Niffer (Signed) on Oct 21, 2008 01:44 am (Paul had sealed his fate....)
Wow!  Last chapter I was shocked!  But now it makes sense.  Stupid Paul had to be greedy.  What did he think he would live forever??? 

Author's Response: Stupid Paul man! He ruins it for everyone! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!


SJane (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 06:29 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)
Hey girl this chapter explains so much now lol last chapter I was like hmmm unexpected and then the next its like oooohhh lol
The buisness trip was alright adelaide was nice but I was stuck in a boardroom for like 2 days so now exploring for me. How was the bike road trip thingo u went on?

Author's Response: Yeah this chapter needed to be written because I left everyone going "HUH?" The run was really fun we raised 192,356 dollars for the children's hospitals in the area and lots of people donated toys too for the christmas toy drive. There was a lot of cute guys but no biker!J lol


LuLu (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 06:06 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)
Awesome twist girl. First off, all this time I thought Paul was Justin's real father. Now that I know he wasn't and that he sold Justin and Shift out - put so many members and especially Kale in danger - for such selfish reasons, well....*shrugging my shoulders* He got what he deserved. I'm just happy Lynn had nothing to do with it cause that would have been an even worse betrayal.

Great update! I can't wait for the next! Time for Justin and Shift to reign supreme!

Author's Response: YAY for the twist lol! No I thought I would make Randall Justin's real father you know since he is...he'll be popping up later though. We'll see about Lynn...I'm still on the fence with her.


Vikki (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 03:58 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)

“He said that Paul hired him to kill Justin and I and agreed to pay him in the AK47s that we have in the warehouse. Then when Paul found out that Dirk wanted the code to the warehouse he refused to tell him and refused to pay him. So Dirk had his men shoot up the clubhouse.”

Hot damn! I was thinking about this after I read the last chapter and had a hunch....but DAMN I do NOT feel bad for Paul anymore, LOL!



Author's Response:

You're like a mind reader!!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 20, 2008 03:14 pm (Paul had sealed his fate....)
WOW. Now I understand why Justin did what he did. I love this and I cant' wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: I know! We'll see what happens next! Thanks for reading and reviewing!




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