Emily Juliet (Anonymous) on Jun 29, 2014 11:01 pm (Chapter 12)
Damn. That's all I can say... and I'm a writer.


themister10 (Anonymous) on Dec 02, 2008 08:21 pm (Chapter 12)
phewwww go you! loved the chapter, keep up the good work!


SJane (Signed) on Nov 25, 2008 09:54 pm (Chapter 12)
what a hot little showwer scene i loved it lol

but they way you ended that chapter girl...you got me wondering


themuse (Anonymous) on Nov 25, 2008 07:38 pm (Chapter 12)

1) Great update as always! 2) Nice beach scene. 3) I'm glad Tyler talked to Carly. 4) It's nice and fun to see that things mused in our musing sessions make it to the real chapters. 5) It's about time they got a little naughty. Bravo! 6) I love JC/Carly!

Happy Thanksgiving, love! :)



champ (Signed) on Nov 25, 2008 05:38 pm (Chapter 12)

great story..keep the chapters coming

 





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