themuse (Anonymous) on Oct 07, 2009 10:48 pm (
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Too bad JC couldn't be there to give her birthday sex. :(
JUST PLEASE DON'T LET HER HAVE GOTTEN IT FROM GAVIN!
Lovely cliffhanger..I'm waiting for the next chapter to see what's next for JC and Carly. Just don't break JC's heart. ;)
hp5010 (Signed) on Nov 25, 2008 10:39 pm (
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Hot!! but I don't have a good feeling about the missed phone call...
jacque_morneau (Signed) on Sep 12, 2008 10:38 pm (
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Happy to see an update, and happy to see she's finally opening up to him!
jacque_morneau (Signed) on Aug 18, 2008 07:47 pm (
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I just realized I never commented after the last chapter! Great work so far, Mel. I really love how patient JC is being with Carly. Can't wait to see what happens in Chicago!
And score one for Sara Bareilles!
kacavendam (Anonymous) on Aug 13, 2008 04:03 am (
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I like this story very much. Keep writhing
jacque_morneau (Signed) on Aug 04, 2008 10:10 pm (
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Nice transition chapter! Can't wait for the trip to LA :D
jacque_morneau (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 12:02 am (
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This chapter almost made me late for work today! I love it, Mel. I can't wait to see where this goes. I'm loving the way you write JC.
mozie (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2008 03:51 pm (
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you little devil, letting him take a peak. love it update soon!!!!!!
wittylyricst27 (Signed) on Jul 30, 2008 10:21 am (
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I'm really liking this. I cant wait to see where you take it. I love the batter between carly and jc.
azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 30, 2008 10:16 am (
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good update :) he's such a flirt!!
jacque_morneau (Signed) on Jul 28, 2008 07:18 pm (
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I've read both chapters so far and just realized I forgot to comment! I love it, can't wait for more :D
wittylyricst27 (Signed) on Jul 27, 2008 11:02 pm (
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my favorite new story.. Keep it up.