Comments For Bar - tender Loving
Vessy (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 05:34 am (Night...Uh...??...)
amazing story! I hope you will write something for the photo shoot session :)
Author's Response: Thank so much Vessy. I'll look into it. If inspiration hits, I'll do it. :)
Author's Response: Thank so much Vessy. I'll look into it. If inspiration hits, I'll do it. :)
SexualCoco (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 05:28 am (Night...Uh...??...)
OMG D, I am a puddle of mush right now girl! UGH, just from the moment he told her how he felt, that he needed her, to when they made love, and that ending line...*swoons* Seriously, where is Bartender!Justin because I need him in my like (haha). Girl this was so cute and sweet and you did a great job with it and HELL YES to bringing these two back sometime in the future...only let's change her name from Angela to Briana (haha). Great job girlie!
Author's Response: *sigh* Bri, girl...so you should know what was passing through my mind since I was the one writing it. lol. Man I want a bartender to tender to me like that too. lol. Thanks so so so much. I'm super happy you liked it. I hope I can pull them back again, hopefully if i get inspired. hehe. Ah, next short I promise you whether it's a visual or other, I'll name the female Briana. No doubt. :P Thanks a mill girl.
Author's Response: *sigh* Bri, girl...so you should know what was passing through my mind since I was the one writing it. lol. Man I want a bartender to tender to me like that too. lol. Thanks so so so much. I'm super happy you liked it. I hope I can pull them back again, hopefully if i get inspired. hehe. Ah, next short I promise you whether it's a visual or other, I'll name the female Briana. No doubt. :P Thanks a mill girl.
MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 03:54 pm (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayzzzzzz!!! I was hoping for sex but I'll settle for a hot kiss. A very, very hot kiss. And how cute is he? Calling to check on her and cooking soup and stuff. Great chapter. Love it. Please update soon.
Author's Response: *Clap happily* Woop! Happy you liked it girl. Ah, you all and the sex...pervs....haha, don't worry it's not over yet. *whistles* Almost...lol. Yeah Jay was cute and all caring and stuff, fussing over his Angel. Ah the perks of new, young love. *sigh* gotta get me a guy so man...damn. lol. Glad you're loving it! I'll have the last part up soon. thanks for the great feedback.
Author's Response: *Clap happily* Woop! Happy you liked it girl. Ah, you all and the sex...pervs....haha, don't worry it's not over yet. *whistles* Almost...lol. Yeah Jay was cute and all caring and stuff, fussing over his Angel. Ah the perks of new, young love. *sigh* gotta get me a guy so man...damn. lol. Glad you're loving it! I'll have the last part up soon. thanks for the great feedback.
Schnessa (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 03:12 pm (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Oh...this was just good....so good...I love the kiss and he showed up to take care of her how sweet!
Author's Response: Aw yeh, I know. I love those two together. I don't even want to see them go yet but you know...at least I had a blast writing them. lol the kiss I thought of it you know...I figured, best way to express those hidden feelings for a start eh. *wink*. Happy you liked it girl. Thanks a mill for reviewing.
Author's Response: Aw yeh, I know. I love those two together. I don't even want to see them go yet but you know...at least I had a blast writing them. lol the kiss I thought of it you know...I figured, best way to express those hidden feelings for a start eh. *wink*. Happy you liked it girl. Thanks a mill for reviewing.
DaniD (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 09:48 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
This is wonderful! I love the idea of Justin as a bartender :D Angela is pretty cool...and I don't blame her one bit for dragging her ass to the club every Friday night! lol
Author's Response: Me too! I love bartender!J! I might use him as my muse again for another short in the future. lol. Yeah, she's got it bad man, they both do. I'm almost done with the last part so I'll have it up soon. Glad you like this and thanks so much for letting me know. :)
Author's Response: Me too! I love bartender!J! I might use him as my muse again for another short in the future. lol. Yeah, she's got it bad man, they both do. I'm almost done with the last part so I'll have it up soon. Glad you like this and thanks so much for letting me know. :)
alimera (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 09:23 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Aww, that was cute! Update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Almost done fixing up the last chap. I should have it out soon for you guys. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Almost done fixing up the last chap. I should have it out soon for you guys. :)
SJane (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 07:46 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Oh I felt like melting into a puddle myself just from reading that kiss great job
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much. I know what you mean. hehehe. I'm really happy you all are enjoying.
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much. I know what you mean. hehehe. I'm really happy you all are enjoying.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 04:05 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
Oooh, that was so cute and sexy! Especially that kiss at the end...damn, I wish I was Angela (*teehee*). But my heart melted at how he called to see if she was okay and then showed up to her place to cook and take care of her. Shoot, I want a boo like that (haha). Great job girlie and even though it's almost over, I'm loving this story girlie!
Author's Response: Gurl I wish I was her too...I want a boo like that too! hahaha. Dang man. LOL Yeah, when she was sick, Justin couldn't help it anymore. He had to let his true feelings show. And that kiss...*sigh* I envisioned it. But I didn't want them to get carried away yet you know. lol. hehe. The last part will be up soon. Thanks for the feedback Bri.
Author's Response: Gurl I wish I was her too...I want a boo like that too! hahaha. Dang man. LOL Yeah, when she was sick, Justin couldn't help it anymore. He had to let his true feelings show. And that kiss...*sigh* I envisioned it. But I didn't want them to get carried away yet you know. lol. hehe. The last part will be up soon. Thanks for the feedback Bri.
Vessy (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 03:23 am (Night Two, Three, Four, Five...)
great chapter!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks vessy! :)
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks vessy! :)
classicbeauty (Signed) on Jul 21, 2008 12:53 am (Night One)
Author's Response: EEEE!!! DANI! Gurl you surprised me....you just like...show up at the most unexpected time! what's going on gurl? I miss ya too! :S Where have you been hiding? Well anyway, I'm super glad you like this little short I have going. And, if you check back in a few days, I should have your AULA Ju and berry fix. *wink* hehe. Thanks so much for the feedback gurl. I deeply appreciate when you let me know what ya think. :)
awe sh*t you don' started somethin'
love, love, love-absolutly love it!
need more in the morning!
dani
how you doing girlie? miss ya *hugs*
Author's Response: EEEE!!! DANI! Gurl you surprised me....you just like...show up at the most unexpected time! what's going on gurl? I miss ya too! :S Where have you been hiding? Well anyway, I'm super glad you like this little short I have going. And, if you check back in a few days, I should have your AULA Ju and berry fix. *wink* hehe. Thanks so much for the feedback gurl. I deeply appreciate when you let me know what ya think. :)
MochaB (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 12:23 pm (Night One)
Author's Response: Yeah I was going for cute n' sweet. I'm tired of all the drama....hahaha well no not really, but you know...I like the change. hehehe. Really happy you like this one. And, you guys will get to see what happens next soon. :P I'm almost done going over the chap to post it up. Thanks for the feedback.
eeeeeek!! i love this!! :o) it's so cute. go justin go! i can't wait to see what happens once next friday comes. update soon. :o)
Author's Response: Yeah I was going for cute n' sweet. I'm tired of all the drama....hahaha well no not really, but you know...I like the change. hehehe. Really happy you like this one. And, you guys will get to see what happens next soon. :P I'm almost done going over the chap to post it up. Thanks for the feedback.
Shufflee (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 10:06 am (Night One)
I love it already. Update soon
Author's Response: Yay thanks a mill for the positive feedback. I'm really pleased you all like Justin and Angela's little tale. lol. I'll update soon.
Author's Response: Yay thanks a mill for the positive feedback. I'm really pleased you all like Justin and Angela's little tale. lol. I'll update soon.
alimera (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 08:35 am (Night One)
Nice, I like this one! Give us more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks girl. I'm so happy you guys like this little short. I had fun with it. I wanted it to be your typical yet still different little love story. :) I'll update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks girl. I'm so happy you guys like this little short. I had fun with it. I wanted it to be your typical yet still different little love story. :) I'll update soon.
Vessy (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 05:33 am (Night One)
I like it so far.
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! I'll update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! I'll update soon! :)
SJane (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 02:22 am (Night One)
So adorably cute and addictive can't wait for more
Author's Response: Woop! You know it. :) That's the type of addiction a person never wants to go away right? Glad you like, I'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Woop! You know it. :) That's the type of addiction a person never wants to go away right? Glad you like, I'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing.
