justin. I don't think she'll be enthused if he gets involved with Rie. They're both sweet girls so I can't really pick a side. I'm just staying neutral for now. At least until the shit hits the fan. Please update soon.  

Author's Response: I think you're reading her quite well, actually! But I guess it wouldn't be very wise for me to go around giving away the plotline and stuff, so... maybe you're not! lol I'm glad they both seem relatively harmless for now, that's what I was going for. Thanks for the feedback, hun!



SJane (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 04:45 am (Moving Mountains)
I really hate the work she used but in this situation its totally fitting what a cunt

Author's Response: Yeahhh, Jess was harsh, but she's right. Sometimes, you just gotta say what you need to say lol. Thanks for the review!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 17, 2008 11:44 pm (Moving Mountains)
OMGZ! I love it. lol. Did you get my little joke there? Cause you said OMGZ...then I said OMGZ...get it? lol? Anyway, great story so far. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Ahh, you were paying attention. I like that! So glad you love it though, thanks for the review!



princess (Signed) on Jul 17, 2008 11:09 pm (Moving Mountains)
eeww. immediate hate. why did the ethnic girl have to be the cunt and jess come to his rescue. that was so good I actually feel nauseous. don't leave us hanging please

Author's Response: Damn, I didn't mean to make you nauseous, just sad! LOL. I guess any reaction is good, though, so thanks! Don't worry, there's more to come with ethnic girls and Jess and... stuff!



toesinthesand (Signed) on Jul 17, 2008 08:25 pm (Moving Mountains)
Omg that was sooo sad. I really love that you made justin and jessica friends i guess that will be changing though?? Great writing!! update sooooon!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! Yeah, I love Jess, so I wanted to get her in the mix. We shall see what I do with her, though! lol I'll be sure to update very soon!





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