see, thats exactly the scene i waqnna try for my story! when i get to chapter6 or 7, can u help me? cuz its sorta the same thing - she leaves, gets hurt, boy comes to the rescue lol.
great chapter, u know i love this story. continue with the loveyness :)
Okay, they are just too cute! Although, I do have to point out a few things. I have had my appendix removed and it's not fun! You got the whole bathroom scene perfectly! You can't bend down for like a week or more and it sucks! lol...The only thing I had an issue with was the part where she laughed. You can't do that either without being in excrutiating pain those first couple days and him being almost on top of her with that kiss would have been painful too. And I think I ate only saltines for like three days...
All that aside...great chapter! I'm glad they've finally made up and I can't wait to see what happens next in their relationship. Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response:
Okay, I knew somene would get me on this.. lol I DID do research on this and have had friends that have had it done and I swear I tried to keep it on the track of what was medically correct. I did write this chapter really early in the AM though so there may have been parts where I fell off the *correct* path but I guess when I wrote stuff, I tried to see in in my head as being perfectly easy and gentle in regards to them laying together, JC coming over her, etc. Sigh... lol I'll take the no laughing to heart for future appendectomy stories ;)
Otherwise, I'm glad you liked it though :)
