Unknown (Anonymous) on Oct 15, 2008 03:16 pm (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Author's Response: Again I'm sorry that you felt that way the reason I deleted it was because I dedicated a whole letter to your review. I actually meant to post it in the chapter that I posted apologizing but I didn't feel it was necessary in the end because I felt that I addressed it just fine. But to please you I'll leave this review on if that makes you happy. Again I will be more than happy to give the show it's props I've actually mentioned numerous times in my reviews due to the fact that some of my readers do watch the show and those that don't, I felt should know about the show.
What was so bad about me mentioning the lack of credit to "Sons Of Anarchy" for you to delete my review? Its true! You have complete scenes that are almost identical! It could even turn off some readers who know the show and think your just trying to get away with claiming the idea as your own. It aint gunna kill you to mentioned it as "inspiration" or whatever in the end notes! That's all I'm saying!
I made it to chapter 5 by the way and its good. But just give FX and the show creators their props - damn!
Author's Response: Again I'm sorry that you felt that way the reason I deleted it was because I dedicated a whole letter to your review. I actually meant to post it in the chapter that I posted apologizing but I didn't feel it was necessary in the end because I felt that I addressed it just fine. But to please you I'll leave this review on if that makes you happy. Again I will be more than happy to give the show it's props I've actually mentioned numerous times in my reviews due to the fact that some of my readers do watch the show and those that don't, I felt should know about the show.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 02:06 pm (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Wow. I kinda thought she was up to no good, but I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. I love shift and Justin together, they are great. I really like this and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.
Author's Response: Teak is just trying to do her job right now....we'll see how involved she gets. Shift and JT are great together but I wrote them to be good together. I'm glad you like it and we'll see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Teak is just trying to do her job right now....we'll see how involved she gets. Shift and JT are great together but I wrote them to be good together. I'm glad you like it and we'll see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SJane (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 01:53 am (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Where have you been hiding this little piece of heaven from me lol dunno how i missed it but i love it already girl....u know i love your stuff
and there ain't nothing better than bad boy justin...i'm imagining 2002 justin with his cocky demeaner mmmmmm lol
Author's Response: I wasn't hiding it...I swear! lol I was seriously waiting for your comment Stacey! lol Awww I'm so glad you like my stuff...and I LOVE bad boy Justin! I was thinking 2002 justin especially when he did that seventeen spread on his motorcyle! MMMMMM definitely lol
and there ain't nothing better than bad boy justin...i'm imagining 2002 justin with his cocky demeaner mmmmmm lol
Author's Response: I wasn't hiding it...I swear! lol I was seriously waiting for your comment Stacey! lol Awww I'm so glad you like my stuff...and I LOVE bad boy Justin! I was thinking 2002 justin especially when he did that seventeen spread on his motorcyle! MMMMMM definitely lol
Niffer (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 12:40 am (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Loved the update. She went into the military? That kicks ass! Bet no one wants to mess with her! Hope the undercover gets sniffed out quickly and doesn't cause any problems. More pretty please, with a cherry on top! LOL!!!!
Author's Response: Awww thanks I thought the pace of this update was a little slow but I had to introduce Teak. Yeah Shift went to the military...we'll see soon exactly what she did there. I don't see Teak leaving the story soon....we'll see how involved she chooses to get with the club. I'll update asap....lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Awww thanks I thought the pace of this update was a little slow but I had to introduce Teak. Yeah Shift went to the military...we'll see soon exactly what she did there. I don't see Teak leaving the story soon....we'll see how involved she chooses to get with the club. I'll update asap....lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Gigi (Signed) on Sep 30, 2008 07:54 pm (A good Old Lady can make or break a club...)
Gotta say I love this story! I tried writing one like this and it sucked.
Author's Response: Awww I'm sure it wouldn't have sucked.....sometimes it's hard but I think I have it easy because if I get stumped I can go to the clubhouse that my dad belongs to and I'm surrounded by Harleys and I get some inspiration by listening to the members talk even if they aren't gunrunning and drug smuggling lol I'm really glad that you love this story though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Awww I'm sure it wouldn't have sucked.....sometimes it's hard but I think I have it easy because if I get stumped I can go to the clubhouse that my dad belongs to and I'm surrounded by Harleys and I get some inspiration by listening to the members talk even if they aren't gunrunning and drug smuggling lol I'm really glad that you love this story though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
