Alysen Blaine (Signed) on May 27, 2015 07:02 am (
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Perfect ending! Loved it!
Alysen Blaine (Signed) on May 05, 2015 03:35 am (
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It's 4:30am and I've just spent my insomnia reading the last three chapters. Fantastic job. Cannot wait to continue tomorrow!
Pumples (Signed) on May 02, 2015 05:59 am (
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Awww great ending. I'm glad it all worked out in the end for Chris and Melissa. A happy ending *sigh*
AceofSpades (Signed) on Apr 30, 2015 09:58 am (
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Aww, that was a sweet ending.
NSYNCLVR (Signed) on Apr 29, 2015 10:03 pm (
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I'm so happy I followed this series all the way through!!! I totally loved the ending! I may or may not have almost cried. Amazing job:)
AceofSpades (Signed) on Apr 29, 2015 09:42 am (
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Yes, Eric, take her back to Chris!
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 29, 2015 04:12 am (
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Hurray! Yayyyy!
Have to say, this part, '“I'm sold,” Chris said, leaning in and kissing her softly “Come on. Your old man turns into a pumpkin around ten-thirty.”
“I thought it was midnight?” she asked, climbing onto the motorcycle behind him as he started it up.
“That was ten years ago. You missed that window of opportunity.”
“In other words, it went bye bye bye.”' Hilarious.
I'm so glad it looks like Mel is soon to be free. I hope it all works out and she manages to escape and move forward from what's happened to her. I hope Derek is bought to justice at long last.
Can't wait for the next one!
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 29, 2015 04:03 am (
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I had to come back and mention that this chapter was especially moving and relevant to me. Great job, it actually moved me to tears. You guys are great. <3
Lyndsi (Anonymous) on Apr 28, 2015 10:45 pm (
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I love updates!! I love this story and Mel just breaks my heart in this story. I cant wait to read the next chapter to see where the story is headed. Why do I feel like there are a few more twists and turns coming?? Thanks for the update!
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 21, 2015 11:23 am (
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:(
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 21, 2015 05:36 am (
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Torture. There are no other words. Damnit.
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 21, 2015 05:29 am (
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I literally have butterflies in my stomach. Can't hit 'next' quick enough!
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 21, 2015 05:22 am (
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ooh. I sooo hope they 'bump' into Mel, but something tells me it isn't going to be that easy.
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 20, 2015 12:47 pm (
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Wade - you so had that coming, and it felt good to read you get your comeuppance!
Poor Mel, what a miserable existence. I really hope she's going to find a way back to New York, and soon!
Pumples (Signed) on Apr 20, 2015 12:44 pm (
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Awww I loved hearing about where the songs came from and I really hope if there is ever another *NSYNC album the guys will all share songwriting/singing/producing duties. It'd kick ass if they did.
I really loved this chapter, although it was sad to read in parts. Poor ol' Chrissy, what you girls are putting him through! tut tut.
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