Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Dec 23, 2020 04:56 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)

OMG I miss this storiy so much! Think you'll ever come back and update it? *Does cute-sy pouty begging face*




Eevee (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2014 04:00 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
Please finish this! Edge of my seat!



Jasmine (Anonymous) on Sep 21, 2013 02:46 am (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
Clay has lost the plot. He creeps me out and he is up to no good its so scary but I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 16, 2013 10:09 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)

UGH! This is really good! Its so creepy that Clay is like stalking Sutton and JC's every move..AHH!

But anyways, earlier in this chapter, these whole set of lines here make me smile, because JC in real life doesn't act like the high-profile celebrity he is, and I am so glad.. :) "“That’s the girl whose dad I saw sing live one time!” Sutton had heard all about her father being in a band with Chris and Joey and Justin Timberlake and Lance Bass. But that had been a long, long time ago and Sutton, though she had seen a few videos, hadn’t really cared all that much about it. To her, her father was just that-her father. He was funny and he could sing and they had a great time together no matter what they did. She’d never known him as a famous celebrity and sometimes she couldn’t believe he ever was because he’d always just been “Dad” or “Daddy.”

And I also like how Chris reacted when he was waiting for this girl that auditioned for Disney, he's such a smart aleck.. LOL Its true though, Disney hasn't been the same.. :(

Above all, good chapter..looking forward for more, thanks for the update.. :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!



Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 16, 2013 07:38 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
So Clay's finally in Grayson. Again, what a creep. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Author's Response: Thanks, girl!



theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 07, 2013 08:50 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)

*gasp* Stalker much?? I know that Sutton is her actual father, but still.. :( AHH! The suspense!

*sigh* Now, on to a lighter note, OMG! Chris with kids! *squee* He is SO adorable, I would love for him to have kids.. :) Little Chris! AHH! I would cry of happiness, because he is just so darn cute.

This is good! Thanks for updating..



Author's Response:

Thanks! I agree, he'd be a fun dad for sure :)

Alysen B. 




Sarah (Signed) on Sep 07, 2013 01:45 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)

Clay makes me nervous : /

Chris would make a wonderful dad, in this story or in real life. : )



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Sarah!

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Sep 07, 2013 12:40 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
Ugh! Clay is so creepy. He reminds me of Crazy Nanny Carrie on "One Tree Hill". And yay for Chris and Lesly on starting a family!

Author's Response:

That's a great description and one I'd never thought about til now. Thanks for the feedback!!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 31, 2013 11:02 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)

*dun dun dun

He went on searching spree looking for Sutton, ooh! What is Clay trying to do?? Every photo that he was seeing made him get angry than the last one.

Good chapter..thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

Thanks as always :)

Alysen B. 




Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 30, 2013 02:39 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
Ooh super creepy! I feel like I'm watching an Academy award winning Jodie Foster type movie about to unfold. Love the build up. Once again, excellent writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks! And thanks again for your help ;)

Alysen B. 




Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 29, 2013 11:35 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
Nice to see you've updated! And I'm smelling trouble here, scary trouble. You sure have a knack for leaving us readers wanting more. Try to not leave us hanging too long, if you can help it.

Author's Response:

Hoping to get out more this weekend ;) Thanks for your review!

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 27, 2013 11:44 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)

Oooh...well, thats something. Hmm..that line really made Clay mad, he needs to control his temper, I hope he doesn't go to Grayson and cause a scene..is he??

On a lighter note, I like the playful banter between Chris and JC in the studio, these lines here: "

Hello?” Chris called into the large studio as he opened the door.

“Chris?” he heard JC’s voice from behind one of the small voice studio rooms.

“Yep,” Chris answered, and followed the sound of JC’s voice. He was sitting at a piano, plunking out a few random chords and humming to himself as he did so. “Hey, man. Lesly kicked me out. Apparently trying on jewelry was not her idea of a good time for me.”

“Unbelievable,” JC chuckled and stopped playing. “Are you really lacking for something to do?”

“I’m bored as hell,” Chris admitted, sitting down across from JC on a leather bound couch.

LOL! I can totally hear Chris saying that.

Pretty good chapter..thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

Thanks! More to follow soon...

Alysen B. 




Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Aug 10, 2013 11:41 am (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
I was pleased to see about the update, and needless to say, you did a superb job. I love the family environment and I especially love Chris's little "cameo appearance." I also admire the way you dare to delve into Clay's psyche and we have a better understanding of his actions, even if they're still unconscionable.


Author's Response:

Thanks so much :) Chris should be making more of an appearance as the story goes on. More surprises to come!

Thanks again for your review! It means a lot.

Alysen B. 




theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 07, 2013 09:14 pm (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
Ooh! Disney World..would love to go one day, I have never been.. But like how this is starting out, and Clay better not start anything..hmph, but I wonder what happened to him as a child??

Author's Response:

You'll find out :)

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 




spoon (Signed) on Aug 04, 2013 05:54 am (Daddy's Girl: The Third in the Grayson Chronicles Series)
The calm before the storm. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Hehe. Oh, it's coming ;)

Alysen B. 




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