great update

Thank ya for two updates in two days!

Well...JC is depressing and Carly isn't giving him a chance. Gavin and Taryn can fall into puddles.

Please put JC on the next flight to Chicago and make Carly realize that even though he has faults, he's too precious to kick to the curb.

Good updates, lovie. Can't wait for more!

*sigh* 

okay, now I'm depressed like JC!  lol...You have a great way of pulling your reader's into your character's heads and letting them feel their emotions.  :)

As far as suggestions...um...if JC wants her, he's going to have to fight for her.  I want to say that he should fly to Chicago and prove that he's sorry.  Or is he sorry?  Maybe neither of them are really ready for this relationship and they need to give it a rest for a while?  I'm going to be really pissed off if this is the case, but as an author I understand that you have to write and stay true to your characters, even if it's not what you want them to do!