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SJane (Signed) on Jun 02, 2009 03:21 am (Nothing)
Oh snap I kinda want sash to kick rahcels ass lol so childish missy bad rachel

Author's Response: me too... i might just squeeze an asswhooping in one of these chapters, LOL thanks for reviewing!



SexualCoco (Signed) on Jun 02, 2009 03:03 am (Nothing)
I know I haven't reviewed in a long time, but I have been reading, I assure you! lol.

That was an intense chapter. I'm glad Sash didn't whoop Rachael's ass, but did stand up for herself because had that been me, it would have been on and poppin.' I have a feeling that Sash's ethnicity has something to do with why they didn't do dinner in Millington (just based off of how Justin described Rachael and her issues with color a few chapters ago). But I guess we'll see if I'm right. Great job girlie, LOVE this story and can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: LOL on and poppin' indeed, child! you ain't the only one. i'm trying to keep sash civilized, but a lot of y'all are asking for some ass whooping, LOL i need to get on that. as far as not reviewing - it's a-okay with me... you updating can definitely make up for that :) lol



band nerd (Signed) on Jun 02, 2009 02:12 am (Nothing)

i'd been reading this a few months ago and just caught up on the latest chapters.   goohoood! I really want sash to beat the shit out of racheal,  or at least slap her one good time.

I don't know why sash can't figure out that she's talking about her race. her race is the reason they met up in LA and not in TN.  Duh sash!!

 

Good job!



Author's Response: lol maybe sashy's in denial? and i'm glad you caught up and still like it! lol yeah, i think sash might get a slap in or something 'cause a lot of y'all are requesting a rumble, haha. thanks for reviewing!



monique32 (Signed) on Jun 02, 2009 01:03 am (Nothing)
Please tell me they r not grand wizards for the damn clan? update immediately.

Author's Response: LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! *dies laughing* why did i just see this review? HILARIOUS. wrong, but HILARIOUS, haha. don't worry sweetie, there are no white hooded ppl in my story, haha thank you so much for this review, lol



treasure (Signed) on Jun 02, 2009 12:57 am (Nothing)

Oh! Hell No! For some reason that's all I can say to that! On! Hell No! 

Rachel just ordered her self an ass kicking!

Add Girl! Add!



Author's Response: LOL i that expression says exactly how everybody feels, haha. rach needs her ass kicked really bad, but lets let the anger build, shall we? lol thanks for the review!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jun 02, 2009 12:35 am (Nothing)
Rach is a bitch. I wonder what the hell is going on that they won't tell her? Something tells me that when she finds out she's gonna run as fast as she can away. I love this, Please please please PMS

Author's Response: runaway :( oh, how you doubt thee! lol sash might not... who knows. rach is a little cunt nugget isn't she? i wonder how i'll deal with her... thanks for the review!



princess (Anonymous) on Jun 02, 2009 12:00 am (Nothing)
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH.  Can we say bankhead ass whoopin'?  I sorta think Rachel needs to get hit by a bus and the other parts of his family that may be bigots need to get hit by lightening or something.  Please please please please update soon this is getting more and more awesome by the minute and it was already some of the most awesomest shit ever

Author's Response: LOLLL yes and bus and some lightening... it's fanfic, i can make it happen when the time comes ;) lol thanks for the review!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on May 21, 2009 06:26 pm (Bedtime)
AWWWW!!!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on May 20, 2009 05:16 pm (Bedtime)
Oh, thank God, she isn't talking that crazy talk anymore. She's being reasonable and, dare I say it, sensible and no paranoid. I like this new calm, relaxed, easy going side of her. It's a nice and very welcome change. Loved the bedroom scene before kid brother interrupted. Good stuff. Please update soon.



d_simplicity (Signed) on May 20, 2009 04:58 pm (Cheating)
I'm so behind it's freaking ridiculous. lol. Trying to catch up. :)



princess (Anonymous) on May 20, 2009 04:08 pm (Bedtime)
aw. this chapter was so awesome.  You have to post more soon. I am so waiting for them to get o the really good part. 



vec2004 (Signed) on May 20, 2009 03:47 pm (Bedtime)
Finally! She's making sense. I love this story. Great update.



kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 20, 2009 11:51 am (Bedtime)
That sucks that they got interrupted. I love this and I'm glad she's starting to see that no matter what he does for a living he's still the same person she fell in love with. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS



god gave me style (Signed) on May 20, 2009 10:20 am (Bedtime)
hahaha, Steven interrupting the grown up time. This chapter was so sweet! And I'm glad that Sash is becoming comfortable with JT and his life.

Great update!



treasure (Signed) on May 20, 2009 09:54 am (Bedtime)

Finally she sees!  Thank God!  I thought I was gonna have to persoanlly counsel this chick lol!

Girl Sash was so nervous at the beginning I was nervous for her and then Justin started thinking about his cousin and her reaction I started to get a little worried. Everything seemed to work out though but then again like he said it might be different when things get really serious for them.

Joyce was a God send and I like the way you wrote her.  She was very warm and welcoming and I can imagine she's like that in real life. 

Girlfriend I have to say the ending was the best not just because they go a little intimate (and that was hot I might add) but because you could really feel and see how much their relationship has grown just by him bringing her to his home.

The part with steven at the end was classic and it really made the reader see how much of a real couple they are.  Justin was so sweet and I'm very pround of Sash for seeming like she's atleast open to trying now.  I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings. The fact that their taking one day at a time is great!

Wonderful chapater as always!






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