Vessy (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 09:51 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
Once again great chapter!



sarah1988 (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 09:48 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)

sorry to say it but i'm all for jessica and justin. i mean...that's so romantic. yeah rie is alright and saved him out of his misery but jessica is...adorable in this story. 

so...TEAM JESSICA!!! =)  




alimera (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 08:33 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
Oh wow, now what's going to happen? I wish I could know what is in Justin's head right now...is he regretting sleepingwith Jess, or did he just realize that he loved her instead of Rie? Either way Rie is NOT going to be happy...update again soon!



Jessicalli (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 07:22 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
OMG! NO NO NO! I could kill Jessica but I feel bad for her at the same time LOL. I can't believe this just happened. What is Justing doing? OMG! That was an a mazing chapter but OMG. This is BAD. Ahhhhhh great work!



mozie (Anonymous) on Aug 29, 2008 05:17 am (Moving Mountains)
AMAZING. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH PLEASE DON'T MAKE ME WAIT TOO LONG FOR AN UPDATE



Shufflee (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 03:19 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
Woah



tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 01:53 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
Not only did you use my Sara Bareilles AMAZING-ness in this chapter (I about stopped reading and immediately started a review when I saw the lyrics... no lie) but you just had to include some CRAZY FOOLISHNESS in this chapter to torture me.

Where it stops, nobody knowssss hahaha. In the words of John Mayer/Kanye, I hate you and I love you at the very same time. I can't wait for the bitchassness to continue!



SJane (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 01:47 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
I just...really don't know who is at fault in this situation. Justin because he should know if he feels for jess like that and if not why sleep with her and wat about Rie. But then jess i'm sorry but he's not going to leave being all weird then do a 180 and feel the same and bang your in bed just.... i kinda wnat to smack both of them lol



princess (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 01:17 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *clutches heart and falls to the floor* I thought you said it wouldn't be that bad. I feel like I just died a little inside. *Hangs head and discreetly wipes tear*



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 11:03 pm (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)

I know I already left a review, but i just had to say how i love these characters.

Like this story came at the prefect time for right because i know personally, the things that Rie said in her fear list touch me. because I have some of those same fears, as im sure others do. but i think princess said it best about a chapter, "just made one of the shittiest weeks ever worth it. You are truly talented to be able to take us away from our problems with this beautifully complicated...", but thats how i feel about this story.

Rie, i love how she is vunerable at home but im public you never know, the fear commitment, im not going to lie, makes me want to make an early resolution right now. and her losing her mom made me sad.

Justin, love the fear of close objects and the way you showed it at the begin of the story, makes this so addicting.

Jess, its a love hate thing, cause i love her as the best friend, but she needs to back up and give Rie and Justin fifty feet man. like im happy she let it out that she loves him, but damn, i hope he didnt fuck it up with Rie. whatever happen to just being b.f.f.l best friends for life

Kelis or whatever- B*tch (will do), cant stand her, how you going to be Jess b.f. and tell her shes not getting any younger? what kind of shit is that. Got some nerve to want everyone else life to shut down, just cause karma came and bit her in the ass.  B please!

so much more to say, not enough room nor time to say it now. but dont be surpise if i do catch up on my feedback later.

Dani




band nerd (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 10:41 pm (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
aww crap!



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 10:22 pm (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)

O - M - G!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was prefect! I want to scream but dont want to wake up my family or have them look at me crazy, but it was just so damn good.

I waited and looked everyday, two-three times aday to see if you had updated yet. but nothing, but when i checked on my phone, i was excited.

but what topped it off, that threw me for a loop, was my girl Sara, I LOOOOOOOVE that song. I love that album, and i new it was good for a chapter in a story but didnt know what.

Girly did you so me what, it was amazing, soo good i had to log onto my laptop and let you know just how good.

This story is-just the over all presentation (sp?) is- i dont even know the word for it yet... I want to say amazing, but that just is like a spec in how i feel about this story. 

W O W, i just had to let you know that im lovin, and that it's never too much... (just like Luther sang it)  

Dani

************** giving you stars because they are well deserved.




Sox (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 09:47 pm (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)

AHHHHH lol

OK, so I'm glad she told him and I really want them together. But I think they went a little overboard and things are going to be awkward... very much so. I hope they can get over it and just be together. I like Rie, she's fine, but I just like Jess better haha I have a soft spot for best friends falling in love. :)

Very good work, update soon! 




cagf5000 (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 09:10 pm (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)

Great chapter!!! post more soon....I'm gonna die if I have to wait forever!lol Hey I can;t view any of those pics for some reason?




a_nonymous (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 08:48 pm (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
Uh oh.





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