Comments For Do Over
treasure (Signed) on Mar 20, 2009 11:24 am (Snow)

lol!  That shit was so fuckin' funny, especially the last line of the chapter.

"He'd probably kill me in my sleep, claim he doesn't remember anything, and get away with it."

I loved it and can't wait to read more.




classicbeauty (Signed) on Mar 09, 2009 12:10 am (Big Mac)
awesome totally loved the chapter, you know my vote is for them together, i dont want a 'it dont think its going to work out, im scared and im letting you go kind of ending' no no no cause that aint going to work. lol dani



Joy (Signed) on Mar 07, 2009 09:44 pm (Big Mac)
She better decide to be with him. The end of this chapter was so sweet and cute.



Keediluv (Signed) on Mar 07, 2009 09:35 pm (Big Mac)

She should just rape (not in the literal sense ppl)his ass and get that shit over with.  You know, you have all that sexy ass piece of man all up on you...I know I couldn't resist.  You had me going in the beginning of the chapter but pulled me back at the end.  Per usual, amazing!

Ki




princess (Anonymous) on Mar 07, 2009 05:06 pm (Big Mac)
AAAAWWWWW.  That was pure unadulterated awesomeness. More soon please



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 07, 2009 04:12 pm (Big Mac)
I hope that she puts her fears aside and does what will make them both happy, there is no point in them both being miserable. I love this, PMS



Shufflee (Signed) on Mar 07, 2009 12:59 pm (Big Mac)
yayyyyyyyy for big mac!!!!!!!



alimera (Signed) on Mar 07, 2009 12:12 pm (Big Mac)
Well, I'm glad they talked and Sash let Justin tell her everything on his mind and she didn't reject his offer...can't wait to read what happens next!



MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 07, 2009 12:04 pm (Big Mac)

"...and he smoothed his hands over my frump face." Do you hang out on JJB? lol.

Anyway, great chapter. She's FINALLY giving him a chance. FINALLY! *sigh of relief* Please update soon.




alimera (Signed) on Feb 28, 2009 03:48 pm (Taste)
Well, good for Justin! Kudos to him. And Sash better stop thinking of him as an easy lay, because he obviously does want something more serious than that with her. Update again soon!



princess (Anonymous) on Feb 27, 2009 01:43 pm (Taste)

aaaawwweeesssooommmee.  more soon please




SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 26, 2009 08:02 pm (Taste)
Oooh...she is making me mad! GRRR!



god gave me style (Signed) on Feb 25, 2009 08:55 pm (Taste)
That was a little mean but i think i'm glad that Justin stopped it. She's still really mad and sex would only make things worse. I think Justin loves her enough to stick it through until she's finished being mad and hating him. At least, I hope he does, lol

Great update :)



cagf5000 (Signed) on Feb 25, 2009 12:47 pm (Taste)

I am so into this story! PMS Please!!:)




Vikki (Signed) on Feb 25, 2009 10:08 am (Taste)

OMGIHATEYOU!!!

ok first... LOL at his smug little ass in the kitchen! oh i loved it! I for one, would've slapped him, but thats just cause I love to prove people wrong, lol!

but then OMG ... "I love you, baby. All I see is you...All I need is you..." ... ahhhhhh! you're killing me girl! you're killing me!

I was like... YEAH! He's gonna break down her stupid little wall and she's gonna see that he's there! he's here! for her! because he loves her and that's what matters and no matter what happens... its love baby! and love makes everything better! and then yes... hot monkey sex upstairs for all to enjoy!

but no! you couldn't give us that! you meanie! no... we get a "taste". a fucking taste! no! no! no! no! I want the whole god damn meal! not a fucking taste! lol!

*sigh*

but you know what? you kinda made up for it with my favorite lines ever....

"Or I'll come to the conclusion that you're gay," I chided, pushing him out of my way so that I could get to my door.

"I got you off before either of us were completely naked. I think that speaks for itself." Touche.

LMAO! oh man... I love those two crazy kids.

you need to post more... soon missy! *taps foot impatiently*






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