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SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 21, 2009 06:26 pm (Bedtime)
AWWWW!!!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on May 20, 2009 05:16 pm (Bedtime)
Oh, thank God, she isn't talking that crazy talk anymore. She's being reasonable and, dare I say it, sensible and no paranoid. I like this new calm, relaxed, easy going side of her. It's a nice and very welcome change. Loved the bedroom scene before kid brother interrupted. Good stuff. Please update soon.



princess (Anonymous) on May 20, 2009 04:08 pm (Bedtime)
aw. this chapter was so awesome.  You have to post more soon. I am so waiting for them to get o the really good part. 



vec2004 (Signed) on May 20, 2009 03:47 pm (Bedtime)
Finally! She's making sense. I love this story. Great update.



kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 20, 2009 11:51 am (Bedtime)
That sucks that they got interrupted. I love this and I'm glad she's starting to see that no matter what he does for a living he's still the same person she fell in love with. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS



god gave me style (Signed) on May 20, 2009 10:20 am (Bedtime)
hahaha, Steven interrupting the grown up time. This chapter was so sweet! And I'm glad that Sash is becoming comfortable with JT and his life.

Great update!



treasure (Signed) on May 20, 2009 09:54 am (Bedtime)

Finally she sees!  Thank God!  I thought I was gonna have to persoanlly counsel this chick lol!

Girl Sash was so nervous at the beginning I was nervous for her and then Justin started thinking about his cousin and her reaction I started to get a little worried. Everything seemed to work out though but then again like he said it might be different when things get really serious for them.

Joyce was a God send and I like the way you wrote her.  She was very warm and welcoming and I can imagine she's like that in real life. 

Girlfriend I have to say the ending was the best not just because they go a little intimate (and that was hot I might add) but because you could really feel and see how much their relationship has grown just by him bringing her to his home.

The part with steven at the end was classic and it really made the reader see how much of a real couple they are.  Justin was so sweet and I'm very pround of Sash for seeming like she's atleast open to trying now.  I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings. The fact that their taking one day at a time is great!

Wonderful chapater as always!






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