Comments For StarGirl
jrtimberyes (Signed) on Feb 11, 2011 09:38 pm (The Beginning)

that was hilarious! i love it! i love all your stories who am i kidding?

 ok, i'm gonna finish reading this =)



mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 04:39 pm (The Beginning)
Ok now I really can't wait for more. I loved the first chapter and now that you explained a little more, I'm interested more now...hehehe

Author's Response: haha thank you, I just posted more :)


mzmillion (Signed) on Sep 15, 2008 01:40 pm (The Beginning)

You know how I love your stories and this one is good, concept is good, but its like it moved so damn fast, from him jumping to her to them to sex all in one chapter and she is supposed to be a badass but I get 'girly vibes' from her, and he is supposed to be 'depressed' but it seemed like a momentary thing. I love it but I would LOVE to see them get more into their supposed characters, oh and more details.

You know I hate the..."and they had sex" thing.....

 

but give me more and more and more.....and I hope she is a hott gothic chick....hehehe.

If you really love me, you'll give me some Girl Friday soon too.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I know it moved a little fast but it's supposed to. Justin's really unstable and so is Ashlee, as you'll find out later on. But they did just meet and it's from his POV so there will be more details as the story progresses. She is kind of a badass but she has a girly side too. But Justin's depressed to some extent and craving attention from a female but I think more importantly he's looking for an escape. And she's that for him right now. But seriously, thanks so much for letting me know what you're thinking. I hope that cleared some of it up, if not let me know :)

And as for Girl Friday... I'M TRYING haha I have such a serious case of writers block and it's pissing me off. You have no idea. lol  



LuLu (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 06:57 pm (The Beginning)
Wow I really like this. Even though Ashlee and Justin have a crazy, maybe even a little dysfunctional relationship already - I like it and I think they're really cute together. She's obviously exactly what Justin needs, hopefully when the outside world inevitable intrudes they'll stay strong together.

Can't wait to see what's next for these two. More soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you like Ashlee, but I'm interested to find out how you feel about her after the next chapter. Let me know! :) Thanks a lot!


Marissa (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 06:31 pm (The Beginning)
I like this girl! lol...she's so bad ass and hey, she just saved Justin's life so that makes her even better in my book ;-) Keep it up (and same goes for Girl Friday and Verdant)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this, AND all my other stuff :)


a_nonymous (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 04:09 pm (The Beginning)
INTERESTING!

Author's Response: hmm thanks! :)


cagf5000 (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 03:19 pm (The Beginning)
I LOVE IT!!! I don't think you cpuld write a bad story if you tried! awesome job...can't wait for more<3

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I have lots of bad stuff though, don't worry haha. 


greg (Anonymous) on Sep 14, 2008 03:02 pm (The Beginning)
GREAT STORY IN THE MAKING VERY SEXY AND FUNNY

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)


Timberlake (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 08:26 am (The Beginning)
stargirl reminds me of Ellen Page for some reason, haha. me likey =]

Author's Response: lol yeah, I guess she's kind of like her. Thanks so much for reading!


sarah1988 (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 07:54 am (The Beginning)

mwahahhahahaha! that's great! awesome, nice refreshing! and all the way bitching!!!

 

update soon. :D 



Author's Response: haha Thank you, I'm glad you're digging it :)


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 12:20 am (The Beginning)
LOL She's great. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, StarGirl is quite the character haha


SJane (Signed) on Sep 14, 2008 12:12 am (The Beginning)
this is so cite yet...different but a good differnt lol

Author's Response: haha thank you!


MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 13, 2008 11:52 pm (The Beginning)
I love it, love it, love it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! :)


Karlita (Signed) on Sep 13, 2008 11:04 pm (The Beginning)
I'm intrigued.  More please!  :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I hope I can hold onto that haha thanks for the review!


MissM69 (Signed) on Sep 13, 2008 10:56 pm (The Beginning)
Liking this for sure can't wait for the next update :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much!




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