oh also it could be from nerves with being around him. i know my stomach always kills me when i fight with my best friend. hopefully carlys ok & jc takes care of her
(sorry forgot to say that in my review).
great update
Author's Response: Thanks for revewing :)
Thank ya for two updates in two days!
Well...JC is depressing and Carly isn't giving him a chance. Gavin and Taryn can fall into puddles.
Please put JC on the next flight to Chicago and make Carly realize that even though he has faults, he's too precious to kick to the curb.
Good updates, lovie. Can't wait for more!
*sigh*
okay, now I'm depressed like JC! lol...You have a great way of pulling your reader's into your character's heads and letting them feel their emotions. :)
As far as suggestions...um...if JC wants her, he's going to have to fight for her. I want to say that he should fly to Chicago and prove that he's sorry. Or is he sorry? Maybe neither of them are really ready for this relationship and they need to give it a rest for a while? I'm going to be really pissed off if this is the case, but as an author I understand that you have to write and stay true to your characters, even if it's not what you want them to do!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your positive feedback and also for your suggestions :) Hopefully I'll get somewhere with these two.
Author's Response: You've gotta admit, they've had a pretty drama free relationship. lol You'll have to keep reading :)
yea! *claps hands* He came to surprise her! Awe...he's so cute!!! :)
Awesome update...and I'm glad to hear that there will hopefully be another one soon! I wanted to tell you that you have really grown as a writer through the course of this story. I've liked this story from chapter one, but each chapter gets better and better writing wise. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was thinking about this earlier, about how I contemplated "if" I could do a long story and I'm really glad I did it. It's given me time to space stuff out, think it over and take the time to perfect how I think and see things. I'm glad you like the story! Comments like these make the art of writing that much more worth it :)
