Comments For The Shorts Series
MochaB (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 10:27 pm (Distance makes the heart grow fonder.)
awww that was cute... and of course sexy and romantic. i enjoyed it. :o)

Author's Response: thanks, mama!  I was trying for romance without all the dirtyness.  I think I'm better at being dirty, haha.



Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 31, 2010 05:45 pm (Distance makes the heart grow fonder.)

I swear, you could write some kind of erotic novel because that my dear friend...was HAWT!  She did talk too much but I'll be if Justin didn't find a way to calm all that down.  LOL! You know this is hot stuff...and I love it!

 

Happy New Year love :) 



Author's Response: haha, as much dirty smut I write here, I probably could compile an erotic novel, lol.  It probably wouldn't be that good, though :)  Thanks mama!  Happy New Year!



musicmel (Signed) on Dec 27, 2010 03:30 pm (Distance makes the heart grow fonder.)
 DAMN!!! I don’t know what I expected when I started reading this and well… DAMN was I surprised & happy with it. You did a great job my dear!

Author's Response: hey lady.  I wasn't sure what I was expecting when I wrote it either.  As with all of my stories, what I sit down and intend to write and what comes out are always two different things, lol.  Glad you liked it!!! :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 26, 2010 07:00 pm (Distance makes the heart grow fonder.)
Woo! *fans herself* Loved it! Gotta love the teasing...ooohh yeaa! Great job... :D a simple HS crush can turn into something serious.. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, it was inspired by a boy crush I had.  But you know, I love the tease!  hehe.  Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.  Def inspires you to write more. :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 26, 2010 06:51 pm (Distance makes the heart grow fonder.)
Ooohh....lolz she was so nervous and embarassed HA! lolz I laughed when Justin said "what happened, it looks like youve seen a ghost" Off to the next chapter...this is getting good..

Author's Response: lol...yeah, this chapter was actuall one of my favorites.  I'm not sure why, but I love writing really awkward flirty scenes.  I need to break out of that habit, but glad that you liked it! :)  Thanks again for the review!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 26, 2010 06:45 pm (Distance makes the heart grow fonder.)
I like it so far... :) let the preparations begin..



CorystaRose (Signed) on Dec 26, 2010 03:57 pm (Distance makes the heart grow fonder.)
Oh wow thank you! i'm still working o n my secret Santa fic, but as soon as I get that posted I'll get right to work on my other one ^^

Author's Response: Excellent.  Can't wait to read.  Hope you liked this one. :)



lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Oct 28, 2010 01:40 am (A Day at the Beach)
oh, wow! this was rly powerful... reminded me of revolutionary road in a sense... the concept of the woman not wanting to be tied down by children, which is usually something u see in reverse with men... it's such a deep thing to tap into & i think u did it perfectly. great story! if only we knew what happened next...

Author's Response: Sorry, I'm just responding now.  My life has been a little hectic, lately.  thanks for the review, darling.  And yes...I just intended this to be a short for the challenge, but I actually think it could make a cool story.  I just really like pushing the boundaries on what people think, and you're so right.  Most people think it's standard for the men to not want kids--but what happens when it's the woman?  I've never seen revolutionary road, but I think I'll maybe go pick it up, see if I can get any inspiration to add more to this.  Thanks for the comment!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Oct 27, 2010 05:45 am (A Day at the Beach)
Ummmmmmm WOW! can we get a sequel??? 

Author's Response: Hey LadyT!  I'll consider it.  I really only meant this for the challenge as a short, but I think it could be good as a full length.  We'll see how inspired I am, and how much time I have.  I have so many unfinished projects!  blah!  Thanks for the review, though!  <3



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 27, 2010 01:10 am (A Day at the Beach)
Aww, you wrote another short...yay!  I need more...I want more.  This is such a good story mama.  Why is she so angry though?  See, that's why I need more man.  Good work honey!  I missed you!

Author's Response: Thanks honey! <3 :)  Missed you too.  We'll see if I do anything with this, but it could be cool with a few more chapters.  We'll see, we'll see. :)



MochaB (Signed) on Sep 16, 2009 07:21 pm (Fate)
Lol obviously it was meggie, but I am definitely glad she wanted more. I enjoyed it! It was really cute. :o)

Author's Response: Thanks Mocha, dear.  You are so wonderful!  Glad you enjoyed--and thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot.



meggie (Signed) on Sep 15, 2009 04:20 pm (Fate)
It was meeee! Thank you thank you thank you! I really do love this series!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much.  I'm really glad you like it so much.  I'll try and write some better stuff--I haven't really had "it" lately.  But your review is so welcome!  Let me know if you ever want a request, I'm happy to write one for you.



MochaB (Signed) on Sep 13, 2009 02:03 am (The Honeymoon)
:o) :o) :o)
That was really sweet and romantic. *swoon* I loved it.

Author's Response: Awww so glad you liked it.  I really want to write a great love story, but I have yet to do that.  I'll keep trying to update.  Thanks again for the review, you're very much appreciated.



meggie (Signed) on Sep 12, 2009 05:17 pm (The Honeymoon)
i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!! more please!

Author's Response: Thanks again meggie, you're wonderful.  Thanks for the review.



SJane (Signed) on Sep 11, 2009 06:12 pm (The Honeymoon)
Oh bless oh so sweet and lovey dovey

Author's Response: Yeah, I was in a loving mood.  How rare :)  Glad you liked it, dear, and thanks so much for the review.  Sorry I'm slow on responding, life's kinda gotten in the way lately.



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