ltaylor03 (Signed) on Mar 17, 2010 01:22 am (
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her heart would shatter into a million pieces in an angry crash against the floor.-- Most descriptive line ever. I love it.
I think I like seeing his POV too. We don't really know what goes on inside that head of his. Keep it :)
treasure (Signed) on Mar 21, 2009 01:10 pm (
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I have to say I do like reading Justin's point of view even though he kinda makes me more mad at him. He left Sash a second time to come home and sleep next to that skeleton?
What an asshole! He was worried about Jessica hating him and Jessica shedding tears over him! What about all the tears Sash as shed and is still shedding? What about all of the times she was forced to eat shit because of him? At this point I don't know whether I want her with him or not!
What am I say? Of course I want him with Sash. I was just venting.
mzmillion (Signed) on Feb 14, 2009 09:54 pm (
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i love sash being the main pov, but a little tiny bit of justin is great too
classicbeauty (Signed) on Feb 10, 2009 06:13 pm (
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i love both, but what i would love more-is an update. like sometime soon. like in hour or two so i ca read it in the middle of class...shh just dont tell my teacher?
more soon pretty please, its getting good i need some sash-matt/jt lovin'!
dani
Coffee (Signed) on Feb 04, 2009 10:24 pm (
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I can't believe I didn't see that this was updated! Anyways, I like seeing things from both of their POV. You're doing a great job, keep it up.
Update sooner this time!!!
princess (Anonymous) on Feb 03, 2009 01:57 pm (
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I like the back and forth. that was good more soon
Laura123 (Signed) on Feb 02, 2009 06:02 am (
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justin is making a progress.
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Feb 02, 2009 01:38 am (
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I say a little of both! This was sooo good! I was wondering how long it was going to take for him to realize that he loved the shit out of Sash! awesome update! I can't wait for the next one!
Joy (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 06:33 pm (
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I like both POVs. I always used to wonder what was going on with him and Jess. I'm so anxious for him to break up with her. (in this story and in real life lmao j/k...maybe.)
alimera (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 02:19 pm (
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Dude, LOVED the Justin POV, keep it! I'm glad he's going to cut the cord with Jessica, but I think its going to be MIGHTY hard to win Sash back. Update again soon!
Shufflee (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 01:53 pm (
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A hug goodbye
yayyyyy, finally!!!!!!!!
Keediluv (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 03:41 am (
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So, it took him long enough but I'm glad he came to his senses. Sheesh! Love the update, never, ever disappointed. Thanks for the update.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 03:11 am (
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I love this so much. I hope that Justin dumps Jessica and gets his first ass on a plane. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.
Vikki (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 01:58 am (
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I liked Justin's POV ... I was like "whoa! what?" and then paused, trying to remember if you've done it before, lol!
it was cool to see what was going on in that Timberlake head of his. So to answer your question, "a little of both", depending on however you see it in the chapter.
as for this chapter... all I have to say is: About Damn Time! lol!
now he needs to get his ass back on a plane and get Sash! and that's if she even wants his ass back after dissin' her like that! hmph! :)
vec2004 (Signed) on Feb 01, 2009 01:48 am (
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That was excellent! You're very good at leaving us wanting more! Def stick with both pov. It makes me appreciate Justin more and what he's going thru.
