Niffer (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 10:11 pm (Chapter 3)
Glad you updated!  Great chapter.  Love how mama Lynn won't let anyone mess with her son!  Yay it would be good if you added a biker glossary at the end of the chapters.  Please update again soon!  Can't wait.

Author's Response: Mama Lynn is so protective of her son it's insane! I'll add the biker glossary...on certain words. I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



LuLu (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 07:40 pm (Chapter 3)
I really like this story. It reminds me of Sons of Anarchy. Good job! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: OMG I love Sons of Anarchy and it was my inspiration but with a few significant variations....especially adding Shift. I'm so glad you caught the comparison because that's like a major compliment. Thanks for reading and reviewing.



d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 04:14 pm (Chapter 3)

Well, you did say you loved the bikers so I'm not surprised I'm reading about another biker justin. Teheheh...and! I love it! Shift and JT are like badasses. Maybe their modern day Bonnie and Clyde? I feel sorry for Alyssa though. i know she did wrong to trick Justin to be with her but he should just leave her so she can have some type of life of her own without having to worry about him. he doesn't love her...he loves Shift clearly. She just needs rehab and a life or something. Poor girl. Or he should at least try to take care of her some.

On a side note! DAMN MAMA LYNN IS A BADASS HERSELF! Yow she don't play...dang. It's clear she'd do anything she has to do to protect her son. She's like a mafia mom or something. hahaha.

...can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Yeah I had so much inspiration. I was watching Sons of Anarchy and I was like ohhh I can totally see Justin like that. And then I went on a Harley Toy Drive with my dad so that added inspiration too. And the whole WR campaign added to Justin being an outlaw! I want you to feel sorry for Alyssa. It's okay to like both Shift and Alyssa because I like them both too.

I love love love Mama Lynn! Especially her protecting Justin like crazy. We'll see what her role is...it's been pretty big but I think now it's Shift's and Justin's time.




Gigi (Signed) on Sep 29, 2008 03:52 pm (Chapter 3)
Apparentley you don't mess with mama!

Author's Response: Never mess with Mama Lynn! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!





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