camshazam (Signed) on Jun 28, 2010 11:59 pm (He was born for this.)

I'm really enjoying this story - I think it's funny that I'm reading this right after watching a NatGeo special about 1%er OMCs.  coincidence?

a little continuity error: I think in the last chapter, it said that JT and Shift had shared a room since they were both 9?  And here we learn that they're 3 years apart in age. 



Author's Response:

Oh I love that. I've been watching Gangland on the History channel and they had the Warlocks on and they talked about 1%ers too! 

Hmm...I could have sworn it said that Justin had been sleeping in her room since he was nine but nothing about Shift being nine too. I don't know I would have to reread it. I've forgotten! lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 



Niffer (Signed) on Oct 02, 2008 11:03 am (He was born for this.)
Great update!  I knew something had happened between Lyle and Shift.  He's lucky that he wasn't killed!  Sneaky Teak is going to get it.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see about Teak...I wonder how come everyone hates her? lol Yeah LJ is lucky that Justin didn't kill him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 11:43 pm (He was born for this.)
I would love love love for someone to catch teak. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. I love this, PMS.

Author's Response: We'll see when they catch her...or if they ever catch her. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


LuLu (Signed) on Oct 01, 2008 11:23 pm (He was born for this.)
Ok so Justin, Shift and company aren't eaxctly the "good guys" but this Teak has got to go. She needs to get caught fast and tossed out before she really sees or hears something incriminating and ruins everything.

I bet that confrontation between Justin and Shift after the LJ incident was explosive.

Great chappie!

Author's Response:

Yeah they're not so good but Teak is playing her own hand here so.....We'll see if she gets caught or if she gets caught up in the Wolf Pack lifestyle. I'm sure it was very explosive but there's more on that in this update that I just did. Thanks for reading and reviewing!





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